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BabyMimi
Author of 11 Stories
Rated: K - English - Reviews: 48 - Published: 02-19-02 - id:613976
REQUISTION TO PROFIT FROM NAPOLEON

I worked really hard on this story. I tried to write like a professional writer and put lots and lots of description so you can really see the story. I feel really proud of the story. It turned out really nice and like poetry's flow. But I am angry that everyone was so mean to Dawn in the house episode. So I decided that Dawn should have niceness at her.

Spike is crying so badly because Spike is not knowing if Buffy loves him. "I wish Buffy loved me! I love her so badly!" Buffy is really mean to Spike because Buffy hits Spike with Buffy's hands and yells at Spike really loudly. But Buffy's saying "Oh I am too cool I am so cool. Spike would never stop loving me." And then Buffy is mean to Dawn also because Dawn is cool and Buffy is so mean. And sometimes Buffy is mean to Willow. Buffy yelled at Willow after Willow was hurt because Willow is a magic addicted woman. Magic flows from Willow like a volcano.
Dawn is walking to school and Dawn sees Spike crouched in the bushes like a baby crying and trembling badly. "Oh Spike are you okay!" Dawn hisses. Dawn runs forward. Dawn's hair is multiple sheets of brown bark overlapping the silky waves of amber green liquid of Dawns eyes under the sparkling yellow orb of decadent sunlight muttering upon the sweet spring ground. "No!" Spike likens with Spike's sad pretty eyes. Spike's eyes look like two yellow balls of blue fire dancing amidst the flowering tapestry of long sky overflowing the mist of Sunnydale with their luminescent gray sheens of silk as they look like volcanos.
"I hate how mean Buffy is." Dawn yammers and suddenly Spike realized he is in love with Dawn. "I love you Dawn!" Dawn gets scared and a pretty red lava of a volcano blush spreads over Dawn's breathtakingly beautiful face. Dawn turns and runs away.
Xander saw Dawn and said "I love you" just this morning so Dawn is scared that everyone loves Dawn. Dawn is so pretty that it is weird all these boys love Buffy and not Dawn. Dawn is like the spring of summer singing overhead in a blue fair.
"Oh well I guess I have to live with the fact that everyone is in love with me this badly." Dawn guaranteed. So Dawn chooses Spike and they marry.

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