Author: crcc1014 PM
Jacob and Edward have a competition to see who can make their woman scream the loudest. See what happens in the end. One-shot, rated M for language and LEMONS. Enjoy.Rated: Fiction M - English - Humor/Drama - Jacob & Edward - Words: 1,348 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 6 - Published: 07-20-10 - Status: Complete - id: 6161040
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Hey guys, thanks for reviewing Torture, I appreciate it :) And now I have written another one-shot that I hope you will like. It's in Jacob and Edward's point of views. Enjoy!
Disclaimer: You know the drill.
"I don't know about you," I said to Nessie as we entered my room of the Cullen house. "But I thought that movie was the shit." I smiled widely.
Ness rolled her eyes at me. "Yeah just because it had naked women in it," She snorted, taking her jacket and shoes off.
"Oh please there is only one woman I want to see naked." I smirked, appraising her with my eyes.
She blushed furiously at my comment and went to go stand in front of the mirror, taking off her jewelry.
"In fact," I said as I came up from behind her, wrapping my arms around her torso. "That movie was such a huge turn on that it left me with the hugest boner of my life." I said, pressing my erection against the small of her back. She gasped and met my eyes through the mirror. Then slowly she turned in my arms to face me. Her lips parted as she stared at mine hungrily. I took that as an okay-to-move-forward gesture.
I watched as Bella faced my music collection, running her hand over the cases gently. We were back in my old room in the main house for a bit. The king sized bed was still in its place. I sat on it as I gazed at my mate lovingly.
"Do you miss it?" I ask her suddenly.
She turns to me, "Miss what?"
"Being human." I said simply.
She looked at me thoughtfully. "Not really, I gained more when I joined this life. I have a terrific husband, and a daughter that I adore." She said as she sat on my lap, wrapping her arms around my neck.
I kissed her softly. "Speaking of our daughter, where is she?" I ask curiously.
"Off with Jacob I presume." She says with a shrug.
I growl as I hear Jacob's thoughts from the room next door, confirming that Bella was right.
I miraculously managed to undress both of us at the same time, because I'm just that good. First I had her up against the wall; we dried humped until I could smell her sweet arousal; it was intoxicating. I then had her straddle my lap so I could kiss every inch of her body tenderly.
"Do you want to come Nessie?" I ask, nuzzling her neck.
"Yes Jacob!" She said frantically, grasping my shoulders.
My answering smile is wicked.
Jacob's thoughts and images were loud and clear. Fuck Nessie, Fuck Nessie, Fuck, Fuck, Fuck, Fuck, Fuck!
I griped the iron bar at the foot of the bed, breaking it in two. Bella raised an eyebrow at me. "What's that matter?" She asked.
I couldn't answer. My daughter was being fucked by a fucking dog. God help me for having a mature adult of a daughter. How dare Jacob do this when he knows were right next door. How dare he even do it at all, the bastard. With determination set in my jaw, I will show him what it means to mess with a protective vampire father. And I will do it the one way I know that will drive him crazy: competition.
I teased the spot between her legs, making her whimper for my touch. I finally gave in and inserted two fingers, making her gasp with pleasure. I put in three and her hips rocked to my steady rhythm. Right before she climaxed I pulled my hand away, making her long for me even more. Somewhere on the other side of the wall I heard a gasp, rip, moan and... smack?
I ignored it and lined myself up at her entrance. Then out of know where there was a loud bang against the wall, making us both jump.
"What the fuck was that?" Nessie asked, leaning up with her elbow.
"I don't know..." I said, knitting my eyebrows together.
"Oh god Edward" Said a muffled voice from behind the wall.
"Oh that's Bella." I said with realization.
"Thank you captain obvious- HOLY SHIT my parents are having sex!" She practically shouted when she finally realized it too.
I looked at her with confusion but she just gaped at the wall, horror stricken. They must have heard us doing it, otherwise how- Oh. Oh. Damn Edward to hell. He's doing this on purpose, wanting to make me feel challenged. Fuck... it worked. Well two can play that game.
I then slammed into Ness without warning, making her scream out my name.
"Jacob-" She gasped before I pounded into her again, again and again.
"Oh my god, Jacob!" She screamed.
I then heard a similar scream from next door, "Holy shit, Edward!" followed by a thump and a bang. I quickened my pace, setting Nessie over the edge.
Hearing the screams from next door I attacked Bella's neck, grazing my teeth over it, making her writhe in pain and pleasure. I roamed my hands over body, pausing to kneed her breasts.
"Edward please, I need to feel you." Bella begged from under me.
We were both naked and ready. Sense we are vampires, sex is always rough and fast. I then thrust inside her and quickly keep a pace.
"Yes god yes..." Bella moaned, rocking her hips with mine. I went harder and she screamed. Somewhere on the other side Jacob was making Renesme do the same. I'm going to kill him later, that son of a bitch. I slammed into Bella then, making her lose control. I rode her out until she hit her breaking point.
I put one of Nessie's legs over my shoulder so I could have my way with her. I could hear Bella's screams as they matched with Renesme's. Fuck I'm so close
I went at her faster then I ever have before, making it almost unbearable for Ness. She's probably enduring the most extreme orgasm of her life.
She squirmed and thrashed under me as she came close, clawing at the flesh of my back.
"Jacob!" She shrieked, throwing her head from side to side. I had the stupidest grin on my face because I knew I was winning, making my girl scream the loudest. I've never felt so much pride. Finally she broke through.
"JACOB!" She screamed frantically, one last time before collapsing onto the bed, breathing heavily. I then lifted myself off of her, pleased with myself. Of course Nessie is oblivious to mine and Edward's secret competition.
After a while Ness and I got dressed. As we opened the door to leave, Edward's bedroom door also opened at the same time. Bella and Renesme froze as they stared at each other with shocked expressions while Edward and I glared at each other. They too were also dressed. After a few moments Bella glanced between me and Edward, as well as Nessie, with confusion. Then slowly there expressions hardened with anger and realization. Edward and mines expressions were wary as we stared at our women. We all looked at each other then with mixed emotions.
They had figured it out. Fuck.
Renesme and Bella both gasped loudly as they stared at us. Without warning they both smacked us across the face. Hard.
They both humphed and walked away, arm in arm. Edward and I just stared at each other with a hand on our cheek.
"Well that went well." I said bitterly.
Edward chuckled and sighed. "I'll buy you a beer."
I too laughed. "And I'll hunt you a mountain lion."
He walked up to me and smacked me on the back then smirked, "Good man."
So what do you think of my second one-shot? Review and let me know plz! :)