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Tears of Eternity
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David Orson PM
A short poem inspired by the beautiful film, The Fountain, directed by Darren Aronofsky, and a fellow poet prolixius5 whose writing I encountered a mere thirty minutes ago.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Izzi & Tommy Creo - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 08-04-10 - Status: Complete - id: 6205868
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She lays in front of me, all knowing smile and vibrant eyes, soon to be a haunting absentee,

I feel the pull of totality, the temptation of destiny, the physics of gravity, the foresight of divinity,

An eternity between you and me, soon to be nothing more than a distant memory, one tear brings me near, breaking down all notions of fear, fear of mortality,

Inadvertently I created an eternity between me and you, forgetting that which I am long overdue, forgive me now as I let go of faithless tears…

and observe as eternity transforms inwardly.

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