Author: Cabin16 - Nemesis PM
Kelsey, now back into a life of normalcy, gets sucked back into the world of two tiger-changing guys and is in desperate need of protection from all that is evil. Can they be able to protect her? Possibly a little OOC.Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Kelsey H. & Kishan - Chapters: 9 - Words: 5,829 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 08-17-12 - Published: 04-29-11 - id: 6950716
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Okay, I'm stepping into something new, something that I'll probably won't do again. What is that you ask? Writing a love story, that is what. Anyways, this is based off the book Tiger's Curse, which I finished this past weekend. I'll let you guys start reading. Don't forget to review. I know this isn't one of my best writing, so I need your help to improve it. It's all I'm asking.
I See An Old Friend From India
It's been three depressing months since I left India and you-know-who. There hasn't been a single day that something - even the littlest thing ever - has reminded me of Ren. Now that I'm at WOU, I'm stuffing myself into my studies. It was starting to work fine when one day turned my life upside down - again.
I was walking from class, when a mysterious man off in the distance was watching me. I looked around to make sure if it was me he was looking at, then I decided to get away as fast as possible. I tried to forget about it, but this act continued on for the rest of the week. When the week came to an end, I decided to confront him. However, someone stepped into my path and I knew who it was.
"Kishan? What are you doing here?" I asked him.
He smiled and responded, "What? No hello? No how-are-you? How-you've-been?" I opened my mouth to explain, but he cut me off. "But since you asked, I just came to tell you something."
"What's wrong? Is everything okay? Did Mr. Kadam figure out the second clue?" I asked. Then a terrible thought came to mind. "Is Ren okay?"
Kishan's expression changed into something like concern. "We believe that Lokesh knows where you are. We need you to come back." At that moment, my friend - Dave - approached us.
"Hey, Kelsey, whose your friend?" he asked.
"Dave, this is my friends from India, Kishan. Kishan, this is Dave." I responded.
Dave looked at Kishan suspiciously. "Is he the one...?"
"No, he isn't." I quickly interrupted. Kishan's eyes went from me to Dave and then back to me. He suddenly stayed still, as if smelling the air. At the same time, Dave was going on about this club that a couple of friends were planning to go later today.
"Kelsey, we have to go." Kishan said looking around casually.
"Go? Go where?" asked Dave.
"I'm sorry, Dave, but we have to go." I said, Kishan starting to walk towards to parking lot.
"So, wait. I'll see you tomorrow?" he asked me.
I turned around to see Kishan not far off waiting for me, than back at Dave. "Uh, yeah. See you tomorrow." I told him, knowing that I will be leaving - again.
So there you go, chapter 1. Remember, I know it isn't AS great that it could be. It was something I came up with in a matter of days (meaning two days in just coming up eith the plot-line and another two or three days on how I'm going to write it and actually writing it). So, help me make this story better for you guys to read. By that, I also mean giving me suggestions on what to write.
I'm somewhat desperate, as you can see. This is the part where you click review this chapter and give me your opinions. :)