This is Part II, I hope everyone like it. Sorry it took so long to post the
continuation.
Jessica
Eddie: we just have a few questions for you, that's all, nothing to worry
about.
Scene Fifteen: Cross the street
Detective Domar points out Jc. Jc looks over. Domar tells JC to come over.
Jc walks over
Scene Sixteen: Rock's house
Eddie: Jc man where you going.
JC: I be right back
Eddie walks in side. Cut to Eddie sitting on the sofa. Dany holds her
daughter in her arms.
Dany: As you could tell I am very busy so if you could keep this short
Eddie: Don't worry I plan to. Do you have any idea why someone would want
to kill your husband
Dany: I don't know, Dwayne was a very nice guy. He was liked by every body.
Eddie: Apparently someone hated him enough to have him killed. Now who
would do that
Dany: I don't know! Why are you here?
Eddie: I am here to solve a murder. Why are you hear
Dany: I live here.
Eddie: Why you yelling
Dany: What are you trying to say
Eddie: I think you killed Rock.
Dany: I was with him at the time of the murder. He saved my life
Eddie: Did he or was that a cover up
Dany: I have no reason to do that
Eddie: Dwayne was rich. All his money would go to you.
Dany: I want you to leave.
Eddie: I am not going anywhere until I get answers
Dany sits down. Fade to cross the street
Scene Seventeen: Cross the street
Zoom in on Jc shocked by Rock's appearance
JC: I thought you were dead
Rock: I knew my wife was trying to kill me. I protected my self. I want her
to pay for trying to kill me. I loved Dany with all my heart. I can't
believe she would do something like that.
JC: Do you know why she would do that
Rock: We were having problems. She thought I was having an affair, but I
loved her too much.
JC: What do you want from me
Rock: I know Dany. If she sees that there is no way out she will come on to
one of you. I believe she will try to sweet talk that other detective so he
would believe her.
JC: Trust me Eddie won't fall for it. He is in a relationship.
Rock: Dany has skills. That's how she got me.
JC: Where do I come in.
Detective Domar: I want you to ware a wire. Try to get a confession of out
her.
JC: No, that won't work. If you want the truth have Dwayne make an
appearance. Get her to confess.
Rock: What is she try to kill me herself.
Detective Domar: You could ware a wire and a vest.
Rock: I like where you are going with this.
JC: Lets do it then.
Fade to Commercial
Commercial
Scene Eighteen: Natalies
Zoom in on Nina crying. Cooper gives her a hug to consul her.
Cooper: Tell Eddie. He will understand.
Nina: What is he leave me and my baby
Cooper: Tell him.
Nina picks her head. Cooper looks in her eyes and wipe away her tears.
Camera fade to Torres Residence.
Scene Nineteen: Torres Residence
Fade to G and Melissa on the sofa watching the X Files. G puts his arm
around Melissa. She moves closer to G.
Melissa: I like you G
G: I like you too
They smile at each other
Melissa: what do you want to do
G: We could kiss
Melissa: I'd like that
G and Melissa move ever closer together. G puts his lips on Melissa. They
kiss. Melissa lays on the sofa. G gets on top of Melissa and they kiss ever
more. Melissa pushes him off her.
Melissa: We can't
G: Why not
Melissa: Cause I want to wait
G smiles
G: I understand, we could just kiss
Melissa: I'd like that better
They kiss, fade to Rock's residence
Scene Twenty: Rock's house
Cut to Dan putting her hand over Eddie's face. She gets close to him. Dany
kisses Eddie. Cut to Dwayne walking in the house. Zoom in on The Rock's
face. Eddie looks at the Rock as if he sees a ghost. He pushes Dany away.
Dany covers her mouth.
Rock: Dany
Dany: Dwayne I-I thought you were dead
Eddie: Mr. Johnson
Dany: He-he came on to me honey, I am sorry
Eddie: Maybe I should leave you to alone
Rock: Your partner is waiting for you in a van across the street
[Eddie exit]
Dany opens her arms.
Dany: Aren't you gonna give your wife a hug
Rock: Where is my daughter
Dany: In her room sleep
Rock: Why Dany
Dany: Why what. What are you talking about
Rock: I loved you. You were my world. I did everything to provide you love.
I did everything for you. I would kill for you. You meant the world to me.
You, me, and Samone. We had our own little family. Why would you want to
ruin that.
Dany begins to cry
Dany: I didn't want to, but when I seen you kiss that girl I-I lost that
Rock: Come here
Dany slowly walks in Rocks arms
Rock: Look at me, she doesn't mean anything to me. It was a friend kiss.
Nothing more, nothing less.
Dany: I'm glad you're hear. I never will try to kill you again
Rock: But you did try to kill me
Dany: Yeah baby but you have to believe that I am truly sorry. I love you
Rock: And I love you
Dany: But
Rock: I have to do what I have to do. Come get her detectives
Danies eyes widen. Cut to Eddie, JC, and Detective Domar walking their
house. Eddie pulls out his handcuffs. He puts them on Dany.
Eddie: Mrs. Johnson you have the right to remain silent anything you say
and do will be held against you in the court of law.
Dany: Dwayne no
JC: I am sorry man
Eddie: You have the right for an attorney. IF you cannot afford one, one
will be provided for you by the courts.
Dany: Dwayne no!
Camera fade off as Eddie brings Dany out to the cop car.
Camera fade off to commercial
Commercial
Scene Twenty One: 4th Precinct
Cut to Eddie and JC sitting in Cooper's office
Cooper: Detectives you did wonderful on this case
Eddie: It's just messed that Dany tried to kill Dwayne
JC: What will happen to her
Eddie: Since The Rock wasn't killed they will give her two years for
attempted murder.
Cooper: I say she deserves it
JC: That's kinda harsh don't ya think
Cooper: Why don't you take the rest of the week off. I know JC you have
your son and Eddie, Nina needs to talk to you.
Eddie: What about
Cooper: I think it will be better if she tells you
Eddie: I guess I will head home
[Eddie and JC exit]
Eddie walks to his desk to get his jacket
JC: Do you want me to pick up G
Eddie: Let him stay at my place. Besides it's late
JC: Sure
Eddie: Yeah I am sure
Camera cut to Torres Residence
Scene Twenty Two: Torres Residence
Camera zoom in on Eddie walking in his house. He drops his bag by the door
and puts his keys on the counter. Cut to G sleeping on the sofa with one
foot hanging out. Eddie laughs to himself.
Fade to him in his and Nina's bedroom. Zoom in on Nina sleeping. Eddie
walks over to her and softly kisses her on the cheek. She wakes up.
Nina: You're home
Eddie: I love you
Nina sits up.
Nina: I love you too
Eddie: Turns out Dany tried to kill the Rock
Nina: Tried
Eddie: He faked his death. He know about it all along
Nina: That's messed up
Eddie: Yeah I know
Nina: Eddie I know it is late, but there is something I have to say
Eddie puts his finger on Nina's lips
Eddie: No, I already know
Nina: What
Eddie: I found out a week after you and JC sleep together. I don't blame
you. I understand the situation.
Nina: Oh Eddie, you're not mad
Eddie: Nina listen, I love you too much to let that happen
Nina: I love you too
Eddie: Nina, usted es mi y solamente. Nos significan para ser juntos.
No hay nada que puede mantenerme ausente de usted. Estoy aquĆ con usted. Te
amo. Usted e I por siempre.
Nina gives Eddie a hug. Camera fade off
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