Author: leurelayne PM
There's a new Alchemist in Central. Supposedly to help The Elric Brothers. Will Hinata we willing to help the Elric Brothers after find out what they are? or what they're trying to find? or does Hinata have secret herself? R&R. I don't own: FMA or Naruto.Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Adventure - Hinata H. & Edward E. - Chapters: 4 - Words: 13,664 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 06-15-11 - Published: 06-05-11 - id: 7055950
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Well I'm finally back! It was super fun the retirement; the only bad thing is that we finished everything like in 2:00 a.m. to get up early in the morning. We got up from bed in 6 am and we had to get dressed and at least finish before 6: 30 a.m. so it was a challenge. But fun I made a few friends who btw one of them loves Naruto as well as me! Yay! I was so happy.
Well about last chapter… You're probably wondering… Why Hinata's past? Well I got some plans and there's a reason why Bradley went to pick her up. I know it's weird I did wanted to put Mustang since he's obviously cuter, but then what I want to write in future chapter will made no sense. It will take a while though but I promise it'll be good (I hope you think so too. Because every time I think of the scene my fangirl side comes to life that my sister stay like "hey are you okay?" and I'm like "silence mortal! I'm thinking on my fanfic!" and then I think "I need to write and pronto" and every time I got the story in my mind I'm like feeling and living the moment. It's an awesome feeling)
Thanks a lot for reviewing in the last chapter! You guys made me happy! I want to give thanks to Rinnala… she gave me a super advice I plan to put in action! I'm hoping to get better and she gave me advices and it made me happy so I'll put them in practice. Constructive criticism is appreciated.
Well now I'll shut up here Chapter 4 Enjoy!
Chapter 4: Flashbacks and trouble on the way! Part 2
Hinata was currently sitting on a bench. Everyone was now crowed in front of the church because 'father Cornelio' was there doing a demonstration of his 'miracles'.
"Excuse me" A young lady got close to Hinata. She had pale skin and light brown hair. "Is this seat taken?"
"Oh… no" Hinata replied in a hurry. "You can sit"
"Thank you" The lady just sat there. "You know… I have always though that father Cornelio can't do miracles as he said" The girl commented.
"What do you mean?"
"Well…. I made some research about it. And what he do I am pretty sure it's not miracles, that just alchemy"
"Alchemy?" Hinata got surprised. That meant she had to tell Edward and Alphonse and real quick. I got to tell them! Hinata though in a hurry, she got up and began running. "Thank you very much ma'am!" Hinata thanked the stranger before she ran as fast as she could. The young Hyuuga searched every place she could. The only place she could think of was the main building. Oh what would she give to have her byakugan in this exact moment. The only idea she had in mind was the main building. So she rushed to, from what it seem, the church. But in the front entrance it had heavy security.
Strange Hinata though. Now she was worried. Edward and Alphonse were probably in big trouble, she seem situations like this, her family used to be like this.
I-I guess I'll have to use the back door. Hinata rushed once again. She had to hurry, she didn't wanted her friends to get hurt. Thank god that in the bag there wasn't anyone. There's wasn't a door then the young girl just had to use alchemy. Hinata clapped her hands and slightly touched the wall and after some light blue lights a medium hole appeared.
"phew it still work" what am I thinking of course it'll work.
After some mind scolding herself she entered. Strange, the corridors were empty. Suddenly she heard some noise to the left. There! Hinata began running, she could hear some gun being used. She rushed even faster! The young girl clapped her hands once more and touched slightly the wall, behind it she saw an old man with a SMG.
"ehh?" Hinata wondered. To her left she saw her friends. "Ed-kun!"
"Hinata? What the hell are you doing here?" Edward snapped.
"So this girl is your friend" Father Cornelio said. "I'll just kill her!" The n the man aimed for Hinata.
"Hinata!" Before Edward could reach her, the man was already shooting all those bullets but with dirt and a big wall Hinata said.
"P-please don't take me lightly sir"
Hinata then clapped her hands and made three big spines with the floor, and aimed for the man standing in front of her, who seemed to have avoided. It surprised her how a man his age could do that so easily. But when the rock spines touched the floor it turned to petals, lavender petals. Somehow it surprised Edward how come she could do that. Then the young girl just rushed to Edward side.
"Ed-kun… are you alright?" She asked worried.
"I'm fine… didn't I told you to stay?" Edward asked.
"well yes but-"
Cornelio began shooting randomly.
"You can tell me latter!" Edward rushed to the wall, clapped his hands and made a door for them to escape. The older Elric took Hinata's hoodie hat and pulled her and began running while Alphonse had Rose on his arms.
"c'mon kid. What are you thinking being completely unarmed?"
"Gave up peacefully before you get hurt"
Three of the guards said. Okay now they used taboo words for Edward, kid, shrimp, midget. Those words were on the black list, that what Hinata though. The older Elric just clapped his hands once more and made a sword.
Now definitely the young Hyuuga thought that Edward had gone insane. Edward held Hinata's hand after beating the guards. His left hand felt so strong, even if he was short, it felt so warm it made Hinata to blush a little. It felt like those times when she-
They suddenly stopped. Making Hinata to bump into The older Elric.
"I got a plan" Fullmetal said determined. Once Edward told them the plan he walked the other way.
"B-But why do I have to get outside?" She tried to protest.
"Because I don't want the only female alchemist on central to get hurt" Fullmetal said looking directly to lavender eyes. "I know your strong but let me do this by myself" And with that he left a blushing Hinata standing looking to his back.
Hinata waited in front of the building. They had promised that they'll be passing on that way.
Why is he pushing me away? I just want to help.
Then after a few minutes, she heard the message from father Cornelio and how he just wanted to use the people of this town and how he uses the philosopher stone and that he wanted to rule this country. Then she could hear Edward childish laugh.
"hehehe I guess he's having fun?"
It was afternoon already. Hinata had waited way too much she guessed. The young Hyuuga looked to her back and sew them walking. She gave them a big smile, one that obviously they still couldn't see because they were still far. In a blink of an eye, she saw the girl from before, the one with pink bangs aiming to Edward with a gun. For a second Hinata got scared and once again rushed to them. Why was she rushing a lot today? But she just stopped for an instant, she saw Edward painful expression and it just broke Hinata's heart. The girl from before just kneeled saying something that the Hyuuga couldn't quite heard. In her eyes Edward seem to ignore her, but he say something's as well, and with Alphonse following behind him he walked towards Hinata.
"Hinata… let's go home" The older Elric said passing past her.
"ah… a-alright" She just followed. They reached the train station and they sat the entire trip in silence. She just looked to her lap not daring to say something. She still didn't have enough trust in each other. She had begun to think that maybe he wanted her away from their own business. She'll have to work on that since she liked the brothers enough to stay with them.
"d-do you t-trust me?" Hinata asked timidly.
"why'd you ask?"
"w-well i-in the battle you didn't want me to help"
"I trust you. Well not in a huge way but I'm starting to trust you. You seem nice enough….. it just…..it's-" Edward just yawed, closed his eyes and felt asleep.
"He fell asleep…" Hinata sweet dropped. I guess time will decide then. And with that she just smiled softly. She hadn't notice but Alphonse had been looking to her way, and her smile… her smile he had seen it somewhere.
Well this is all! I hope you had enjoy! Sorry this chapter it's short… remember I wanted to put it with the last one but I couldn't.
Tell me what you think! I'll write chapter 5 as soon as I get back from some business I got! Oh and the part where it say that Edward felt asleep? I write it cuz I as well am sleepy XD it's 3:22 am and I need to get early to go somewhere. XD but I hope you enjoy! I'm working as fast as I can!