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AN ARTICLE, DIFFERENTLYABLED SUPERHEROES - - -RACHEL

SUMMERS ("-THE-PHOENIX-"TWO)

by

Mark W. Meredith

I bet that you don't think that Jean-Grey ("-the'-Phoenix's'") daughter was ever psychologically tortured nor brainwashed - -. - - The story begins in the "below-paragraph".

The story starts in an alternate 1984 like in the-WATCHmen where Nixon was still president in 1984 and super-heroes had won the Vietnam War. In this alternate Earth - - - - the-Brotherhood of Evil-Mutants had killed Senator Robt. Kelley before Robt. Kelley became president in the movie "'X'-MEN" and was killed by "Mr. Magnus-" Lehnsherr and the-Brotherhood of Evil-Mutants. Robt. Kelley had been killed"nine-teen-seventy-eight" and mutants were blamed for everything bad. In nine-teen-eighty-four - - - -people were brandishing the slogan, "It is 1984 - - - -do you know 'what' your children are- - - -?" "THE-MUTANT-REGISTRATION-ACT" was passed in 1984 - - - -earlier than "Spider-MAN's" dimension did because of the outrage over the assassination. North American mutates had to register their powers like guns. Then super-heroes had to register their secret abilities and names with the Canadian and American government. The North American countries instituted use of enormous robots to defeat mutants with their mutant powers - - - putting mutants in jail. Much earlier than X-Men: 2 X-MEN UNITED and in a much worse manner - - -the military attacked - - - invading Xavier's School for the Gifted: "the X-Mansion." X-students were being shot when Dr-.Charles-Xavier went with a wheelchair to look through a window. In this world Jean Grey had become the-(pronunciated - - - -FE-NIX) Dark-Phoenix like in X-Men III: THE LAST STAND - - -before the attack on Prof-.X's-ACADEMY school for mutants was attacked - - - -and Jean-Grey ("the Dark 'Phoenix'") had not been killed. Ms-.Grey ("-the 'Phoenix'") had not turned evil and (the"-CyCLOPs") Summers happily married and had a young child with Grey by the time of the assault. Charles-Xavier (-Professor-Xavier) had pulled aside the curtain as young Rachel ran to ("X.") Charles Xavier. ("X.") Charles Xavier said to young (the "Phoenix-2)" Rachel Summers, "You'll be safe in the Danger Room." but ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers wouldn't go.

("X.") Charles Xavier was talking about the holographic room from X-MEN III: THE LAST STAND that was under-ground but ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers replied, "Not without you, Professor! - - - -"

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- - (- -"- - X- - . - -"- -) - - Charles Xavier called to ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers", "I must try to stop this ….!" As the "inside-mansion" was smoking from the firing upon the X students - - (- - "- - X- -. - -"- -) - -Charles Xavier's called out the open window, "WE mean NO harm! WE SURRENDER! IN MERCY'S NAME, CEASE FIR- - - - …. *" a mortar shell shot through the back of ("X.") Charles Xavier's seat through ("X.") Charles Xavier's stomach - - - -through the window - -(- -"- - X- - . - -" - -) - - Charles Xavier's chair sped backward and when ("X.") Charles Xavier's shoulders fell back into what was left of the back of the chair - - (- -"- - X's- - . - -"- -) - - Charles Xavier's head slumped "to the fore - -" - -unexpressive. ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers continued walking - - - slowly now toward ("X.") Charles Xavier. ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers approached ("X.") Charles Xavier's wheelchair and put ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers' left hand on ("X.") Charles Xavier's unmoving neck as heated smoke rose from the hole in ("X's.") Charles Xavier's stomach. When the soldiers finally got to ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers - - - (- - "- - Phoenix)" Rachel Summers was still standing by the side of ("X.") Charles Xavier - -"- -still in shock. The military officers walked up to gather 'round ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers with a drug dart with a drug chosen by the United States so to make ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers not able to concentrate. ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers couldn't use ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers' psychic powers thusly until the U.S. government finally "let up" on the dosage amount. ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers was "DOPEd-up" and taken to jail with many other mutants and psychologically tortured to psychically find other mutants. Certain mutants had powers that helped the government to find other mutants. Those mutants were named as "Hounds" and were "trained" to point out others that were mutants while heavily medicated just enough that they can't think much nor feel. "Hound" mutants were made to put on dog collars with thick chains for leashes so that government workers could pull "Hounds" where mutants were needed to find other reported mutants in a certain area. Then came the Sentinels- - - giant robots - - -with built in devices to kill or capture mutants manufactured in an African factory by one of "'X'-MEN"'s enemies "who were" a rich investor. Sentinels had many weapons such as metal javelins shot from housings their arms, electric "beams" shot from their "eyes," and retractable metal tentacles to coil, maul electrocute mutants. Sentinels "helped" the military and "Hounds - -" - -"- -rounding" up mutants and sometimes killing them in the process. Then came the concentration camp ghettos like in World War two with barb wired stone walls and guards to keep mutants "in." By this time Rachel was "teen" age- - - -and the mutants wore power inhibiting mechanism collars that were heavy and as large as "neck braces - -" - -. - - (- - "- - Phoenix- -) - -" - - Rachel Summers "was graduated" from a "Hound" program because of ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers' hard work at this point- -. - -By this time Sentinels turned on the North America government. Sentinels "overran" "The '… States of America" and "Canada" government to try and rule "more logically- -"- -and to "better implement" their programming to kill or capture all mutants. SentinELS were getting out of control. Soon- - - by then - - - -Sentinels were assassinating "super powered humans". Parker (the Spider-Man), Banner the Hulk, (pronunciation MER DOCK) "'Matt' Murdoch-" (the-Dare"devil"), "Mr". Stark the"-IRON Man", Mrs. "Richards-"the"-INVISible-WOMan," "John-"Storm (the-Human-"TORCH"), ("Mr". Grimm) "the Thing", Richards ("-Mister Fantastic"), Dr. Victor Von Doom, Johnny-Blaze (-The"-Ghost-"RIder), "T'Challa (the Panther)", "Rogers" (the "'Captain' of America"), the"-Vision" and Jim "Rhodey" ("the 'Iron-Man'" two) were assassinated by Sentinels. In one of the chain link gateways to New York's ghetto there was a pauper's graveyard paid for by taxes - - - -plain tombstones of dead superhuman heroes and mutant heroes - -( - -" - -Mr". Wagner - -) - -the "Night"crawler; "Hank" P. McCoy ("Beast"); Warren-, The-Third (-the"-Arch"angel); ("Rob" Drake) the-Iceman; ("X.") Charles Xavier; ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers; Summers ("-Cy"CLOPs), Lorna Lehnsherr ("'M-'2"), (pronounced SHON) "Sean-"Cassidy ("The 'Banshee'"), Pietro "Maximoff" (the "Quick'silver'"),and (Wanda Maximoff) THE SCARLET"-Witch." The only remaining "'X'-MEN" were Jim ("-Logan-") Howlet, Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe"), ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers, Erik ("the-Magneto"), the "Colossus" ("'Mr.-'Nicholievich Rasputin") and the grownup son of Mrs. "Richards" the"-Invisible-WoMAN" and Reed Richards ("Mister-"FANtaSTIC) Franklin Richards-"Storm-" ("Psi"-lord). Sentinels had told other countries to bow down and surrender to the rulings of Sentinels or their governments would be taken by force. Other countries said that if Sentinels left the border of the Canadian government - - - -that the other governments promised a nuclear strike back that could end the world. Sentinels were planning the attack on the rest of the world. Mutants could leave the concentration camp with the inhibitors to do errands but if they didn't come back in the exact time superhuman mutants had said they would a Sentinel robot would question mutants about not coming back in time and use their computer brains to figure out if the mutant was lying. "James-"Howlet ("-Wolverine") brought with "'Mr'. Howlet" ("-Wolverine") a tiny device that would "jam" the power "dampening" collars for a small group - - - -and since "'X'-MEN" were trained to work as a team - -"- - '- - X'-MEN" decided that they would keep the tiny "jammer" a secret among "'X'-MEN". As a last-ditch-effort to save their world "'X'-MEN" planned - - -two salvo/gambits. Plan one - - - was that "'X'-MEN" would travel through the sewers to THE-FANtasTIC-Four's building headquarters- -. - - The living steel "Colossus" ("'Mr.-'Nicholievich Rasputin") carried the body of unconscious "Katherine" Pryde Rasputin ("Shadow"cat). While traveling through an iron sewer tunnel - - - - Sentinels attacked - -! - -A ray blast from a Sentinel's "metal glove" shot down through the "ceiling" of the sewer tunnel - -! - - (- - "- - Phoenix - -) - -" - - Rachel Summers' husband "Frank-" ("Psi"-lord) cried out, "That sound! AARRRGH!" The "beam blast" of electrons came down -striking "Frank-" ("'Psi-'lord") Richards and destroying "Frank's-" ("Psi"-lord's) body.

("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers screamed, "Frank …. - - - -!" When ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers' husband "Frank-" ("'Psi-'lord") Richards had died - - (- - "- - Phoenix - -) - -" - - Rachel Summers felt "Psi-"lord die in ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers' mind. A giant metal hand reached down into the hole in the "ceiling - -" - -grabbing the side of the metallic hole- - -and ripped open the ceiling. A Sentinel pulled open the ceiling to reveal a "Sentinel" had ripped the middle of the street above to get at the six escaped mutants - -. - -After "'X'-MEN" took the battle to above the streets - - ("- - Phoenix)" Rachel Summers and Kate Pryde Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) had hidden in an alcove of a New York business's doorway so they couldn't be seen down the street - -. - -"- - '- - X'-MEN" battled "Sentinels" to the streets above the ground. After "the'-Fantastic-'Four" were all killed - - -"-Sentinels" set up base in the-Fantastic-FOUR'S building headquarters. When "'X'-MEN" made their way to the surface "'X-'MEN" implemented their second plan.

The assassination of Senator Robt. Kelley was where it all began so ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers used ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers' new age mutant powers to switch the "life-forces" of "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) with "Kitty-" ("Ariel-") Pryde in '80. "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) might be able to stop that "future" from happening before the nuclear holocaust. "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) fought by the side of the 80's "'X'-MEN:" "'Mr'. Howlet" ("-Wolverine"), Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe"), (the"-CyCLOPs") Summers, …. "'Mr'. Howlet"("-Wolverine"), Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe"), and "Colossus" ("'Mr.-'Nicholievich Rasputin") made their way to the top of the Baxter Building where "'X'-MEN" fell into a Sentinel trap. "'Mr'. Howlet" ("-Wolverine") hurtled through the air towards a Sentinel whom blasted "'Mr'. Howlet" ("-Wolverine") backward with an electron blast from its palm." "'Mr'. Howlet" ("-Wolverine") degenerated as "'Mr'. Howlet" ("-Wolverine") muscles were blasted - - - -disintegrating off of "'Mr'. Howlet" ("-Wolverine's") "adamantium bones". "'Mr'. Howlet" ("-Wolverine") changed position in mid-hurtle - - - -doubling backward and arching "'Mr'. Howlet's" ("-Wolverine's") "metal spine" as "'Mr'. Howlet" ("-Wolverine") painfully screaming, "YERRRRGH!" A Sentinel released a spring-loaded steel javelin from a housing in its "forearm" and shot it across the room and through Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe's") back.

Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe") cried out the name of Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe's") best friend the steel "Colossus" screaming out, "Peter"! The living steel "Colossus" ("'Mr.-'Nicholievich Rasputin") turned and ran back to where Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe") landed on the floor of THE Baxter Building. The steel "Colossus" ("'Mr.-'Nicholievich Rasputin") turned Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe") on "Storm's" side and held Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe") as "Peter" cried. The living steel "Colossus" ("'Mr.-'Nicholievich Rasputin") and Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe") were both sworn to never kill once but Peter being perhaps the last of his "'X'-MEN" team filled "Colossus" ("'Mr.-'Nicholievich Rasputin") with murderous rage as "Colossus" ("'Mr.-'Nicholievich Rasputin") punched the Omega Line Sentinel that killed Peter's best friend flying out of the side of the skyscraper. Tears were streaming down ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers' face. All the way down on the street ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers had felt them die. In one minute Peter was dead too. During the battle with "'X'-MEN - - " - -the blind member of the-Brotherhood of Evil-Mutants named Destiny slipped away into the Senate building with a crossbow and found Senator Robt. Kelley to kill Robt. Kelley. Luckily "'Kate Pryde-Rasputin' (-the 'Sprite')" had managed to sneak after Senator Robt. Kelley far enough to spy Robt. Kelley almost about to be killed by "Destiny." "'Kate Pryde-Rasputin-' (the 'Sprite')" ran up behind Destiny FROM "'Kate Pryde-Rasputin-' (the 'Sprite's')" hiding space becoming immaterial, passing through Destiny and solidifying "'Kate Pryde-Rasputin-' (the 'Sprite's')" shoulders the moment after passing through - - - -and hitting Destiny's forearm. "'Kate Pryde-Rasputin-' (the 'Sprite')" bumped Destiny's arm just enough to jostle Destiny's aim and make the arrow barely miss Senator Robt. Kelley's face - -! - - ("'- -Phoenix)" Rachel Summers realized that "'Kate Pryde-Rasputin-' (the 'Sprite')" couldn't have changed their past because ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers' future didn't change any by the time Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe"), "'MR'. HOWLET" ("-WOLVERINE") and the steel "Colossus" ("'Mr.-'Nicholievich Rasputin") had all died. When "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) came back from "the past" ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers and "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) knew they couldn't make the "future" any better so their only choice was to go on to their next mission to make sure the "future" didn't get any worse. ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers and "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) traveled through the sewer to ex-Colonel "Carol Danvers"-(the"-Binary's") apartment to get military uniforms and infiltrate the nerve-center of PROJECT NIMROD. PROJECT NIMROD was named after NIMROD the mythological hunter. The government was creating the ultimate Sentinel which the American government was sending into the past to kill mutants. The United States government "nicknamed" the ultimate Sentinel: Nimrod after the legendary hunter. When "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) entered past the guards "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) used the identity of"-(the"-Binary") and ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers wore the outfit of a "Hound". ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers and "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) were inside the cyberrobotics facility when they were discovered as frauds. There was a shoot out and when the last two "'X'-MEN" were in the main room for PROJECT NIMROD and "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) sealed the electronic door and had ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers "scramble the lock" telekinetically and useD a hypnotism code word, "DARK PHOEnix," that was hypnotized into ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers. "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) discussed with her that perhaps ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers could send a person back in time but when "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) said the hypnotic " trigger word- - " - -(" - - Phoenix )" Rachel Summers slipped across "the abyss of eternity" and into the "past - -" - -so that ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers whom was like a daughter to "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) would be safe. From there- -"'- - Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) faced Nimrod the ultimate Sentinel alone. One time the Beyonder from the cartoon THE SPIDER-Man showed ("PHOENIX)" Rachel Summers "the future" and what happened to "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat). The Beyonder showed ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers "an image of future passed" where "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) having been overwhelmed by the ultimate Sentinel - - - -turns to run from NIMROD and is blasted from NIMROD'S electric-lightning hand blast to death before Nimrod travels back in time to kill more mutants. ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers came back to the past to find Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe") having lost Storm ("'Ororo' Munroe's") powers, Jean-Grey ("the Dark 'Phoenix'") being dead before Ms-.Grey ("-the 'Phoenix'") was pregnant, Summers ("-Cy"CLOPs) not married to the "Phoenix," Peter's sister "'Illyana' Rasputin" ("Majik") older because of a trip to another dimension, and ("X.") Charles Xavier being able to walk. ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers wasn't sure if she was in an alternate dimension's alternate Earth or if "'Kate' Pryde" Rasputin ("Shadow"cat) and ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers wanted ("Phoenix)" Rachel Summers wanted to change the future of that world.

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AfterWords?

by

Mark Walt Meredith

That is the end of that act of the story so far. Do you think that's the end of the life of this main character—? – Not necessarily –if you don't want it to be – then write me a note about how you want to see the next chapter in the story of this main character's life—!—What happens next—? ... Who knows what happens—? ... Inspire me by putting a review –!—Tell me what one wants to be happening in "the story", next, OK—?—OK –!—Perhaps I'll write the next chapter very soon from now—!—

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