Author: ANTfarmfanatic PM
fletcher loves olive.. olive loves fletcher... but when olive tries to get fletcher to love her back of course she thinks that he doesnt will she go too far! way better than description, and is going 2 b wayy more than one chapter! rated T just in cseRated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Drama - Fletcher Q. & Olive D. - Chapters: 38 - Words: 21,284 - Reviews: 372 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 26 - Updated: 11-19-11 - Published: 08-17-11 - Status: Complete - id: 7298183
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Ok, so I was reading a few reviews that said my story got very boring and lost its plot line. I hope this helps, but just so you know this is the last chapter. Its ended officially. I'm kind of sad, i mean its ending! I hope the few of you who liked my story enjoyed it a lot, it was very fun writing it (especially the 'scene' in this chapter, you will know when you read it). so, read on!
'Does that answer your question?'
I felt a smile creep across my lips as I answered
'I think so.'
I laced my fingers with hers, somehow turning into 'cool romantic Fletcher'. At this Olive straightened up and looked slightly confused. Then again I think she was right to be confused.
'Fletcher does this-' she pulled up her fingers laced with mine. '-mean that we are, you know, together?'
I suddenly found the right answer, it was something I never would have thought of 5 minutes ago when I was dorky scared Fletcher before I transformed into romantic Fletcher.
'It depends on if you want us to be.'
Olive smiled sweetly as she looked me into my eyes and whispered, ' I-I think I do.'
'YYEEESS!' I exclaimed jumping nearly 5 feet in the air. Olive giggled, I blushed realizing that looked totally stupid. Back to dorky Fletcher.
Olive swung our enter-laced hands back and forth, a faint smile on her perfect lips and something in her eyes that I had never seen before.
Suddenly her eyes changed and widened. Our joined hands suddenly froze as Olive stiffened. She stared into my eyes, seeming as if she were about to hyperventilate.
I let go of Olives hand and took a step closer to her.
'Olive, are you okay?'
She frantically shook her head as she started breathing in and out super fast.
'Olive what is wrong?'
We both started running as fast as we could up the sidewalk, school starts at 7 o'clock, I glanced down at my spiderman watch to realize that it was 6: 53. Wow, all that sure happened fast. We became a couple in 2 minutes flat! In a short 7 minutes! We were just in time. WE burst through the glass doors just as everyone was making their way to their classes. Olive started hyperventilating again, becauss she wasn't early for class for once. As she frantically tried to pick out the direction of our first class, something came over me.
'Hey, uh, Olive, do you wanna –uh- skip class with me?'
Olive gulped at the thought of skipping our first class, on our first day of school. As she looked as if she were about to faint, I grabbed onto her shoulders. 'olive, it would just be this one class'. She hesitated before asking,
'And what might we do…?'
I smiled sheepishly as I made my way over to the janitors closet. Olive got the idea and nodded slowly, yet reluctantly. I turned the knob on the closet and slightly pushed olive into the dark tight space. I felt… unlike me. But it felt so… good.
The atmosphere was dark, my heart pounded as I tried not to trip on a broom and make a face plant, shoving her against the back wall. The clattering of various cleaning supplies didn't even faze me. I pinned her arms to her side, and casually let them slip around her waist as I tugged at her, smushing my mouth against hers. I heard a soft moan escape Olives lips as I began. Olive relaxed, caught off guard by this sudden feisty Fletcher attack. Her saliva slipped into my mouth as mine did into hers. We were so in sync. We were perfect. I could smell her subtle perfume as she deepened the kiss, begging for more. I had never known olive to be like this. I felt a smile draw on my lips and felt a murmur escape my throat as she furiously kissed me, bringing her dainty legs up to wrap around my waist. I pushed her farther into the wall, causing me to trip over a mop and land on the soft sponged on the floor. Olive laughed slightly as I rolled her on top of me. Her legs still wrapped around me. I grabbed her face fervently, feeling the taste of her tongue against mine was the best feeling in the world. Just as it was going into a much, much deeper level of make out sessions, I saw a sliver of light out of the corner of my eye and heard a gasp.
It was the principal. I noticed her and tried to stop, but olive was still clutching onto me. Her eyes begged me for more, but I shifted uncomfortably as I pulled myself to a sitting position, and she noticed the principal.
'Well well well. What do we have here. Olive and Fletcher. Unlikely.'
I stuttered and couldn't find any words as I glanced at olive pleading for help. WE needn't say anything though.
'Detention. See you there.'
She slammed the janitor door, causing another mop to crumble to the floor making a loud bang. I turned my head towards Olive, seeing her astounded face made me laugh. I didn't know if she was astounded that she had detention, or that we were just found out. I laughed softly, sliding awkwardly on my knees over to her, wrapping my arms around her as she smiled slightly, and eventually giggled. This time, instead of me being the fierce one, Olive pushed me onto my back and laid on top of me, pinning my arms to my side. I smiled sheepishly as she smirked and bent down and kissed me. It was less hungry, less fervent, but it was still nice. Every kiss with Olive was nice.
In between smooches I murmured, 'So-mm…. I guess- we- are- found out n-now, Olive.' I reached farther for her lips as she brought her head, up separating us. I heard the little pop our lips made as they separated. She smiled.
I escaped her death grip and brought my hand up to her neck, shoving it back down so her lips were against mine again. It seemed that was the only way to live.
She brought her head back up again, I was slightly annoyed but she wanted to, so I let her.
She smiled her sweetest smile yet, as she pecked me softly.
'Fletcher, we are going to be together, forever.'
Awesome right? Not super awesome though :/ Okay no getting off the hook, I want this chapter to get more reviews than any other! :D I hope to post a sequel soon, it will be much more exciting and I hope to have adventure (and bring back a character…) but anyways tell me if you want me to post a sequel, if y'all do I will probably post it in 2 or 3 weeks. Still PM me people! Love you! And Thank you :)
Here are some questions I still am asking for this series,. If you could answer your honest opinion on any of these, that would be great:
Was it a crappy plotline? If not, or if so, how?
Do you think it was a little OCC? I know it was a little but how much?
How bad was my grammar? I know it wasn't perfect, but was it readable?
Was the story good in general?
What was your favorite part?
Should I write more?
SHould i write a Tyce story?
Should i write a totally different Folive story, not even a sequel, tht is totally different, more like friendly love, where they dont realize they love eachother yet? or something like that?
I LOVE YOU PEOPLE! THANK YOU SO MUCH! All my reviews fuel me (even the mean, critical ones) I wouldn't have realized i was draggin this story on and on and on without you. so thank you :)