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It finally happened! Komachi has published her new romance novel and the girls at her school loves it! But the question from where she got her inspiration from keeps troubling her and with Natsu's sudden confession and their spider enemy, Arachnea on her back, Komachi experiences great stress. But will she overcome this and confess her true feelings as well? Yes! Pretty cure 5
Rated: Fiction T - English - Friendship/Romance - Komachi A. & Nuts - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,570 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 07-12-12 - Published: 08-27-11 - Status: Complete - id: 7328138
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Hello, everybody! Here it is, the final chapter! Ah, the relief of finally ending a story properly! Now I only have to update three stories…

Disclaimer: I don't own Yes! Pretty cure 5!


Rin ran over to greet her friends, who were just as astonished and surprised as herself.

"What's happening?".

"I don't know, someone must've set fire to the football field!".

"Let me take care of this", their blue haired friend said, and within seconds, she was transformed into the legendary warrior of Intelligence and Water; Cure Aqua. Just as Cure Aqua was about use her special move to put out the burning flames, she was covered in a huge amount of web and wasn't able to move.

"What the-".

"Karen!", her friends cried. A familiar laughter echoed in the air. The four girls instantly turned around to face their opponent. It was a woman with light pink hair and scarlet red eyes, wearing black with eight pair of spider legs attached to her back.

"Arachnea?", Komachi whispered, with wide eyes. She could remember that they'd once fight against each other when Arachnea had trapped all of them into her bad written novel.

"Pretty Cure's, today you will die!", the woman cried out, before she ran towards the four girls.

"Or we could just beat you again, like we always do!", their pink haired leader firmly said. The four girl transformed as well and soon, all of them were wearing their battle outfit. Cure Rouge ran towards their female enemy, holding up a curled fist. When she approached and was ready to deliver a punch, Arachnea easily avoided by jumping up and landed safely on the ground. She took out something from her pocket, which showed up to be a mask, which she threw onto a nearby football. The football grew in size until it was gigantic.

"Shit!", the red haired girl cursed. The Cursed Football started to move towards her with such speed that it was impossible for the warrior of Passion and Fire, to dodge in time. Suddenly Cure Mint appeared in front of her with her arms raised in the air.

"Pretty Cure Mint Protection!".

A huge green shimmering shield surrounded the two girls, and saved both of them from an impact, which could probably have killed them.

"Thanks, Komachi, I owe you one".

"We don't have time; Arachnea is still attacking the rest of us".

Said woman was now trying to hit Cure Dream with all of her eight spider legs, and the warrior was luckily to be able to keep up with all of them. Until the Cursed Football now had changed its direction and was about to attack Cure Dream, if she hadn't jumped aside in time.

"Whoa, that was close, wait, what-".

The pink haired girl was now covered in web as well, just as she'd let her guards down.

"That's it; Pretty Cure Rouge Fire!".

The red haired girl sent a ball of fire toward Arachnea, which she once again dodged. The fire from earlier had gotten even bigger with the help of Rin's fire. The smoke started to grow and blur everything, including making everyone cough.

"My, and here I thought you were going to stop the fire from increasing", the smirking voice of Arachnea said. Cure Rouge wiped her forehead with the back of her head.

"That woman is seriously starting to piss me off".

"Cure Rouge, look out!".

The red haired teen managed to avoid the impact of the Cursed Football, but she was now in midair. The female enemy flew towards her with a kick placed in the teen's stomach which made her hit the ground. The warrior coughed in pain and clenched her abdomen. Cure Mint closed her eyes in fear. This was turning bad, she could feel it.

"Now there's only the little girl and the author left…", the woman laughed. She turned around, eyes scanning the whole field, despite the thick smoke after the two remaining Pretty Cures. The green haired girl saw a moving figure through the smoke and realized who it was and what she had to do. She ran and shouted:

"Here I am! Come and get me!".

Arachnea turned around, her eyes shining a dangerous scarlet red with fury, and her legs were ready to strike. Cure Mint wasn't fully aware by the risk she'd taken. After all; both Arachnea and the Cursed Football was after her now. And almost everyone besides herself and the little blonde was weakened.

For Arachnea, this was a great opportunity to get her revenge. Mostly for getting her plans ruined by the green haired girl back then when the woman had been so close to achieving her goal. So close to get the Dream Collet…. Arachnea had considered this unforgivable. She was now close to lose her job and receive a painful punishment. But now the tables were turned. And it was time for the warrior of Tranquility to pay

"You're not getting away!", the woman cried, sending cobweb through the air, towards Komachi. But she'd managed to shield herself behind the football goals just in time. The huge ball came up from behind, but Cure Mint jumped in midair to avoid the hit. Arachnea flew towards her with a flying fist which luckily, collided with the green haired teen's palm. The lightly pink haired woman smiled twisty, which sent shivers down Komachi's spine. A sudden pair of spider legs hit the warrior like a slap, sending her flying with a blow. Arachnea laughed like a madman.

"Komachi!", everyone exclaimed.

Komachi raised herself up from the ground, feeling sharp pain shoot up as she clenched her right arm instantly. If she didn't show up, things would turn out badly for Komachi…

Suddenly, a bright light shot through the thick smoke.

"Pretty Cure Lemonade Flash!".

Small, golden, sparkling butterflies flew straight towards the enemy, the impact causing an explosion to appear. Cure Lemonade ran straight to the wounded Komachi, the worried face of hers showing fear and concern.

"k-Komachi, a-are you okay?", the blonde asked, both her hands covering her mouth. The older girl forced a weak smile.

"Y-yeah, just go untie the others, I-I'll be fine…", she whispered. Cure Lemonade nodded and ran as fast as she could to Cure Dream, to untie her, when suddenly…

"Urara, what's taking you so long?".

"I-I can't move! I-I'm covered in web!".

"What?".

"What?", Komachi thought.

This was not going as planned. The smoke got even thicker and the trapped Pretty Cures coughed even more. A shape of a figure began to appear out of the smoke. It seemed like the explosion from earlier had been too much to Arachnea. She was clearly damaged, having bruises and cuts all over her body. A drop of ruby red blood was trickling down the corner of her mouth. But the creepy smile of hers was still on. The green haired girl stepped backwards. She didn't know what to do, neither of the girls were able to help her and the fire seemed impossible to escape. Cure Mint felt the smoke burn inside her throat and began to cough as well.

"What's the matter, warrior of Tranquility? A little afraid to stand on your own? Finally realizing that your doom is near?", the woman said acidly. Komachi felt the blood from her arm sink through her fingers, and land on the burning earth.

"Komachi, run away while you still can!", Cure Aqua cried, tears starting to form in her azure eyes.

"Karen…", Cure Mint whispered sadly.

"We can't win against her like this, Komachi, she's sick! Escape now-".

"ENOUGH OF YOUR CHAT!".

Arachnea came flying and crashed her knee against the bluenette's back, pushing the air out of her as she screamed in pain. But she wasn't the only one. Komachi let the tears sink down her cheeks.

"Stop it!".


(Natsu's pov.)

I walked down the street, on my way to the girls' school, since Rin had had a football game right now. I licked the crumbs away from my lips after eating the cookies I stole from Kokoda. Yeah, like he was considering giving them out anyway. The sun was halfway down, coloring the sky orange. It was getting late and the football game should've been done by now. Then, where were the girls? The once warm summer wind suddenly felt ice cold, when I heard a familiar voice after what sounded like a heart rending scream.

"Stop it!".

"Komachi!", I cried and ran.


(Normal pov.)

"Bring me the Dream Collet and I shall spare your lives", the woman demanded. Cure Aqua continued to cough, just worse than before.

"Komachi…don't…".

The tears was streaming down the girl's face, as Komachi shaked her head.

"I-I don't have it…".

"Then go and get it!", the spider woman cried louder. Cure Mint didn't know what to do, she couldn't leave her friends while they were still with Arachnea, and she certainly couldn't bring her to the Natsu House.

"Can't decide, eh? Then let me help you out! Kowaino, run her down!".

"No!", the girls exclaimed in union. The large ball took up in speed and forced its way towards Cure Mint. Still clenching her bloody arms, she closed her eyes. In her condition, she couldn't possibly avoid this attack. If she could be granted one last wish, she would wish she hadn't been such a bad friend lately. That she could have a little more time to apologize to Natsu. Tell him about her feelings or just hear his voice one last time…

"Look out!".

A sudden pair of arms pushed her aside, making her land hardly on the ground and cause pain to shoot through her arm again. She opened her eyes to stare into a pair of chocolate brown ones.

"N-Natsu?", Komachi stammered, her cheeks burning as usual.

"Oh, God, I wish I'd come earlier, what happened to your arm, Komachi?", Natsu asked, the concern painted on his face. That just made Komachi blush even harder.

"Ah, the protector of the Dream Collet. How nice of you to come and bring me it", Arachnea smiled. Natsu turned around, facing Arachnea with so much anger in his voice, that Komachi and everyone else thought they'd never seen him like this.

"Doing this to my friends and then thinking that I'd give you the Dream Collet? You must be insane".

Arachnea's smile faded, looking like she'd just received a slap.

"Cure Dream, do what you gotta do", Natsu said. Arachnea's eyes widened as she turned around to face the pink haired girl. Untied.

"Pretty Cure Dream Attack!".

A big pink butterfly flew with great speed toward Kowaino and exploded, the impact making the mask break into millions of pieces. Natsu carried Komachi in his arms in bridal style, walking over to a much more safe area before lying her down.

"I'm going to untie the others. You okay?".

"Y-yeah, I-I'm fine…", the red Komachi replied nervous. Natsu tore a piece of his shirt off and tied it around Komachi's wound, before leaving. Komachi was speechless. She honestly didn't think that her wish would come true. Anrachnea was now angrier than ever, her attacks showing the fury that burned within her. Cure Dream once again dodged her attacks while Natsu helped the others. He'd now untied Cure Aqua and Cure Rouge.

"You okay, Karen?", the red haired asked, rubbing her stomach. The bluenette coughed, but then showed a smile.

"I'm fine, but the fire needs to be stopped".

She breathed in and pointed her palms towards the flames.

"Petty Cure Aqua Stream!".

The water shot out and it took a while before it was all gone. Meanwhile, Cure Dream was fighting Arachnea, Cure Rouge came up from behind, delivering a nice kick behind her shoulder blade.

"That's payback from earlier", Rin smirked. Soon all Pretty Cure's including Natsu, surrounded the unstable spider woman.

"It's over, Arachnea".

Arachnea's eyes wandered from each Pretty Cure to end at Natsu.

"It's not over until I get the Dream Coll-".

Suddenly out of nowhere Bumble Bee appeared, standing in front of Arachnea.

"Time's out".

The red eyes which belonged to the spider woman widened, as her body began to shiver with fear.

"P-Please, sir, I'm so close, please give me more time-".

Bumble bee placed on finger on her forehead, And she was gone. That was all it took. But the sound of her scream still hung in the air. The man glanced calmly at the five teens.

"You may have won this time, but next time the Dream Collet will be ours", he said and disappeared just as quick as he came.

"Is it over?", Urara asked timidly.

"Yup".

The danger was now finally over, so the girls could change back to their regular clothes. The girls ran over to greet their wounded friend.

"Komachi, are you alright?", Karen asked, the tears starting to gather in the corner of her eyes.

"I'm so sorry, I wasn't any help to you, was I?", she continued.

Komachi began to shed tears as well.

"It's not your fault, Karen".

The two girls embraced, crying. But then, Komachi's tight grip around her best friends softened, became lighter until…

"Komachi?", the blue haired girl asked, as her friend's eyes remained closed. She had fainted.


(Komachi's pov.)

The small amount of light shot through the darkness. I opened my eyes reluctantly, my eyelids feeling heavy. I stared up at the ceiling. Where am I? The last thing I remembered was the fight against Arachnea…

I sat up straight and immediately felt a bit pain coming from my arm. Bandage was tied around where a wound was supposed to be. I also noticed that I was wearing a creamy white dress; a sleeveless one. When I tried to get up the bed, I felt something lay beside me. It was Natsu. He was sitting on a chair, his head lying on the bed with both arms wrapped around it. And he was still asleep. I felt a weak blush dust across my face. He looked so cute that I couldn't help but smile. I stretched my healthy arm and softly stroke his light brown locks, caressing his hair like he'd once did with mine…

I quickly took my arm back ,when I felt his body moving, his chocolate brown eyes opening before staring into mine. As much as I didn't want it to happen, I blushed harder which caused Natsu to chuckle.

"Morning Komachi", he greeted, yawning.

"G-good morning, Natsu", I said nervously. He glanced at my arm.

"Your arm feeling any better?".

I simply nodded. I was grateful, but I still couldn't stand how Natsu rescued me yesterday. He looked after me even though I hurt his feelings. How come…

And before I even knew it, I was sobbing, clenching the pillow in my tight grip meanwhile.

"What's wrong, Komachi? Does it still hurt?", Natsu asked worried. I shook my head, wiping the tears away with the back of my hand.

"Why? Why are you still helping me? Why are you still concerned about me after all I've done to you? You…you're such a great person. How come you like a bad person like me?", I asked, covering my face with both my hands. It just doesn't make any sense. I like Natsu, I really do, but…he shouldn't waste his time on me. I'm not worth it.

I felt a pair of hands on my own, dragging them downwards and away from my face. My green watery eyes gazed into his calm brown ones.

"Why, you ask? It's actually quite simple; you're sweet, cute and charming. You have a bright intelligence, a great sense of humor and you're an amazing cooker. You're loyal, caring and a great friend. You're a person whom I can trust, a person who can light up my world only by smiling. I can't think of a reason why I shouldn't like you, Komachi, because you are incredible", Natsu said, and I got totally lost in his brown eyes.

"Natsu", I whispered, my cheeks feeling like they'd been set on fire. We were so close, that I could feel his warm breath against my skin.

"Komachi…I love you".

I closed my eyes as our lips connected. Hearing this, feeling this…it was amazing, it was blissful, it was like being in the most perfect dream ever. Our foreheads laid against each other when we broke apart.

"I love you too, Natsu. I have loved you secretly all this time…", I whispered, feeling hot tears trickle down my cheeks. We pulled each other into a warm embrace.

"Where are the others?", I asked.

"Downstairs. Probably sleeping, though".

"So, um, how exactly are we going to explain to them about…us?", I asked again, my cheeks feeling hotter than ever.

"Dunno. Actually I haven't quite thought about that", Natsu admitted. Suddenly, a great growling sound echoed inside the room.

"Sorry", I said embarrassed. Natsu laughed.

"Seems like you're hungry. Does breakfast sound okay to you?".

"Yeah", I replied and smiled. I got up from bed and when Natsu and I stood next to each other, he gently took my hand with his own. My smile grew bigger and so did my blush.


Me: That was it, guys! See y'all and don't forget to review! :3

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