Author: Pretty Little Liar 07-21 PM
This will be a story with 13 chapters all about different things... Allie is about to go on a train ride around the world everthing goes perfect until... READ TO FND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!Rated: Fiction T - English - Supernatural/Mystery - Words: 411 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-02-11 - id: 7517111
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This is about a girl who goes on a train ride to travel around the world but... (read to find out what happens to her!)
Did you ever imagine being killed on a train? Well, I was when I was 17 years old. It was a typical morning expect this time I was getting my stuff ready to travel around the world on a train. I was set to go, I hopped in my car and set off. After a while I arrived, I got my form that told me my train number. I got my ticket and boarded the train. There weren't many people yet, maybe I was just early. I started to feel the train move. I went to the Captains deck there was nobody there. I sat back down and relaxed, maybe he had it on auto-drive. Just then I heard the train door open and close when the train was moving. I looked at the door which was closed and locked, I was officially creeped out. I went in the back and lay down. I tried to ignore all the things that had just happened but for some reason I couldn't. I tried to think how I was going around the world and all the good times I have had. I didn't know what had just happened with the Captain's Deck thing and the door thing but whatever was doing it was creeping me out to the point where I could just burst out in tears any second. Suddenly, I heard my name being called; I got up and followed the voice. I opened the door to see a little girl calling my name for help. I grabbed her she pulled me out and I was hanging about an inch from death. She told me anyone who rode this trained died. "No!" I screamed, "Please don't kill me." "But don't you see it's a better life on this train." She said. "Goodbye…" she said and then threw me off the train. "NO!" I screamed. "Don't ride my train" said the little girl…
Please review if you like it. I will have more scary stories uploaded soon as soon as I get home from school and do my homework in everything. Well... leave comments PLZZZ tell me if you like and it was just a short story. PLZZZ tell me anything I could do to improve it!