|Murataku meets Piyoko tell me what you think
Author: BluejaySong PM
Murataku,rejected by Puchiko yet again,searches for a new girl in Piyoko. I am a future author and I am using this site to practice my writing. Please read and review.Rated: Fiction K - English - Romance/Friendship - Words: 311 - Published: 11-16-11 - id: 7557211
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Murataku is my FAVE character. I really liked the original story about him getting amnesia, so I'm writing him a story.
Murataku was sitting on the sidewalk outside of Gamers, depressed out of his wits. Puchiko had rejected him for the millionth time and he had just given up. He sighed and looked at his pedicured nails, trying to think of something to do to distract him. Puchiko had been his whole life, and now he had nothing left. Murataku looked up and saw what looked like an angel walking over to him. "W-wow…" he gasped as the girl came closer. She had soft blond hair and bright green eyes, and was wearing black and white. Piyoko stumbled over to Murataku and squeaked as she tripped and fell on his lap. "Squeak! Sorry mister!" she said, embarrassed. "Don't be," Murataku responded kindly. For a second he was hopeful that she had no one with her and that he could introduce himself, but then three young men ran over to the two. "Sorry, sir, that won't happen again," Ky said apologetically as he pulled Piyoko off of Murataku. "How many times do I have to tell you not to wander off, Piyokosan?" Ky hissed at the young girl as he led her off. "We were worried." Coo and Rik had stayed behind and were now apologizing profusely to the reluctant Murataku, who watched sadly as his angel walked off. "You don't have to apologize, I understand." Murataku said as he tried to convince Piyoko's protectors to leave him alone. As he walked back into Gamers sullenly, he made a promise that he would find the girl again.
(I'll do another chapter in the near future if I can figure out how. If I can't, look for a story with an identical name marked cont.)