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Translation of my fanfic "Rock Skies" for "Hamwi2000". I hope you like it.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Keitaro U. - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,609 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 11-27-11 - Published: 11-22-11 - Status: Complete - id: 7572611
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Chapter 5.

Naru, who was a few feet away from Raymond, noted control in his hands.

Raymond: Now I kick you out the race, Urashima.

Naru: YOU CROOKS!

Naru ran to him and punched him, causing him to fall behind. Unfortunately, it was over the control, which activated a small rocket that had been placed underneath the Keitaro's skateboard.

Keitaro: AAAAAAHHHHHH!

He went flying and hit Shina, who was right in his front. The two fell in the middle of the track and the girl hit her head, getting knocked out. As for Keitaro, only then he discovered the rocket under his skateboard.

Keitaro: *taking the rocket* Okuni was right: the Emo Powers will do anything to win, especially Raymond. Well, I better get back rac... AAAIII!

Keitaro felt a horrible pain and soon discovered why: in the fall, he had twisted his knee and couldn't get up. And the panic increased when he saw Raymond, already recovered from the punch of Naru past him toward the finish line.

Keitaro: I know how to win! Just hope it works.

Keitaro sat on his skateboard and used his power, the power of air, as an engine. Raymond was shocked when his rival passed him and crossed the finish line first.

Presenter: *excited* VICTORY OF ROCK SKIES!

The Hinata's girls cheered, especially Naru. So much so that after Keitaro gave way in a twist of the knee and received the trophy for the winner, she gave him a kiss movie that made everyone whistle.

Naru: *excited* CONGRATULATIONS, KEITARO!

Raymond: *sulk* Yeah... congratulations. Even as an old senile, you still have way.

Keitaro: *ignoring the "old senile"* Yeah, thanks. But you don't forgotten anything?

Raymond: *sigh* Deal is deal.

He activated his power and back sucked the energy of women, causing them to awaken from the coma. Including Shinobu and Okuni, this without understanding what happened.

However, along with the victory's party, came the parting.

Sakamoto: Yeah, nice review it all again. Well, I think it's time for goodbye.

Kaito: Not a "goodbye" is a "see you soon". If depend on Raymond, we will still face. And we can talk over the webcam communicators of our clocks.

Okuni: Truth. And good luck with your girlfriend, Kei-kun.

The four have a group hug, even though everyone thought it strange. No matter how old they were, the "adventures" were just beginning.

And if it were up to Raymond, would still be many.

THE END!

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