|Naruto Master of Red Death
Author: Black-Kat 012 PM
When he was young, Naruto received a very interesting father-like figure in his life... entirely! Might change the rating in the future. Slight AU Strong!Powerful! Naruto. PLZ review and Help me make this story popular! PLEASE! UPDATE: ON HIATUSRated: Fiction K+ - English - Naruto U. - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,302 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 12-31-12 - Published: 12-18-11 - id: 7647418
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HELLO READERS! ;D due to me and my ongoing battle with school (until christmas break) i won't be doing so much stories as i used too...
...*ignores* BUT, here is a little preview of my NEWEST story and i want YOU (yes, the one reading this) to help me out on how the plot will be like. True, i am going to plan a surprise character in here as well as a new clan, but i want everyone to help me out on this one. NO EXCEPTIONS!
Now, enjoy the story... *has a bag of popcorn in hands*...Popcorn anyone?
(A/N: I don't own any of this except the plot)
'Why are they beating me up?'
'I... I don't understand...'
'Why does everyone stare at me like that?'
'Why, why does everyone hate me?'
'I… I don't want to live anymore… I wanna die!'
"THAT'S IT!" yelled a male voice in the darkness. The man's voice was coming inside a huge cage with a paper on the outside of the cell; strangely, it had the kanji word for 'seal' on the paper. Suddenly, a slight glow came from inside the cage, and soon became a fiery combustion that collided to the cage. Soon, a figure came out of the flames; it was a tall male that stood 6 ft 8, wore a black trench coat, a gray sweater, black slacks, and black shoes. But the strangest thing was the person himself; the man's skin was very red, with a narrow face that had no nose and yellow eyes and iris, he had long dark red claws for hands along with a very long claw on his right index finger, and he had purple dreadlocks.
After the fire portal was gone, the cage was back to normal; like nothing happened. The mysterious man soon adjusted himself, took out a pair of sunglasses from his coat pocket, and put them on. He soon walked out of the cage's entrance before hearing a booming voice behind him.
"Thrax," it said, sounding calm,"Be careful out there, the world you knew is long gone, and you could be the only one that could remember the past better than any old timer. I hope that you could do something to protect me and my vessel, you know…"
The man, now named Thrax, looked back at the cage and smiled a bit. "Aw, don't worry, babe," he said back to the cage, his voice sounding of a persuasive African American "I swear on my membrane cells that the kid will live like his own old man, and fight like his mama, that I promise,"
"Just be careful," the voice responded back, showing big glowing red vulpine eyes behind the cage. It didn't even scare the man as he walked out of the entrance and walked even further away from the cell. The creature sighed out, closing its big eyes, thinking to itself, 'that boy better get a good life, otherwise the world will be damned if they messed with THE Red Death himself out there…'
...Well? what do ya'll think of it so far?
Sorry if its short, but i need a more interesting plot or something to get it going.
Anyways, please review and tell me what you think of it so far and help me out
[EDIT 1] ...wow, just... wow. for the first day, this story has gotten over a hundred hits... the HELL? you people like this story and yet you give me no reviews what so ever? Give me some reviews or so help me...
Thrax: Now, now, baby, don't pop a blood vessel... its bad for your health you know.
*sarcastic* Well excuse me, Thrax, but i don't see you what I'VE been through...
Thrax: *sigh* anyways... please leave SOME reviews for this girl, she's pretty much need it to make some use for her ego...
HEARD THAT! YOU ARE A DEAD MAN NOW, THRAX!
Thrax: O.O ... gotta go *runs off*
GET BACK HERE! *runs after him*
(A/N anyways, plz review for me, it will really help me out here, plus send me new ideas as well)