Hi guys thank you for the reviews, look I might not have much time for writing so please bear with me, I'm adding another character

Attention: I do not own owls of ga'hoole only the red devil and demon

Now: the red devil: a plan

The sun was just coming up as the group of owls swooped down into a castle, soren and gylfie where both remembering their flight into St. Aggies locked in the talons of jutt. Soren was bumped out of his memories when he was dropped on the ground he looked around, all around him they're where huge owls the castle they lived in was huge, filthy and was filled with cursing. The red snowy landed on a mound of stones, in his talon was gylfie he let ruby go but kept gylfie to remind them that he was in control. The snowy glared out then spoke "I am the red devil and I rule the shadow forest" he looked at the owls all lined up "who of you is the leader" soren stepped forward "I am" the red devil tightened his hold on gylfie "well then, you are no longer the leader, you and your group belong to me, now…". he said as a great Grey owl shoved soren back in line "you there great Grey, what's your name" he was speaking to twilight who glared "why should I tell you". The red devil liked this owl, he was daring and a fighter, now for the test of loyalty. The red devil held up gylfie "this is why and I own you" he squeezed gylfie who cried out. Twilight wilfed, "twilight, my names twilight". He's loyal to them but that will change the red devil smiled "good boy, I knew you could do it". He looked at a young snowy with his first feathers. His feathers were red too only a shade lighter "ah, demon come here boy" the young snowy stood next to the red devil "this here's my son demon, he also owns you so do as he commands". Demon looked at the chaw of chaws with bright eyes, to soren he didn't look evil just obeying his father. The red evil glared at his owls' "guards, take them to the cages but leave the great Grey. As the remaining chaw of chaws was taken away, the red devil handed gylfie to a guard and gestured to twilight "come to my hollow, boy" but twilight didn't come, instead he launched himself at the red devil. At once twilight was on the ground, and on his back as he turned over two eagle owls held him the red devil tisked " you a naughty owl aren't you, in you weren't a large owl I would of punished you but oh well, to my hollow". Twilight struggled in the talons of his captures, the guards dropped twilight in a large "hollow" a large nest stood in the on the walls where the feathers of many birds both owl and other birds hung in decorative ways. The red devil stroked a tuft of feathers in his nest he saw twilight looking around and laughed "enjoying the view twilight, I sure am". Twilight glared at the snowy who spread his wing "now Twi, can I call you Twi" then he laughed again "of coarse I can, I own you, now to business". He picked at the nest "now, I am offering you a place in my ranks first you will be a soldier then if you work hard you will become a captain, mind you if you fail to be a good student then I will kill you, so how bout it: join us or die". Twilight said nothing but glared the red devil who chuckled "well, I'll give you some time to think, guards" two eagle owls showed up and grabbed twilight "take him to the cages". The owls left while the red devil stared at some white feathers on the wall and mumbled to himself "look out father I'm almost ready" and flew out of the hollow

As the remaining chaw of chaws were led down under the main room they saw many owls in loose formations laughing, fighting, and eating they jeered at the chaw of chaws finally they stopped at large metal cages each of the chaw of chaws were pushed into one. Soren heard Otulissa complaining about the dirty stones and saw an owl shove her grumbling to his partner "this ones gonna be noisy, wish I could finish her off now look what she did to me" he raised his wing to show him the gash. His partner snorted "stop whining or the devil'll have you feathers" then the they left arguing about who was stronger. Soren whispered out "everyone alright" they all replied that they were fine, soren told them to search for weak spots, half an hour later they found nothing. Soren sighed and thought about twilight suddenly the two eagle owls came in holding twilight who was ruffled but seemed ok. he was roughly shoved into a cage and the guards stood outside of the room the chaw of chaws listened to twilight as he told them about the red devil's offer. Ruby, martin, Otulissa, and digger told twilight not to accept but gylfie started working on a way that this could help them, soren stared at gilfie and thought of how to escape. Finally gylfie looked up "I've got it, twilight accept the offer but…" she added after seeing the looks on her friends faces "…find some way to contact the guardians to rescue us" the chaw of chaws agreed. Twilight called the guards who came in glaring twilight told then that he needed to see the red devil then glared but opened the cage and took him away. Ruby turned to gylfie I hope your plan goes alright, gylfie looked at the disappearing guards "me too" then the chaw of chaws turned and started planing

The red devil was hunched over a map with his captains "now this group comes from this side and distracts th…" he stopped at a knock on the hollow and let the guards and twilight in "ah, good". He shooed out the captains saying, "I'll tell you later, now go" they left as twilight spoke "I'll join your ranks, as long as my friends are uninjured and treated well". The red devil smiled "look at you making a deal with your most feared enemy, fine if you'll join my ranks I'll treat your friends well" one talon was hidden and crossed. The red devil laughed a bellowing laugh into the dark castle.

Hope you enjoyed that, oh and please review kindly a fairly, one last thing please bear with me if I'm late again