|The Double Threat of Evil
Author: Witch Knight Daisy PM
Humiliated by his sister, Serkis vows to get revenge...joining forces with an old foe of Captain Haddock. Warnings: Rape and Character death. And HaddockxTintin near the end! Feel free to read and review! Complete with a new ending!Rated: Fiction M - English - Horror/Supernatural - Captain Haddock - Chapters: 13 - Words: 8,757 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 07-16-12 - Published: 03-14-12 - Status: Complete - id: 7925015
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Hey, everybody! Daisy here! Here is the new version of my third fic to the supernatural series! I've reworked it so that it will flow better, and add to the action! I still recommend that you read "Sakharine's Revenge" and "The Captain and the Rose" to understand my OCs (Princess Jamie and her brother Serkis). Anyway, enjoy!
Disclaimer: I do NOT own Tintin!
The Double Threat of Evil
"Outmatched by own sister!" Serkis growled, glancing at his "screen" at Jamie, who was asleep, then waved his hand over it to reveal the sailor known as Captain Haddock, who was also asleep but seemed to be moaning and grunting. "Poor drunk..." the evil prince said with mock sympathy. "Why does Jamie like him so much, let alone Imprint with him? No matter, I'll have my revenge on her. And I have just the weapon to do it." Serkis stepped out of his hideout in one of the hollow mountains of hell to glance down at the bottomless chasm. "And I know SOMEONE who can help me. Someone who hates her just as much as I do. And that sailor." Clapping his hands together, he held them out over the void. Dark energy started to emanate from his fingertips and into the pit. He began to chant:
'Adeo mihi proficisor vos solvo
Alive undead vos vadum exsisto imbibo
Cruor quod erabnt fang
Imbibo mihi mote is exsisto.'
Then he watched as a shadow emerged from the chasm, landing at Serkis' feet. The dark entity reformed itself into a tall, red-suited man with small spectacles. He glared down at the demon prince, not looking too happy to see him.
"What am I doing here? Why is my soul back? Who BROUGHT me back?" The man asked Serkis.
"I did," Serkis replied. "And as for the 'why,' I know your deal with that sailor."
"You mean Haddock." The man sounded annoyed.
"Yeah, him. And my sister Jamie. You two NEVER got along. She even foiled your plan to destroy Tinnie's soul and get revenge on that Haddock guy."
"Yes, and I will NEVER forget that!" The man spat. "I was so close to extingushing the Haddock line for good!"
"Well guess what, um...Sakharine, was it? Today's your lucky day. If you help me take care of my sister, you get to kill that drunk and have your revenge. Sound good?"
"That's MR. Sakharine to you, boy. But it DOES sound like a good compromise. After all, I despise that drunkard Haddock AND that brat Jamie." With that, Sakharine held out a hand to Serkis, who took it.
"But we need to get you a body first," said the evil prince, then smiled. "And I have one marked for you."
*Way better than my first version, don't you agree? Sorry about the crappy title. Anyway, please review and tell me what you think.*