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A Princess at the ball with an imposter
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Alternate ending. What if there had been the tinniest sliver of moon light on the night of the ball and Odette changed. Will Odette be able to prove to Derek that he is about to vow to the wrong Princess? Or, will she die at the hand of Rothbart's spell?
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Suspense/Romance - Words: 318 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 9 - Published: 03-25-12 - id: 7958941
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I am SOOO sorry that this on is so short. my mind wanted to get on with the story. I PROMISE that the next chapters will be longer.

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The thwarted imposter. Chapter one, Athena's bow.

Odette's POV

I sat on the water in the form of a swan, my webbed feet becoming cold and wet in the waters of Swan Lake. I sat forlorn, because Derek's ball was happening tonight and I was stuck as a swan. I could not change into my princess self as the moon wasn't supposed to rise. Just then, I saw a sliver of light from behind Swan Lake castle. The moon had risen, a thin sliver of moon light being the only visible part. This stage was called Athena's bow. It was all that I needed. I swam frantically to the opposite side of the lake, the moon light barely on the edge. The moment my wings touched the moon light, I transformed into Princess Odette in front of the astonished eyes of Speed, Juan bob, and Puffin.

I ran to my white horse, she was hidden in the bushes surrounding the castle. I mounted her quickly, and rode as fast as she could gallop too Prince Derek's castle. I rode through the town square at lightning speed. Serine, my horse, galloped to the steps of the castle in front of the astonished eyes of the footmen. I slid off of her saddle, and hiked up my skirts as I ran swiftly up the stairs. I banged on the door hard three times. Soon I heard chamberlain open the door. He gasped. All of the guests stared up at me in astonishment, especially, Prince Derek and myself in a black dress, an imposter. Rothbart had put an imposter in my place so that Derek would vow to her. He had tried to kill me.

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