|New Star war the Clone wars
Author: Dusk Nightmare PM
Obi-wan finds a strange girl hurt close to the Jedi temple. Twelve years later she becomes his new PADAWAN! My OC character. I suck at summarys the story is so much better! Master Cheechoo is my master OC.Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Clones - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,840 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 05-17-12 - Published: 04-20-12 - id: 8043278
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The New Starwars The Clonewars
CHAPTER 1: REMEMBERING AND MASTERS -'Run! Run for your life before they kill you for having the force or try to turn you evil!' I think to myself. I should explain quickly. My name is Danica Udora Sally Knox. My friends call me Dusk that is if I had any friends. I am extremly force sensitive and I am on a Separentist ship running for my life. I am about 4 years old. Extremly talented at flying and escaping. I am running towards the escape pods and extremly close to them, I had to run for about an half hour just to find the escape pods. "Halt! Stop right there!" a battledroid says blasting at me. I jump into the escape pod dodging the bullets as I go. A bunch of battledroids start running at me when I punch the close button, then the eject button, climbing into the pilot seat, and start flying towards Coruscant.
'Crap!' I think quickly while I look at the fuel tank monitor. "Empty! Just great!" I say. I pull up on the escape pod's steering. "Well... This is one way to get to a Jedi Temple for help!" I say. 'Hopefully they won't think I'm a separentist.' I think to myself. The pod crashes in to the ground. I crawl out of the pod. About 3 feet away from the pod I collapse from pain, about a minute later I pass out. One hand on my head where I have a giant gash and one hand on my stomache where I have a long cut not deep enough to kill but still make me lose alot of blood. I hear quiet footsteps while I am still out cold. "Oh dear! What do we have here?" A man's voice sounds. "Sir it appears to be a wounded youngling sir!" Another voice sounds. " But it doesn't seem to be a new one considering the crashed pod, she's cut up, alone, and not in training robes. I open my eyes quickly instantly regretting it. "Aw she's wake! Tell me your name youngling." The first man's voice sounds. " My name is Danica Udora Sally Knox. Everyone just calls me Dusk. OUCH!" I say as he touches my head where the gash is. "Faer? Carry her back to the temple." the man says. I open my eyes slowly this time. " Your very wounded young one. My name is Obi-wan Kenobi. Tell me are how old are you?" Obi-wan asks. "I am almost 5 soon." I say very carefully. "I sense the force in you and it is very strong." He says standing up quickly. "Sir. I am ready. Sir." the man whom I guess to be Faer spoke. "This is a clone. His name is Faer. He will be taking you to the Jedi Temple where you can rest and heal. Maybe even train your ablity to use your force young Twi'lek." Obi-wan says as Faer picks me up and starts to walk towards the way they seem to come from.-
"Time! Good job Dusk!" Master Cheechoo yells. It's been Twelve years since the fortunate day and I still haven't had a master. "We have your master assignment right here! Congradulations! Come up here and grab it. The rest of you I want 300 laps now!"She finishes quickly. I run up to the platform grabbing my on hand saber and off hand saber on the way. "Master do mean it!" I ask. She nods tears dripping from her eyes. I know why she is crying. ~She got close to me the minute I was brought into the Temple because I am from her Twi'lek tribe, she watched me grow up, I looked like her little sister did when she had left the tribe and when I had arrived she called me Shala. I told her my name is Dusk.~ She hands me the assignment and hugs me. "Good-bye Shala." she crys. "Good-bye Sister." I cry. She is after all the closes thing I have to a family.
I walk into the ship bay quickly, a clone calls me over to a ship, and he takes off his helmet. He smiles happily and I smile back. "Hey Dusk! Finally got a master assignment I see." He says. I mock punch him. "Shut up! Stupid Faer!" I say. He play yanks my hair, quickly putting his helmet on, and takes my hand pulling me on the ship. 'Faer and I totally have a brother sister relationship' I think to myself. "How is it that your the best on your level yet you only now got a master?" He asks. "Because I had to pass all the levels!" I say. "Oh! Slow poke!" he says play punching me. I walk to my temporary bedroom, lay down, and try to sleep on the way to my Master who is on a mission. Faer comes in to wake me up by pulling me off the bed but as soon as he touches me I put my saber to his throat. "Don't touch me like that again." I snap. "Sorry!" He crys. I put my lightsaber away, jump up, and walk towards the mission bay. "Thank you for joinning us youngling." Captain says. "PADAWAN!" I grind my teeth. "Ah yes! My appoligizes."Captain says. "Are we there or not?" I ask. "Ah well yes we are right over the landing zone but there seems to be a problem. The landing zone is not quite clear." He says. "Just land anyway!" I snap at him. "Um... well it's not as easy as it sounds." Faer says nervously. "Yes it is! Your all just afraid! This is war! We need to get down there! I am great at planning and I say we should just dodge the attacks!" I say. "Now swallow that fear and get me down there! NOW!" I bark ordering them to their stations.
Once we start landing I run down to the docking bay. When the door opens a big land that could have once been beautiful was now covered in fire is in front of me. We totally just missed every attack that was faced at us. When we drop down to the "base" area where everyone is gearing up for another attack. "Master Kenobi! It's so good to see you again after twelve years!" I say jumping off the ledge. He looks up gawking in surprise. "Dusk? Why are you here?" Obi-wan Kenobi asks."I'm your new Padawan!" I say laughing happily. " My new what?" he asks shocked. "Master Obi-wan? Aren't you going tell me how you guys met or who she is at that?" The man next to him asks." Oh right! Anakin this is Dusk, my new padawan Dusk this is my old Padawan Anakin." Obi-wan says. "A pleasure to meet you!" I say bowing. "Are you even old enough to be a padawan? You certainly don't seem to be." He snaps. " You may not think so but Master Yoda and Master CheeChoo seem to both seem to think so." I snap back at him. "Sassy youngling."He says. "Go get your head cut off... Better yet Let me do it for you!" I snap hand twitching to grab my lightsaber. "Reminds me of a certain someone!" Master Obi-wan says and turn's his gaze to Anakin. "You'd better fill her in on what's going on!" Obi-wan smirks. "Fine!" Anakin snaps, but as soon as Master Obi-wan walks off Anakin turns to me and smiles. "Hey! Snips get over here!" He says. "Meet Dusk! Fill her in on everything got it?" He asks the small Togruta girl who looks about my age when she came over. "Hi I'm Ahsoka Tano! How old are you?"she asks. "I'm 16 years old. How old are you?" I ask quietly. "Same age."She says. I look up to see a blast coming over head, I push Ahsoka out of the way as the blast lands right on me. "DUSK!" I hear before I'm out cold with a likely concussion.
GOOD CLIFFY HUH? PROMISE TO TRY AND UPDATE SOON. PLEASE REVIEW NICELY AFTER ALL THIS IS MY FIRST FANFICTION! I THOUGHT OBI-WAN COULD USE A PADAWAN WHO IS PRETTY MUCH ACCIDENT PRONE!