
Original 'U,me,aur hum'. A heart-breaking, tear-shedding true story. Holds special meaning to it. Lots of Maltara, and a bit of Kemy. Totally romance. Full summary inside. PLEASE REVIEW!
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Mal F. & Natara W. - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,443 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 06-27-12 - Published: 04-29-12 - id: 8071058
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Hello Lovelys! So, once again, I'm so sorry for...I think maybe it's like a two month delay? And I understand that I say that all the time, but seriously guys, sometimes I can't even sleep because of the guiltiness I feel of leaving you guys off. Anyways not one of my best chapters, but I'm trying to rush off to the exciting parts, so...please stick with me? Please?
Review Replies;
-Katlana Child; Seriously? That means alot! I mean, I know it's not exactly perfect yet, but I have a lot of clinchers and good stuff to go off of once we get to the middle. I mean, I'm just so confused of how to get there you know it's just...ugh!. Anyways, yes if only Ken was back in the real game...That'd make me so happy! Thanks for the review, Shelby!
-But I Have Promises To Keep; Thank you! Now that I think of it, it does sound like the kind of plot you would write for. You know, the emoitonal one, that I'm always talking about how you do such a great job on it? :D And yes, you guessed it! Hindi! I loved the movie, ofcourse I had to watch it in English subtitles, so... Anyways, thanks so much for the review!
-maltararox21; Kai-tie (stolen from Molly), you just made my day! I seriously mean it! Going crazy already hmmm?...how much chocolates was it this time? You honestly DO NOT understand just how much your review made me smile. Like I read it over and over again, just so I feel boosted, LOLzzz. I think I'll continue Something More after finishing this story. Now you have 'BA-BA-BA-BA-BA - LOVIN IT' stuck in my head! Thank you so so so much for your review, you're awesome. LYLAS.
-mozzi-girl; Molly! Long time, no chat! I have to apologize for no reviews on Capital Holiday and Lost in the Blue and I know your other stories are coming since I'm getting emails from suscribing to you, and well,...I'm sawwy :P Damn you guys are good at this! How did you know it was Hindi? Well, it's a good movie, but like I said I watched it with subtitle, so maybe it would have been better if I could understand the other half of what they were saying :P Thanks for the review, Molls. LYLAS.
-writeiton yes it is, but I'm going to use it in a Mal-Natara version instead. Thanks for the review!
-AmberAA hey there! Haven't heard from you in a long time. Thanks for the support, and the review!
-chocolates223, Thank you so much! You made me squeal! And I don't mind. I think it's really cool that you're from Sweden. I love chocolates :D And next time you review, don't worry about your English. Thanks again for the review, Rozie.
-KokoKookieKreme Val, I missed you so much! I'm mentally-and-internetlly hugging you right now! And I think it's life's only JOB to kill us... Thanks so much for the review, Valerie. LYLAS!
Well, like I said guys, this may get a bit boring, but for once, unlike my other stories, I actually have this all planned out. So I'm not like making it as I go like I usually do, but it'll be really good, so please stay in touch! And review? Here it goes;
One more thing, when I write in italics, that means it's back to the past, where the characters want to say something. :D
U, Me, and Us.
Chapter 2
So it had just been a week since I landed a vacation on a cruise. I work for the police, so it was a long-deserved vacation. I just thought of it as a nice way to relax, grab a few drinks, maybe score some dates with the ladies. I didn't know that I'd meet the love of my life.
"Here's your drink, sir." A blonde lady who worked at the cruise's bar handed me my cocktail.
I got up and took a few sips. "Ahhh." So like I said, it was mostly just relaxing. That time in my world, all I cared about was beer, and bringing money home. I didn't have a care in the world. I took everything for granted.
So I went down to the deck to grab myself some entertainment. She was sitting there, happilly serving her customers. She wore a short black skirt, and a white tucked in blouse, and her name tag was hanging to the left of her chest. I didn't exactly know how to talk to her, or introduce myself, but I thought of the stupidest idea. Just as she picked up the last cocktail glass which was half full, she walked right into me, and dropped her drinks.
"Ahh-" It was much worse than I thought. Not only did the drinks slip, but me and her slipped on the cold beverages.
"OMIGOSH!" She yelled as the liquid started creeping up towards her legs.
"Oh-I, I'm so sorry, I-"
"What is wrong with you!" She huffed and got up with her drinks. She stared back at me, and before I could get up, she lend me a hand. I grabbed her hand and got up.
"I'm sorry, I didn't see where you were goi-"
"Yeah, well, someone should teach you how to walk properly. Just, never mind it, I have to get back to work." She ran a hand through her hair and walked forward, bumping me in the shoulder on the way. Great...I had just made it worse...
But there was still one trick up my sleave. I caught up to her, right before she reached the counter. I grabbed the empty cups from her hand and put them back for her. "I'm super sorry about what happened. I honestly didn't see you."
"You know what, it's fine. I just need to get back to work." She turned her back to me and cleaned out the cups.
"Just came to introduce myself. My name is Mal. Again, I'm sorry, but, I can make it up to you."
She turned back around and cocked up an eyebrow. "Oh really? And how is that?"
"Let me take you out for dinner? Or to the deck on movie night? Or we can go Cha-Cha dancing?"
I think that might have been the first moment she looked straight into my eyes, and I knew I was deeply inlove. They were this deep, ocean green colour. She took a step closer to me, which I'll admit, frightened me a bit. "Okay, listen 'Mal' whatever your name is. First of all, I don't go out on dates with random guys that bump into me and spill drinks all over me. Second, don't ever bring up Cha-Cha dancing ever agian -"
"But why n-"
"EVER! And third. Just leave. I know, your sorry, I know it was apperently an 'accident' so can you please let me do my work?. Just don't come back to me"
"Hey do you like kareoke clubs? I can always take you there!"
"Mal, I freakn' swear to God..."
"I can even sing for you if you want!"
"Mal, don't-"
"I wanna know what love iiiiiiiiissss! I want you to show me! Yeaah,"
I thnk that really triggerd her. But I didn't mind. Her mean attitude was sexy. She turned back and I dodged her slap. "Shut up, and dont' sing agian. I'm on the verge of throwing you overboard"
"You don't think I can sing? Well...that's rude. I've been singing since I was 6, did you know that? And I took lessons."
"Right, does it look like I care?"
"So you're still not going to come?"
"Um, hell no!"
"Alright...your choice. Oooh, I wanna dance with somebody."
"Mal, seriously, people are looking at us."
"I wanna feel the heat with somebody, yeeeaahhh, I wanna dance with somebody. Somebody who-"
At that point Natara flipped. She turned around and slapped her hand on my mouth, not allowing me to say a single word. Her hand smelled like some sort of sweet fruit. She broght her face closer so that her nose was just two inches from mine. I could tell everyone was looking cause of how loud I sang, but I didn't really care.
"Okay, okay. Listen, if I go out with you, will you shut up, and leave me alone?" She waited for a response, but none came. "Well?"
I motioned to her hand with my eyes. She released her hands at once, and I inhaled deeply with my mouth. "That is, if we get to pick my choice of resturaunt."
"Yeah, yeah. Whatever."
"Oh, and make sure, you dress up fancy. I'll pick you up around 8:30"
"Yeah, well. See you later 'Mal'"
"Later Natara"
She spun around at once. "How do you know my name?"
"Um...you're wearing a name tag." She slowly looked back down at her shirt and turned red. Natara always hated being proved wrong. But she always looked so cute when she was.
"Yeah, well...I knew that."
I chuckled to myself as I walked back up to my cabin. Tomorrow was going to be a long day...
That's all for now guys! Tell me what you thought. I know, I know, Natara seems overly stubborn. I sort of needed her character to be like that. Anyways, Ken, Blaise, and (ofcourse, who could forget) Kai will be in the chapters sooner or later... Thanks so much for reading, please favourite, suscribe and please review? Or else...A blue girrafe will eat you in your sleep... ;D
-Karen
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