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Good Luck Better Circumstance
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Not dead yet! nor will it ever be! Spike has a crush on Dinky and has finally confessed to her but with the advent of his powers influencing him to try to bed as many mares as possible, will their fledgeling relationship survive? Disclaimer: Harem elements with an underlying relationship between the two characters.
Rated: Fiction M - English - Fantasy/Romance - Spike & Dinky Doo - Chapters: 9 - Words: 15,988 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 26 - Updated: 09-19-12 - Published: 05-23-12 - id: 8144740
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Hey Firefox69 here guys I would recommend taking another look back at Chapter One if you haven't already because I have edited it and added in content to flesh it out better so it's definitely worth a look if you haven't already reread it. As always, have fun everyone!

Spike had just gotten home from school and was nervously pacing in the living room trying to think of how in equestrian he was going to be ready in time. On one hoof, if he asked Twilight or one of the others for help then he would probably have an easier time of it. On the other hoof however, if he asked one of them then he would have to explain why he was so nervous and probably have to put up with their teasing for the rest of his natural life which just so happened to be in excess of 500-1,000 years! But then again, they were bound to find out eventually and then the same thing would happen so why not at least get some good out of it?

Spike was interrupted in the middle of his thought processes by Pinkie Pie popping out of nowhere (as usual Spike noted) saying "Hey there Spikey! Whatcha doin? You look like you are really deep in thought about something important!"

After Spike was done jumping in the air he grumbled with "Yeah it is pretty important but probably nothing you want to hear about Pinkie Pie." Saying this Spike started to walk away.

He was stopped when he heard Twilight say "Oh! Hello Pinkie Pie I thought it sounded like we had guests over and well here we are. So how can I help you today?"

Pinkie Pie excitably pronounced in a singsong voice "~~~Nothing much is going on, It just looked like Spike had a lady friend to lean on~~~3"

Batting her hands at the air in an attempt to clear it of invisible sounds Twilight responded "Really now? You don't say? Why, I always knew this day would come this sounds like the perfect chance to get a good report to send to Celestia!" Then, to Spike, "Hey Spike would you come here for a minute? I would like to have a word with you about school."

Absolutely terrified of what might be about to happen Spike slowly came back into the room. Where he was expecting taunts and jeers from Twilight and perhaps Pinkie all he got was a curious look from Twilight and Pinkie wasn't even paying attention to him. Quietly he said "Yeah, Twilight? What's wrong?"

"Nothing much I was just curious who your new marefriend was. Who is she?" prompted Twilight.

"I don't have a marefriend I just have a filly coming over after dinner tomorrow to do some studying for the school project we are doing in science class. Is it alright if I have someone over after dinner?" was all Spike could think of to say to stave off the questions that he could see forming in Twilight's mind.

Twilight countered by saying "What's her name?"

Spike gave up and said "Fine! Her name is Dinky Doo and I might have a little bit of a crush on her but I doubt she feels the same way about me and I don't feel like taking the risk just to find out. So if you will excuse me I have homework to get back to." With a huff, he turned and walked out of the room to resume trying to figure out how on earth he would get through the following evening.

Twilight was shocked by this confession that her assistant had made and decided it was probably best to go find her friends and talk to them to see if they knew what to do in a situation like this. With Pinkie Pie already close by, she was already one step ahead of her plan and she knew just how she was going to get everyone together.

Firefox69 here, I felt like this chapter was just a little bit too dialogue driven but it was the only idea I could think of with the big reveal to Twilight Sparkle. Still not sure how everyone else will find out so if you have any ideas feel free to leave a review and I will think about it. If I use the idea I will be sure to credit the original author of the idea in the next the way everypony poll is up on my profile please go vote looking for feedback to see if people want other characters involved, thanks1!1

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