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What if... Jack and Sue had acted on the sparks that flew when their fingers touched on their walk back to Sues car, after their kiss in Hillary Kerns office?
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance - Sue T. & Jack H. - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,590 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 08-04-12 - Status: Complete - id: 8394385
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OK, so I don't have a clue what's going on with that 'typo' now. I totally retyped that spot, and it is still coming out with a typo...
Here's the way the line SHOULD read... let's hope it comes out right now...
When Jack calls Sue back after Lucy called him... The line should read: "Sue picked up the phone and took it into her bedroom, closing the door behind her."
Now, I'm HOPING you all can see the change correctly here... it's it's still messed up, I'm sorry, I cannot fix it!
Thanks to all who have taken the time to read and review.
Kim
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