Locked Paths

The re-written version!

It's spring break, everyone!

Well, at least for me. And the previous day I read this story and realized how crappy it was. So I decided to re-do it. I'll be changing the names of the country and the main character, but that's about it, for now, until I find something else I don't like. And I'll be changing the chapters and making them into a less crappy version of themselves. Oh, and I also changed the summary. If you have any ideas on how I could make the story better or any questions, leave a comment or PM me.

For those of you who are new: Every individual refers to themselves as "We" and saying "I" is very forbidden. This takes place in the future where everyone is equal and all have number like 2-7180 as last names. The cities are divided by hair-color.

The story will pretty much follow the plot of The Iron King, which belongs to Julie Kagawa, but the characters are mine. Except Grimalkin,whom I do not own. Julie Kagawa does. I love him so much I just had to put him in this story!

Book sources I will or might be using:

1. The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins

2. The Iron King by Julie Kagawa

3. Anthem by Ayn Rand

Enjoy the story!

Prologue

Dear Kiana,

I'm really not supposed to share this information with anyone. It's dangerous and could lead to the downfall of the entire country. But I feel you need to know. It will happen to you. I can't tell you who I am right now, and I probably never will, but just know that it's someone who loves and cares for you. You're society is scary right now, and my people have all been confined. So I am telling you this in hopes that you will change it for the better. Please, bear with me.

-a friend