Writer-sama: I remake this chap

Yukie: WHAT? WHY?

Writer-sama: Well, I checked it and it sounded quite boring so I made it more interesting

Yukio: That is so like you…

Airisu: You keep writing and writing fanfic

Rui: Well, she has a lot more free time now

Chapter 1: A New Beginning

The sun had sunken below the horizon and what left was the dark blue sky along with the moon, stars and…two people

At a small village, there was a beach. It was really quiet. The wave kept moving up and down slowly. The water splashed to the sand. The sand looked as dark as the sky

A teenage boy who had tan skin and dark long blue hair tied in low tail. His shinning emerald gaze rested on a stone, then gazed into the night sky peacefully

Next to him was a little girl who looked smaller than him. She also had tan skin and emerald eyes liked him except for her hair was black and shorter than him. Same as him, she also enjoy looked at the stars

The more stars they saw in each moment, the more happy they were

"Look Mel, A COMET" The little girl bounced up, excited. As she pointed to a luminous comet that was moving on the sky

When the teenage boy saw it, he replied to the little girl with a smile full of happiness but hurry at the same time

"Mal, hurry and a make a wish or else we would lose the chance"

As fast as the wind, they clapped their hands together and closed their eyes. Soon, everything turned to pitch black and there was a small voice

"There is someone in this world…is waiting for me…and…who is that person?"

Writer-sama: Okay, how did that sound? I know it is much shorter than the 'failed' one but I feel much better when I read it

Yukie: I am not good at explaining

Yukio: I think it it…much better and more suspense

Rui: A quiz for people who read it. Mel and Mal, which one do you think is Shuu?

Airisu: Pls answer it by click give us a message through REVIEW