|A New Take on an Old Story
Author: ANEwrites PM
What if the clue hunt never existed? What happens when the Kabras and Cahills attend the same boarding school? AmyxIan DanxNatalieRated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Amy C. & Ian K. - Chapters: 12 - Words: 4,408 - Reviews: 38 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 17 - Updated: 03-14-13 - Published: 09-24-12 - id: 8553861
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A/N: The readers have spoken! And… it was a tie. :P So, I'm going to continue this story, but I'm also starting a new one. The new one will be called "Love Story", definitely more fast-paced and more romance than this one. So, for those of you who love Amian like me, maybe the other story is better for you! So, without further adieu, here is Chapter 5.
Chapter 5: The Party Part 2
Ian was a little bit anxious. He had never been this far into New York before. Just then, he saw lights in the distance. As the limo grew nearer, he saw the lights grow into a giant party house complete with a giant front lawn.
Natalie stepped daintily from the car and winced when she found that her feet had gone to sleep in her 3-inch stiletto heels. Ian followed in a formal outfit and matching shoes. He scanned the lawn and was distracted by a lone redheaded figure wandering around randomly. Preoccupied, he told his name to the bouncer and walked along.
Meanwhile, Natalie had already gone up to the front door of the mansion. She saw Jonah and put on her best guest manners, as though he was really very important.
"Hello, Jonah." She said politely.
"Hola, Natalie, ¿cómo estás?" Jonah said in Spanish.
Puzzled, Natalie replied, "Nueve?"
At this, Jonah burst out laughing. "Sorry, Natalie, I asked how you were…. And you replied 'Nine' hehehe.."
"Well, haha, but Spanish is for lower-class people. All high-ranking aristocrats like the Kabras learn French, & Italian!"
"So, you're saying that I, Jonah Wizard, multi-millionaire, am lower-class?"
"Um, yeah. That was sort of obvious."
Jonah smirked and said, "Well, try getting this place, aristocrat. Don't matter if you're the richest 10-year-old in the world, unless you've got a rep here in the States, you won't get it!"
"Whatever, I don't care about your little bachelor pad, let me in!"
"Your wish is my command, cousin…."
When the door closed behind her, she could still hear him laughing.
As she toured the house, though she found that she knew almost everyone in the building, which was a nice change from school, but not quite because everyone in the house was a Cahill.
Ian saw Amy on the lawn chatting with a blonde-haired boy. He instantly felt jealous, but then he shook it off a little bit and approached the two.
Amy turned 'round and said, "Hi, Ian. This is Evan Tolliver. Apparently, Jonah invited him in addition to all the Cahills at the party." Then she turned to Evan and said, "This is Ian Kabra, he's my somewhat-cousin."
"Hi, Ian, how are you today?"
"I'm quite well, actually. You?"
"Fine. Where do you go to school?"
"St. Charles'. It's a boarding school."
"Oh, cool, me too. I guess I'll see you around, the buffet is calling me…"
Amy giggled at this. "Bye Evan."
"Bye, babe." He kissed her on the cheek and left.
This brought back Ian's jealousy, like a LOT. It also left a silence between Amy and him.
"So, I see you're dating Tolliver."
"Uh, yeah. He just asked me out yesterday."
Ugh, too late again! Ian thought. "Oh. Cool. So…"
"Um, I have to go, Ian, I have to find Dan. See you later…" And she turned around, sparkling, and walked off, leaving Ian broken-hearted behind her. It was then that Ian began to hate Evan Tolliver.
A/N: Did you love it? Or do you want to tear it to pieces and eat them? Review please!