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Hollywood Heights Fanfic - The Price of Fame
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This is just a story leading from after the Beach Bungalow on what I think should've happened.. lol I suck at writing, don't judge! XD Thanks too a guest for giving me an amazing name for it. I need more feedback and reviews on what you think should happen!
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 11,973 - Reviews: 58 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 12-02-12 - Published: 10-09-12 - Status: Complete - id: 8595911
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AN: Sorry for not updating this one also, you guys just don't seem to like it! Tomorrow will (hopefully) be a new chapter of The Amazing Life of Loren Madson, guys, give me some reviews! :)
Melissa
Melissa was sitting in the car in the passenger seat next to Ian, she glanced backwards to Eddie and Loren, who were of course kissing. A small grin formed on her face and she turned to Ian who was focused on the road, but of course his mind also seemed to be wandering elsewhere, she decided she would snap his daydream, ha ha she laughed to herself.
"So, Ian." Melissa said calmly, if she were to talk any louder he might crash them.
Ian jumped a bit at her talking, expecting the awkward silence to stay that way till they arrived at their destination, "Oh, yeah what?" Ian said, bewildered by her sudden communication still.
"I was just going to ask what your thinking about" Melissa said as she giggled. Ian took in her words for a few moments. What should he say? He knew he was thinking about Melissa, was there a future relationship possibility between him and her, or if she was going to go running back to Tyler. He wasn't trustworthy, he thought. I mean he freaking kidnapped her just to go and have a "talk", more like trying to steal her back. He went through the words to say over and over in his head, as if he was going to make a mistake before he replied.
"Well, to be honest. You, what kind of descision are you planning to make about your er-" Ian sort of blushed as he stopped mid-sentence to think about the right words, "Umm, your relationship status?" Melissa giggled a bit the way he said it like they were on facebook. She considered her options once more in her head, a british party-guy who she barely knew but was pretty hot, or a black haired greened eyed freak who kidnapped her for around five minutes of socializing. She knew what the right choice was.
"Ian, I like you honestly. I don't think Tyler is my match, I'm the party and he's the bad boy. You mister, are the party. Your basically me in a man plus drinks." Melissa replied with a small laugh at the way she said plus drinks. Ian was so happy that she was going to be giving them a chance, he really did see a spark in her, something that told him there was going to be a relationship between them, and it could last forever, always be open to options, Ian told himself. A chance at true love, but could he tie himself down to one women?
They arrived at Loren's house first, and Ian thought Loren would simply get out by saying goodbye, but she hadn't opened the door. He turned around and saw Loren and Eddie in an intense make-out session. He laughed, "Hey mate, I hate that I have to interrupt this but Loren, darling, were home." Loren blushed because she knew Ian and Melissa had been talking and didn't really take much notice of them, but she was wrong. She turned to Eddie to say goodbye and he replied, "Are you sure you don't want to spend the night at my place? It gets kind of lonely.." He shuddered, he just really didn't want to let Loren go.
Loren thought about it, would her mom let her stay the night at Eddie's? She was eighteen, considered an adult. But would she want to? She decided she would text her mom.
TEXT:
TO: Mom 3
From: Loren Tate
Mom, can I spend the night at Eddie's?
TO: Loren
From: Nora Tate
I don't know honey. Are you going to be okay?
To: Mom 3
From: Loren Tate
Yes, I am. Please, trust me.
TO: Loren
From: Nora Tate
Fine, just be smart baby. Make the right descisions.
To: Mom 3
From: Loren Tate
Thank you so much! Love you!
TO: Loren
FROM : Nora Tate
Love you too. Have fun, just not too much fun.
To: Mom 3
From : Loren Tate
Lol. Love u.
End Text
"What'd she say Lo?" Eddie asked, hopefully. He really didn't want to have to say goodbye to Loren.
"She said yes!" Loren exclaimed happily.
"Okay, so I guess we're going to Eddie's house then.." Ian said as he turned the wheel to back out of the driveway.
AN: Guys, they can't you know.. I'm just not fit to write that lol. I'm so stuck w/this one so please review with your opinions and what you want to happen! Please! :) Sorry it's short too, as I said, I'm kind of on a drought of ideas, so unless one of you peoplez gives me ideas, I can't write :( Thanks a lot for like no reviews or feedback, your pissing me offf... lol should I just stop writing if none of you care?
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