|Things starting to get rough
Author: hi2b2 PM
This is a story created by me based on black rock shooter 'Innocent Soul'. Please read and review. I want to get this as good as I can. Also please tell me whether I should continue this story or not for I don't know whether it appeals to you. The most people who say win. If there is the most people saying that I should continue then I will continue.Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Spiritual - Black★Rock Shooter - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,205 - Reviews: 4 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12-25-12 - Published: 10-29-12 - id: 8652849
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Up on top the mountain they waited. Waiting for the day when they would be released from there prison; or was it that they waited for the time when they could shed blood once more.
"Rock! HEY ROCK! GET UP FOR THE L" cut short the snake choked as he was lifted into the air with steady yet unyielding hands.
"Look the snake can seemingly talk. Let us see if we can bring this guy back to our small cottage hmmmm? Maybe he would entertain us more than those filthy people. And if he doesn't than we can always have the chance of killing and eating him. I bet he would taste good don't you think." Looking over to this tall framed beast something in the dark ways chuckled loud and hard; Ron could hardly figure out whether they were human, stagnated souls or something else.
"you always was the brightest in are family" The tall framed figure flinched as the other one came out of his hiding place. " that is a great idea, but what are we going to do with the girl? Kill her?"
With a swift motion the tall one moved to the other side in order to examine the girl on the ground. " She does seem to strong, tis but would be a waist if we kill her. Maybe when she wakes we may put her to work. Yes that's it; she could help us kill every little thing in the town below us! once more blood shed will rise. There is one thing that I find quite curious though, why might this girl have been walking around with this snake. Seems kind of off doesn't it." The face of the tall figure came into view as it hit a ray from the street lights. It was blank, just skin, it was flat. You could tell it was thinking hard for its face scrunched up. Then a slit appeared below the middle of the blank face. It revealed shard fangs that seemed to have years worth of biting through flesh and bone. " do you think that maybe this girls snake is her pet. or maybe its her weapon." Poor Ron was twisted and turned in so many ways he couldn't remember the individual agony from all of them. It seemed as though they were studying him. Trying to figure out what he is. He couldn't bare it any more; swinging his head around Ron barely reached his target. When he bit into the flesh of his holder its stone like features objected.
"Aw look. He seems to want to play is that it." the figure holding him now towered over him "indeed friend, he does seem to want that." The grip hardened making it ever so painful with each breath Ron took. " Lets take him to our cottage on the mountain before we play, bring the girl too."
Later as the sun started to rise. Ron awoke in a cage on what seemed to be a mountain towering over the city below. Looking around he saw Rock ,still unconscious, and on the floor. He found no sign of the aggressors from last night. They seemed to have disappeared. The room looked like it was falling apart. All the walls were peeling off and some of the roof that held the room together seemingly broke. Not the most appealing place ever. Ron sighed and looked at the cages front to see if it was locked. It pushed right open seemingly beckoning for him. He decided to exit even if it was trapped.
He looked at the table he was on. It looked like it was a butchers table; very disgusting thoughts of what happened on this table shot through his head as he slithered. Ron shivered at those terrible thoughts. He didn't want to become what was chopped up on that table. Moving ever so carefully over to where Rock laid Ron had then got on top of the unconscious figure.
"Rock, come on wake up! A stupid punch to your head shouldn't have knocked you out this cold! Wake up, I know your faking it!" Ron had reached through the thoughts of rock as she slowly rolled into consciousness. Her eyes lids started to rise and her fingers twitched but she didn't quite get far. Ron figured he would have to do that again. Many minutes pasted with Ron yelling at the girl below. Slowly again she came, Her eyes came wide open with a wild look in them. The fire light in the left eye once again and she sat up looking around.
Rock couldn't believe she was knocked out so cold. She was taken by surprise. Never has this happened to her before.
Rock jumped up. She grabbed Ron and ran to the door. She took the nob and turned it yet it resisted. She shook it hard to the point where you would think it would come off but the nob didn't. "Ron."
The snake nodded and turned into a huge cannon. Rock fit her left arm in it and backed away from the door. Aiming at the central point of the door she launched the attack. The ray shot strait at the door seemingly powerful enough to destroy a building. when it collided with it the beem shot off and dissipated in many directions.
Shocked and with out words Rock went down to her knees. She dropped the cannon and let it turn back into Ron. Crazy thought started to go through her head as she thought of whether or not she could escape and how she would if she had the ability to escape. The snake decided to leave Rock alone to her thoughts as he went around to figure out how that door could of deflected the beem so easily. He slithered over to the other corners of the hut to see if anything is out of place and surly there was...
Tell me if I should continue this or not. Sorry if I'm not good at the writing for I never been good at English writing. If you want you can give me snitches I should fix that are in the story and constructive criticism. I have not been on fan fiction for along time now so I would like to get more use to it. I use to have many other stories but I deleted them for I saw fit that they shouldn't be there. Tell me what you think.