Hi I am a new writer so I don't know if this story will turn good but if you find it has hope please give me ideas and reviews please

THE ADVENTURES OF RYOUTARO IN DRAGON KNIGHT WORLD

Chapter 1-Problem in Denliner

(Ryotaro's pov)

"Urataros what is your problem" Momotaros said." Sempai I just drank your coffee and ate your cake" Urataros said.

I was looking at them. Suddenly Ura and Momo started fighting. There were no passengers in the train. It was a really critical fight both got injured badly. Hana san was not there in the train. Owner came there looking really worried.

"If you do not stop fighting I will cast you out "Owner said. Naomi asked "Why are you looking worried".

At that time a big portal opened. The whole train got sucked in. I even saw

Zero liner getting sucked into the portal.

"The dimensional barrier of another world and our world got weak so now we have to go to another world for some time"

"Hey are you going to have fun without us "as I heard Kotaro.

I saw Kotaro and teddy behind us.

This chapter was not long next will be longer reviews please.