|On thin ice
Author: Kazu lucky dog PM
After getting lost Mia finds herself in a mountain in the cold snow. And then a stranger offers help. I know bad summaryRated: Fiction T - English - Adventure/Friendship - 13 Brush Gods - Chapters: 2 - Words: 807 - Reviews: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 11-17-12 - Published: 11-09-12 - id: 8688548
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I'm going to make this story in first person
Recap: She seemed amazed at how big it was when she tried picking it up she wasn't even able to budge it. 'this is probably from the man' "Don't touch that" she immediately turned her head when she heard the voice coming from the cave's entrance.
Looking back I saw a person stand at the cave's entrance. The person came closer and closer to me until he was right in front of me. 'H-hello" I muttered the person in front of me was a young man holding an old smoking pipe. His hair was white with red, "Are you the one who saved me?" I asked though it was obvious. He blew the smoke from his pipe and shook his head. "He did" he said pointing at a young man laying against the cave's wall. 'I didn't even notice him' his chest was heaving and his eyes closed, he was sleeping without making a sound.
The smoking man walked over to the sleeping man, he crouched and nudged him with the pipe. "It-It wake up... Itegami wake up she's awake" he whispered to the sleeping man, but he was talking loud enough for me to hear his every word. "Itegami...isn't that a goat of the brush gods" I thought out loud. Then I noticed the man shiver, then I heard a laughter". The man suddenly fell over bursting with laughter. 'okay...i'm not getting the joke' I thought and looked as the man wiped away his tears of joy. "what's so funny" "ah, i-it's nothing" the man said. "hhmm, Moegami your too loud" I heard a voice spoke tiredly. I looked down and saw the man named Itegami woke up. I felt a sudden chill run down my spine and hugged my arm in attempt to warm up even a little. Moegami walked over to me put his hand on my shoulders. At first I wanted to pull away but I relaxed when I felt a sudden warmth run though my body. I just wanted to melt right into it...'hm, wait what' Moegami got his hands off my shoulders and smiled. Moegami smiled at me and I smiled back for some reason I felt comfortable, but it soon vanished when I glanced at Itegami. The young man's white hair barley covered his hostile blue eyes. 'what's with him?' I got pulled out of my thoughts by Moegami "So who are you...and what were you doing in our mountains...