|Hey! I've Just Met You! 3
Author: Leddie4eva PM
Mel and Ian were dating first...Chloe cheated on Eddie...Cam cheated on Loren...Eddie instantly fell in love with Loren when he heardher play a song she wrote on a hill, which was both their spot... Read to find out more... Review... BYE!Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Drama - Loren T. & Eddie D. - Chapters: 20 - Words: 30,029 - Reviews: 114 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 30 - Updated: 02-12-13 - Published: 01-04-13 - id: 8876248
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Hey Guise! So, I decided to change the route I was taking in my fanfics. I wanted this one to start when Mel and Ian were dating first, and they introduced Loren and Eddie. Valley Girls and Famous Boys, yeah that could work. Please, if you don't like my fanfic, please review so that I know what I should change. And of course, if you like it, still review. Oh yeah, I'm getting my swagger back!
Setting: Mel and Ian at the café.
Mel: Gosh, babe, I'm a much better photographer than you.
Ian: In your dreams love, but I'll say, your pretty good.
Mel: Hmm, pretty good, I'm amazing. I mean, you are too and all, but I'm much better than you.
**Mel and Ian both laugh**
Ian: Wow, ego much?
Mel: Yeah that's m-
**Mel's phone rings**
Mel: Hold on, one sec Ian. (Phone convo) Hello?
Person: Hey Mel, can you come over? I just, really need a friend right now.
Mel: Oh gosh Lo, of course, anything for you.
**She hangs up and goes back to talking to Ian**
Mel: I'm sorry babe, I have to go talk to Loren, it sounds like she really needs me.
Ian: Of course love. You know, Loren's a really good friend, and she deserves someone really nice. We should set her and Eddie up.
Mel: Yeah, we should. I mean, Lo is like my best friend ever, and I know that Cam isn't the one for her, we should set them up, I want her to be happy.
**Mel kisses Ian, then goes to see Loren**
*****Setting 2: Eddie's penthouse*****
Eddie's thoughts: Can I really be this stupid? I loved Chloe, and I wanted to spend every possible moment of my life with her, then she lies about everything. And on top of that, she cheats on me. I just need someone that's perfect, someone who likes me for me, not Eddie Duran the rock star, my life is so complicated.
**Eddie gets up to answer the door**
Eddie: Get the heck out of here!
Person: But Eddie, I love you!
Eddie: No you don't Chloe! I'm not even sure you love anybody.
Chloe: Nobody will ever love you the way I did, you have to understand.
Eddie: You know what, you're right, you never loved, me so completely true.
**Eddie slams the door in Chloe's face**
**He flops back onto the couch when his phone rings**
Person: Come on mate, you sound bummed out.
Eddie: I sure am Ian, this girl just won't leave me the hell alone.
Ian: Well good news mate. Don't you want to meet the perfect girl?
Eddie: Of course Ian! Who is she?!
Ian: She is the best mate of my girl Mel. Trust me mate, she's your type.
Eddie: I don't know man, it's just th-
Ian: Okay perfect mate, see you at Rumor tomorrow at 7.
*****Setting Three: Loren's bedroom*****
Loren: I went to s-see him, and I saw him all over this other girl. You know it was just kind of weird, because I didn't even cry, well until now, I just screamed at him and left. You were right Mel, he wasn't for me.
Mel: Well, you know Ian right? Eddie Duran is his best friend. And trust me Lo, he isn't Eddie Duran, the rockstar, he's Eddie Duran, the sweet boy with feelings and a heart of gold. He'd be perfect for you Lo. We're all going to Rumor tomorrow at seven.
Loren: Well okay, he sounds really sweet. But I don't really think that it'll work out.
Mel: Trust me, it's going to work out
*****Setting Four: Around 10pm at Loren's spot*****
Loren: I never should've trusted my judgment,
I let myself slip again.
I thought you said you loved me,
I guess I was imagining.
But don't you let my words fool you,
I'm gonna be okay.
I'm gonna be stronger, stronger, stronger,
Without you, ohh yeah, without you.
*****Please bear with me I don't write lyrics*****
Person: Wow, that was really amazing.
**Loren jumps up and she blushes**
Loren: Well, um- thanks.
Person: You must me Loren.
Loren: Yeah, how did you know that?
**Person takes off disguise**
Loren: Oh, hi Eddie.
Eddie: Loren, that song was beautiful.
Loren: Yeah um w-well thanks. (blushes and looks down at her feet)
Eddie: Are you okay?
Loren: Not really, boyfriend of the year cheated on me. He told me he loved me, then just cheated on me. I'm n-not sure that's love.
Eddie: Oh no, it's not. And it seems like we are in the same situation, Chloe cheated on me too, but she told multiple lies.
Loren: (looks down) Yeah, well I should go… (starts walking away)
Eddie: Loren wait! (grabs Loren's arm)
Eddie: We should go out, by ourselves. Do you want to go to lunch tomorrow?
Loren: Sure! (smiles)
***Loren and Eddie both g back to their homes thinking about each other***