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outofyoghurt
Topic: Correction Game
I don't know if this will work or not but the boards are...rather slow, so there's no harm in trying.

So normally you quote a line from the movie but make a small (or big...) change and the person below corrects it, eg: "Screws fall out all the time, the world's a terrible place." However because everyone here is such a TBC nerd that would be a pointless exercise.

SO, I thought someone should state a sentence then the person below will change something to make it quirky and funny.

Give it a go?

I'll start basic, if/when it takes off it will get slashy so I'll start clean too. Have fun with this one.

P.S. In my first sentence here it was so hard not to write condoms instead of lunch. Me and my mind...

Andy gave Allison as kiss, she swooned, he took her hand and then the two began to walk to Happy Foods for lunch.

#1 Sep 07th 2007, 5:26am
TWbasketcase
Oh man, you're so WAITING for me to turn this perverted, aren't you? XDDDD Oh man. I love this place sometimes XD

Andy gave Allison as kiss, she swooned, he took her hand and then the two began to walk to Happy Foods for lunch.

Andy gave Brian a kiss, he swooned, and the two began to walk to happy foods for sex.

Oh dear god I fail..............................

*falls over*

#2 Sep 07th 2007, 10:47pm
Sadie Lovegood
Oh, can i write one? Kristen didn't post a new one...

Bender obviously doesn't read much, as he couldn't pronounce "Moliere."

~Sadie

#3 Sep 11th 2007, 5:46pm
TWbasketcase
...I didn't know I supposed to XD It didn't really say in the rules!
#4 Sep 12th 2007, 10:50am
outofyoghurt
Sorry I was a bit sketchy about that, but yes, post a new sentence after correcting one.
#5 Sep 13th 2007, 3:21am
TWbasketcase
Oh okay. I was wondering about that. :D But it's all good. I guess Sadie has my turn then....so I'll wait. :)
#6 Sep 13th 2007, 3:01pm
Sadie Lovegood
LOL, i already DID post...

Bender obviously doesn't read much, as he couldn't pronounce "Moliere."

Yogurt, your avi is priceless.

~Sadie

#7 Sep 28th 2007, 7:27pm

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