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Thug-4-Less
Topic: History Of The Saga
What ever happened to that?
#1 Dec 16th 2005, 9:58am
Bombsquad
Powers at be cut it because it wasn't a story. I still have a copy of it though, and I've been tweaking it.
#2 Dec 17th 2005, 1:48am
Thug-4-Less
That sucks. I guess it'll go up on the website?
#3 Dec 17th 2005, 8:46am
Bombsquad
Pretty much, it'll require tweaking since it's first incarnation wasn't entirely accurate. But I was working with a half dozen Sci-fi verses...so it might be a little off.
#4 Dec 18th 2005, 7:36am
Barricade
Hello, just curious but where's the website for this series as I didn't see it listed here, or when Bombsquad posted at spacebattles.com
#5 Dec 22nd 2005, 8:23pm
Bombsquad
I don't have a website yet for it, that's a little way off at the moment.
#6 Dec 23rd 2005, 4:09am
SpartanCommander
I was wondering if you were ever going to start the Transformers G1 universe in your story?

I sent messages asking but never got a responce.

It would be interesting having the Imperium being invaded by a Desepticon faction being led by Starscream and the Imperium slowly being over whelmed by the Desepticons superior technology, experiance, and fire power.

and Then the Covenant and the Coalition being caught in the crossfire between the power hungry Desepticons and the Noble Autobots. Then have the Borg also encounter alot of trouble with dealing with them because any attempts at assimilating a Transformers only lead to any borg ships in that area get's infected by the cybertonian's personality and the borg in that area start acting like him. (It would be interesting to see a bunch of Borg acting like Runabout and Runamock or even the Dead End)

#7 Mar 27th 2006, 9:56am
Thug-4-Less
Well, that was a mouthful. I can't really speak for BombSquad but I think that the big players are set for the time being in the main storyline. Maybe they'll be introduced later on, maybe not. You could always start writing a spin-off featuring some of those participants, though you'd have to be careful about how events in your story would affect the main thread. I for one, while a fan of old school Transformers, have little knowledge on that universe.

Well, anyway, hopefully the Big Cheese will have some input.

Later.

#8 Mar 27th 2006, 9:05pm
SpartanCommander
Ya thanks though I'm not completly sure abou how good I am at writing fan fictions I'm good at helping create plot.

The idea that went along with it was that I considered the Cybertonians age as a race. I realized that their potenchialy the oldest fictional race created that has not actually destroyed themselves. I compared how old the transformers history dates are and I discovered that Some of them are about 100 million years old and they are still funcional. So I dedudsed that they are probably as old as the Foerunners. So this robotic race probably encountered the Foerunners when they were setting up the Halo network. I would think that the first encounter would be bad since lets consider the Foerunners have used every race they know of as a variable in a experiment they probably thought of themselves as superior to every other race. An encounter with a race with tech as advanced or close to as themselves probably caused the Foerunners to think the Cybertonians are just the left over of a race that long died out and attempted to use them in their experiment. Unfortionaly for the Foerunners it has only been 100 years since the Robots freed themselves from the oppresive rule of the Quintezons and they did not want to be slaves again. So the Foerunners had their first intergalactic battle. The Foerunners caught by supprise and unprepared were not able to put up a adequate resistance to keep the Cybertonian tide at bay. So the Foerunners left behind the humans they already seeded in that galaxey and retreated through the Ring. Then to prevent the Cybertonians from following them they damaged the ring on the recieving end. Then the Foerunners isolated that Galaxiy and shut down or damaged all other rings that led there.

Then History played out with the Foerunners vanishing into time. However the Cybertonians did not share this fate. Instead their race lived on and grew. Then came the Great War where the race split into two factions Autobot and Decepticon. It was only a matter of time until the war reached where the stranded humans were and then they played a part in this massive war. Time went on and Soon the origional Desepticon leader fell and Galvatron aroze with Starscream being his first victem unfortionaly for the Desepticon forces they did not know that Galvatron would lead them down a path of ruin. Even the Autobots gained a new leader after Optimus Prime's death the Autobot warrior Hot Rod became Rodimus Prime the Autobot's new leader.

Then A series of vicoties followed and the Autobots soon took complete control of Cybertron the Cybertonian race's homeworld. The Desepticons were forced to retreat to a planet called Charr.

After a series of scirmishes and battles soon Cybertonians once dead arose again first Starscream was able to gain a new body for his servises in trying to rebuild Unicron the planet eater however he was tossed into space tumbling out of control after a explosive charge riged by the Autobots was detonated. Then Optimus Prime returned and them a temporary truce was established. However it did not last. 4 years later Galvatron attacked several Autobot outposts and key solar systems and the Great War continued. However soon new players entered the game. The Quintezons however still held back only watching the war waiting for the perfect chance to strike. However Starscream did not die in space he was able to reach an uninhabited system and began to build himself an army. First he began building an elite unit from personality components form old Desepticons inside the Desepticon crypt he was trapped in on Cybertron. He then loaded them into several shells and then he created his first soldiers A seeker Gesault squad. Then came the building of his own forces and at first slowly but soon speeded up rapidly and a fleet grew exponentionaly. Starscream now had a new force but he still considered himself a Desepticon and wanted to take control of the Desepticons from Galvatron. Soon he orgenized a strike against several Autobot and Desepticon Mining and energy production fasilities on many worlds. Now the war turned into a 3 way fight.

However as the fight progresses many of Galvatron's Desepticons defected to Starscream. The Combatacons, the Stunticons, Shockwave, the remaining Seekers under Galvatrons command, and the Insecticons joined up with Starscream.

However it soon became apparent that Starscream's forces could not hold off both Autobots and Desepticons at bay indefinatly his forces were loosing ground.

On the other Sie of the gate the Covenant discovered the Damaged Halo and repaired it the Individuals in command of the task force into this galaxey were curious as to why this halo was damaged. So they activated the ring. What the Covenant did not know was Starscream's forces already found the ring on their galaxy and were monitering it very carefuly.

When the Covenant task force exited the gate Starscream was notifed and he realized that the Halo was the answer to his problem he could relocate all of his forces and establish a new stronghold in a position where he would be able to build up his forces and fortify his position enough to hold off a determined attack. Thus he recalled all his forces form every front and every base destroyed all the abandoned bases and sent everything he had to the Halo where the Unsuspecting Covenant was.

The arrival of the Unknown fleet startled the Covenant forces however they did not have time to act the massive Desepticon fleet immediatly opened fire on the Covenant and the shere volume and power in the volley was enough to destory the entire Fleet before they had a chance to warn the forces on the other side.

After the Covenant fleet was destoryed Starscream ordered his forces to head to the Halo and soon a some what longer battle started on the other galaxy however the battle was virtualy short. Then the Desepticons downloaded all the Covenant's databanks and quickly found a region where they could quickly builed a series of well fortified strong holds and set out for the region. However the territory was some what close to the Imperium of man's Galaxy.

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Well that's just for starters I am also thinking of having Galvatron's Desepticons working with the Covenant in exchange for massive amounts of energy which tilt the tide in favor of the Covenant and until the Coalition is saved by the interention of the Autobots. As for the Imperium and the Borg let's just say they have their own problems.

#9 Mar 28th 2006, 1:33pm
Thug-4-Less
Yeah, that definitely sounds like something you need to talk to Bomby about if you can get into contact with him. That's some involved stuff.
#10 Mar 28th 2006, 3:49pm
SpartanCommander
I already send him a personal message about a version of the plot but I have not recieved a responce yet. So I'm using this forum in hopes that he sometimes checks these things.

If he responds to you can you mention me please because I think this idea would go well with the story. Not to mention with the way things are going in that war everything is degenerating from two sides fighting for the freedom of the universe to a massive brawl with a massive bunch of contenders over who controles the fate of the universe and some of these contenders have no understanding to what this situation exactly is (Like the Imperium).

#11 Mar 28th 2006, 8:17pm
Thug-4-Less
Dude, getting in touch with Bomby is a hit-or-miss kinda thing. With the emphasis on the miss part. Just be patient and I'm sure you'll hear something. Eventually.
#12 Mar 28th 2006, 9:47pm
SpartanCommander
So should I just keep emailing him repeatedly until he response or should I just keep using this forum until he notices it?
#13 Mar 29th 2006, 9:22am
Thug-4-Less
Whichever likes you the best. Like I said, he's a busy guy I guess, so it takes him awhile to respond at the best of times.

But remember what I said about FFH:Great War already being far advanced in the plotline to start adding major players of the caliber of Transformers. So at best your idea could be a spin-off, or maybe see fruit in the next installment of the main FFH saga. But any hopes for something in this edition are pretty slim. At least that's what I'm thinking.

#14 Mar 29th 2006, 2:41pm
SpartanCommander
Well what about in the next installment after this it looks like this instalment is going to end in a few more chapters however the war is not even close to ending.

Like call the next installment "Far Flung Hope: Crossfire" Involving the Covenant convinsed they gained a new ally began to quickly gain territory rapidly however when the Covenant seems to be unstopable the Autobots intervine. Now the Coalition begin to think that the Autobots would be powerful members of the Coalition. However the Autobots only reply to the offer is that this is their war between the Desepticons that they can't ask any race to battle against their enemies. Then the Desepticons immediatly with drawl all their support from the Covenant to battle the Autobots. Now instead of either the Covenant and the Coalition gaining very powerful allies they now find themselves battling each other as well as finding themselves caught in the crossfire between two races that are as old and as advanced as the Foerunners.

And Unbenownsed to the Coalition that these two factions are also going to attract other anchent races that will be doing battle with different goals and Starscream is slowly using special units to infiltrate the Covanant and the Coalition so when he conquers the Imperium he can easily cripple both galactic powers before he even launches any attack.

#15 Mar 29th 2006, 6:23pm
SpartanCommander
Well my idea for the Gesault team is a group of 6 Seekers with unique modifications these guys are my own origional characters that I've copywrited but if you want to use them just email me and I'll reply as promptly as I can just make sure it does not look like spam.

Also pardon the spelling please.

Group name: Strikers

Group Bio: The Strikers are a unique Gesault team they are dedicated and loyal to the Desepticons. Each one has their own advantages. But they are not the best Gesault team nor the most ruthless. They are actualy the most effecient. They strive for efficency for every mission.

I was considering the Strikers to be a Decepticon Seeker squad that can combine in a Gesault. These guys are a well rounded group with a lot of battle experiance. However they all view Races that are named after other races religious referances as insecure wimps with delusions of grandure.

They are Loyal to the Decepticon Empire but have extream distrust of the Quintisons.

Members

Air Strike

Name: Air Strike

Rank: Squad Leader

Sex: Male

Face: Completly black no mouth or face plate, his optic sensors are colored black.

Planet: Cybertron

Race: Decepticon Seeker

Age: 2 Million Years old (or 25 in our years)

Transformation: Black Stealth Fighter/Right Arm of Gesalt.

Weapons: (Stealth fighter mode) Duel Repeter Ion Pulse Guns, a complement of missle launchers that can be regenerated depending on his energon levels. (Robot mode) Ion Beam rifle also capable of retracting armored slots on his chest to fire his missles.

Bio: A skilled leader and Master of stealth he is one of the most respected members of the Desepticon Air and Space forces. His skill in the sky is second only to Starscream. He is a vertan of the Great War and has risen through the ranks with astonishing speed. He is rather calm in battle and is alwaysed looking out for his fellow squadmates he will even put himself in harms way to protect his fellow squadmates. He is loyal soley to the Decepticon Empire not it's leadership he feels that they need to earn his loyalty first however he is known to always get the job done or leave the opposition with severe damage to the enemy before withdrawing. His programing doesn't allow him to hate anyone mostly because that causes mistakes. He however can get very exitable before missions almost to a point where taking the actual mission is almost relaxing.

Air Freight

Name: Air Freight

Rank: Supply officer.

Sex: Male

face: Mouth, two optic scanners with nose.

Planet: Charr

Race: Decepticon Seeker/transport

Age: 2.5 million year old.

Transformation: A large Military Cargo plane/Body of Supressor.

Weapons: Plane Mode: 3 Laser turrets on the top, bottom, and front. Robot mode: Large Plasma Cannon. Also equiped with an energon cube generator and a large storage area when transformed.

Bio: He signed on to be primarily a supply transporter however after his performance in an autobot ambush he quickly was transfered to combat roles. He really doesn't like to fight which is why he signed on to a Gesalt squad since they use each others strengths and tend to understand eachother better than nongesault squads do. He gained the slot in the Strikers and filled the Role of supply officer since he was big enough to carry vital extra supplies. Even though he usualy is assigned in roles that does not require fighting he is sometimes required to fight along side his fellow squad members. He likes Air Strike and Wild because they seem to respect his passive nature and have very good tolerance for people who hate fighting. He's size in very impressive he towers his other squad members and usualy intimidates everyone. But has a very freindly personality and is a very likable individual.

Wild

Name: Wild

Rank: Tactical advisor and 2nd in command of squad

Sex: Male

Planet: Cybertron

Face: Two optic sensors, Nose, mouth (looks like an aged man)

Race: Decepticon Seeker

Age: 10 Million Years old

Transformation: Grumman F4F Wildcat (this is a fighter in world War II look at For more information)/Left arm of Supressor.

Weapons: (Vehicle mode) Duel repeter Pulse Beam cannons, (Robot mode) Energon Assult Rifle.

Bio: An old grizzled warrior he was around even before the Great War started and has survided the hole time. He possesses an inexaustable supply of battle experiance that his fellow Squad members rely on to assist themselves durring missions. Wild despite his name is a calm and collected individual who knows just about every possible trick you can pull nomatter what situation he's in (the only reason why he never took over the Decepticon leadership is because he was uncomfortable with the idea that there will be a long line of guys willing to eliminate him for his postion. He joined the Strikers because he felt it was the most promosing. He respects the cunning and tactical abilities of Air Strike and considers him to be good enough to become a commander. He has the personality of a Grandfather and thinks of his fellow squad members as his puples and teaches them what he knows when ever he gets the chance. He is a skilled warrior and a very good marksman.

Hell Gun

Name: Hell Gun

Rank: Point man.

Planet: Unknown

Sex: Male

Face: Light red helmit feature with a Blood Red Visor attached over his optics, He has a mouth, and nose.(rest of face colored gray)

Race: Decepticon Seeker

Age: Unknown even he can't remember.

Transformaton: A red Dassault Mirage-2000 Look in / Left Leg of Suppressor

Weapons: (Vehicle mode)a Pulse gun and Null ray in each weapon mount. (Robot mode) a Null Ray where Seekers usualy keep them and Holds duel energy repeaters (the Cybertronian equilvelent of a mashine gun).

Bio: Not much is know about his past only that he was rescued from a Nebulan reserch fasility experimenting on captured Autobots and Decepticons. The experiments he went through permantly damaged his mind and he has developed a some what querky personality. When he is not in combat he acts like a Little brother to his squad members and treats them like family (probably because most of the member were there when he was rescued) however when in battle his personality completly changes to that of an intense love for combat and will attack very agressivly and takes very risky manucers while in battle (he seems almost phsycotic and sometimes scares his fellow squad members). He considers Air Strike as his father since he has no other memery of a father figure and looks at Wild as his grandfather. He constantly annoys Air Freight with his constant questions and other antics he pulls. however he is an immensly skilled fighter and if it wasn't for his skill, quick reflexes, speed, and reflexes he would have been scrap ages ago.

Silent

Name: Silent

Rank: Rear Guard also doubles as the teams psycologist.

Planet: Cypertron

Race: Decepticon Seeker

Face: Single Red optic Sensor and a face plate.

Age: 2.8 million Years

Transformation: A Grey USN F/A - 18 Hornet (look in )/ Right Leg of Supressor

Weapons: (vehicle mode) Null ray, and two standard laser guns (Robot Mode) Null ray and a Energon handgun.

Bio: When he chosed to be reconfigured as soldier he told the Decepticon performing the job to remove his vocal unit so he could not reveal any secret into to the Decepticon's enemies. He is a superb fighter and a strong individuel. He had a girl freind the miliary: a Female Decepticon named Rev. He still has her as a girl friend and the only reason they never mattied was because of the war and that he is almost constantly sent on deep space missions. He is constantly pestered by Hell Gun about his relation ship. However he performs as a very good listener and it oddly turns out it turned him into a counsiler of the team. Even though he can't speak the other Squad member take comfort in the fact that he is some one they can talk to and he will keep it a secret. He also plans to envite everyone to his wedding when he can and also plans to make Wild the best man. (the guy is love sick over the girl)

Loose Cannon

Name: Loose Cannon.

Rank: Scout/infiltration expert.

Planet: Decepticon Colony X234.

Face: Blue optics, mouth, and nose (young looking)

Race: Decepticon Seeker

Age: 7,400 years

Transforms: A white Experimental unmanned observation plane (very small)./ Supressor's Head

Weapons: (Vehicle mode) single Energy blaster. (Robot Mode) subspace energy blaster(Silenced gun) and a energon hand gun.

Bio: The rookie of the squad he is young hotheaded and prone to reclase behavior. He acts like he is the best there is but he really has an inferiority complex and feels insignificant compared to his other squad members. However he has a huge drive to prove himself and his courage is incredible at least. He is the Smallest member of the team and is designed to go into smaller area where a full sized Decepticon warrior would have trouble getting into (he is not human size he is around the size of Bumble Bee) He is a very good infiltration expert and an invalued scout and his reconisence skills has determined the outcome of more than one mission. He respects every member of his team but he is prone to be a ladies man (or at least tries to be) He has even been known to hit on ladies not of his species, this includes nonrobotic life forms, and extents to even the enemy (to the embarrassment of his squad mates) and even much more to the embarrassment of his team mates he has now started to flirt while their fighting). This has caused several interesting rumors to circulate about the Squad. However he has proven to be a valuable member of the team.

Supressor

Supressor is the Gesalt of the Strikers when they combine. Like other Gesalts the strength and powers of each transformer joined with him is combined and enhanced. However even though his strength and power is enhanced most of the enhancing is directed to his speed. Supressor is the fastest Gesault in the Desepticon Empire. He relies on speed reflexes and cunning to bring down his opponents. He can move and react at speeds that would give a Transformer great difficulty to follow and impossible for a human. When Supressor is used on the battlefield it is either only in very fierce conditions or when they need to finish a battle quickly. Supressor is very intelligent and knows then to fall back. (Supressor tends to fight like a professional wrestler) His main weapon is a powerful Proton Cannon, the secondary weapon is an energon broad sword that can cut through any solid object (he rarely uses it unless he faces a Gesault with close combat weapons).

His Face has a face plate and a visor like covering over his optices the rest of his head looks like it is in a helmet.

Supressor is a dangerous opponent to anyone.

He posseses the strongest points of every member in the Squad. (their millions of years of combat experiance, their cunning their, intelegance, and thier skills) Unfortionaly With this increase in the strongest points of the squad has left Supressor with a superiority complex and is very arrogant.

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How do you like these guys they seem like a solid group.

#16 Apr 01st 2006, 11:59am
The Shadow Syndicate
Very solid group. Kind of like my Heavy Metal War characters.

I wonder if I could do a oneshot using the Ori.

#17 Jun 20th 2007, 8:20am
SpartanCommander
Ya thank's. I hope to expand soon on how they work durring missions in different area's.

Maybe you could do a one shot for that.

#18 Jun 20th 2007, 5:46pm
The Shadow Syndicate
I still have yet to get permission from Bombsquad. So I can't start either the oneshot or the Starship Trooper/Alien crossover.

I had such great ideas too. Like the Terran Federation visits the Planet of the Apes world.

#19 Jun 20th 2007, 6:47pm
SpartanCommander
That's very interesting. Also if your using PM's to email your work to your Beta readers don't their is something wrong with the PM's that seems to alter you punctuation some what. With " and '.
#20 Jun 21st 2007, 4:21pm
The Shadow Syndicate
The Ori are as Advanced and even surpass most of the members of the Sentinent Coalition or the Covenant. So in other words either side is in deep if the Ori invade their space. Not to mention they can convert entire civilizations to their side in a few days time.

The Ori are more suicidal than the covenant. Ori fleets will not even consider abandonement. They have the most advanced technology outside of the Transformers Universe. So both sides will be hurting when the Ori get through with them.

#21 Jun 21st 2007, 6:59pm . Edited Jun 21st 2007, 10:47pm
SpartanCommander
Well their are a few things though after Studdying the Ori I found out some interesting facet's. The Ori and Anchient's seem to have a strange sort of unentrest in finding something new. It's almost like they gave up trying to discover something new and thought that they know all. How ever their are things out their in the Universe that no one knows about and their is alsay's someone bigger badder stronger.

The Ori and Anchient's as far as I have discovered have stopped the progression of their technology when they have reached the technological level of the Transformers when their Civil war began. From as far as I can tell as well as the knowlege of Cybertonian data storage means it appears that the Anchient's were somewhat less as advanced as the Cybertonians.

I got this when I found out that the Anchient knowlege archives that were downloaded into a human mind and their mind's slowly shut down because it is filled to much. However when Cybertonians do something like that to a human mind they can do it in such a way that the mind is never over filled. I am betting that the downloading device has a cruder organic interface than Cybertonians have. Also The Ori do have a massive problem Primus. He's a being that has been around longer than the Ori and Anchient's combinied. I'm betting that he has actually knows that Acention is actually not all that it's cracked up to be. I'm also willing to bet that he could easily cut off all comunication between the Ori and their followers rather quickly. With out the Ori their followers would fall in a matter of month's. Their followers would start to blame eachother for the Ori's silence and then be at eachother's throat's.

That and what would be more intertaining if that the real God who created all thing's got really annoyed at the way the Ori and anchient's are dealing with everyone else and desided to unasend them that would be really good total collaps of the Ori and Anchient influance over everything.

Thus with all this info I'm surmising that the Ori's followers and the Ori acutally would be considered to the Cybertonians to be a (what we would consider a) 3rd world countly to them. Everyone else almost doesn't even get considered to be any form of class of a country to them. The Ori and their followers is probably the closest thing to a dangerous threat that any none Cybertonians can get as far as I can tell.

Also I think I found out one reason why you didn't get a reaply from your PM's. You have your selection to recieve PM's set to block so no one can contact you.

#22 Jun 22nd 2007, 7:35pm
The Shadow Syndicate
Well I shall change it!

And I was saying that besides the TF's they are the most advanced race out there. Lord knows that the Transformers are the most advanced race in this saga.

What I meant was that the Ori would cause a lot of Damage to the Sentinent Coalition and the Covenant. I was thinking they would convert entire galaxies. Load up their forces and cause chaos and disorder. Entire fleets of Ori vessels attacking Federation Space. Converting the Romulans. Fighting off the Borg.

Then again losing the Ascended powers would be a funny twist

#23 Jun 22nd 2007, 8:56pm . Edited Jun 23rd 2007, 8:31am
SpartanCommander
Ok Now I understand that. You know that the Ori do have one interesting weekness when you consider their tactic's. Their method of conversion is dither converd or destruction. When you think about it the Ori actually have a way of causing alot of hatred toward's them. In fact this could actually cause an interesting problem for them because this could bring several enemies together just to destroy the Ori. I do know that the Sentient Coalition and the Covenant resources together maybe enough to destory the Ori or if Given enough time the Sentient Coalition would be able to figure out a way to attack the Ori. (Or the Q's could give the Sentient Coalition a weapon that could kill Ori just to teach them a lession)

I do know that their strategy sort of is like a recelace take over of a Galaxy and they seem to actually rely heavly of the Ori's suggestions and their slave's seem to use little strategy at all. It's like they willfully stop all their will and thoughts. If some one could jam the Ori's ability to communicate it would be like ant's with out a leader. They have high tech weapons and no form of ability to use innovation. The Covenant could actually wipe out the Ori's followers with out the Ori to offer logistics and tactics.

I do wonder how the Ori would act if they were under a Decepticon raid. I know that Starscream would be interested in the Ori's tech to see just what they have and if any of it is useful.

#24 Jun 23rd 2007, 9:27am
The Shadow Syndicate
Yeah.

I was thinking of Several Races teaming up just to destoy the Ori. Terran Federation would be the first.

The second and third might be either the Coalition and the Covenant The fourth might be either the Skrull or the Kree. And the Final one I have a hard time deciding on.

This story does have potential. So do I wait for Bombsquads permission?

#25 Jun 23rd 2007, 10:40am . Edited Jun 23rd 2007, 1:47pm
SpartanCommander
Probably.

You could also ask THug-4-Less and see if you can get the answer from him. He seem's to be in contact with Bombsquad more often than everyone else.

I haven't talked to him in a while though.

#26 Jun 24th 2007, 6:38am
The Shadow Syndicate
Well first I have to finish my massive crossover story. Resident Evil Vice City:GAME OVER. Which stars three OC's. Tommy Vercetti. Seifer Almasy from Final Fantasy VIII. Adrian Shepherd from Half-Life oppossing force.

And there is the problem of AVS: Alien vs Sith

#27 Jun 24th 2007, 8:45pm . Edited Jun 26th 2007, 8:52am
SpartanCommander
Oh.
#28 Jun 26th 2007, 10:49am
The Shadow Syndicate
I wonder how Bombsquad will handle the Covenant schism.

Like who are the Elites going to take with them when they seperate from the Covenant?

#29 Jun 26th 2007, 12:34pm
The Shadow Syndicate
Since the Kree and Skrull are going to fight the Ori I know one thing that neither them nor the other sides can stop.

"WAAAAGHHHHH!!! HULK SMASH PUNY COVENANT!!!!"

Yes I shall include the Hulk in my FFH story!

#30 Jun 27th 2007, 5:25pm
SpartanCommander
Ok but I still remember that their is always someone tougher out their. That's the slight problem though it's hard to find one for the Hulk.
#31 Jun 28th 2007, 9:00am
The Shadow Syndicate
Yeah there will be somebody tougher out there.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7OVbVmXAeSM

This is the new transformers theme

#32 Jun 28th 2007, 12:13pm
SpartanCommander
Hi Sorry for not responding in a while I was pretty buisy and got preoccupied. One thing though I managed to see the TF movie and I was really impressed.

I did see the theme you gave me and I'm familiar with it that's the TF theme for the old cartoon movie.

for the 2007 movie they apparently had different themes

#33 Jul 05th 2007, 11:53am
The Shadow Syndicate
I saw the TF movie yesterday.

Well the coalition could be suprised.

One minute they are approaching a city. The next thing they know the city turns into a fortress and starts killing them.

We also have to think about Transformers who turn into bases. Then there are the ships themselves. The ARK and the nemesis Mrk III.

Not to mention the fact that Cybetron is a mobile Starship. It could potentially travel to different galaxies to bring the fight to Starscream.

#34 Jul 08th 2007, 12:53pm
The Shadow Syndicate
There is also the Problem of all the other huge robot vehicles. At first I think the Transformers would be confused by the gundams or Zaku's.
#35 Jul 08th 2007, 1:02pm
The Shadow Syndicate
Everyone knows my Lord Starscream would PWN any force besides the Transformers.

All hail Lord Starscream.

#36 Jul 09th 2007, 10:09am
SpartanCommander
Ya but they would still be no match for a transformer after all TT's have they have better reaction time, armor, experiance, tactics (gundam's mostly just take a pounding and shoot at the enemy), can change form's faster, combine, and others.

Also Cybertron is also a living entity when you read the comics. Also I'm planning on having Starscream soon set up a plan to convert an uninhabited world into a world fortress.

And eventually have both Decepticon factions reunited. guess who's doing the reuniting.

#37 Jul 11th 2007, 6:54am
The Shadow Syndicate
I say Starscream.

Will you include my other two favorite seekers?

ThunderCracker and Skywarp?

What about Grimlock and Bumblebee or Bluestreak?

#38 Jul 11th 2007, 12:28pm
SpartanCommander
I actually was origionally planning that. Thier reappearance will play a big turning point to the Decepticons and they will be involved in the reulition of both Decepticon factions. I'm not telling you to much yet.

I'm just currently having trouble with getting all the plot and set up correctly. It's very slow unfortionally especially since I keep getting interupted and distracted. If you find any info on how much armament's or fire power the Nemisis or Ark has it would be helpful in writing this.

#39 Jul 11th 2007, 5:32pm
The Shadow Syndicate
I know how much armament they have

Enough to destroy a couple of fleets and possibly pound a planet until it remains dead.

#40 Jul 11th 2007, 6:30pm
SpartanCommander
So a covenant ship would last about a 1.5 seconds against a cybertonian ship's fire power with it's shields on?
#41 Jul 12th 2007, 9:52am
The Shadow Syndicate
Exactly if it was turned to full power. But to conserve Energon I think both ships could take out a Covenant fleet in five minutes at 20 percent power.

We still know nothing of Starscreams flagship though. For all either side could know it could transform into a base.

#42 Jul 12th 2007, 5:09pm
The Shadow Syndicate
Well if you need OC's for your story I will volunteer my Heavy Metal War team.
#43 Jul 12th 2007, 5:28pm
The Shadow Syndicate
Double posts!
#44 Jul 12th 2007, 5:28pm . Edited Jul 12th 2007, 9:19pm
The Shadow Syndicate
Wait I got a question...

What effect would the Marvel Super-Heroes and Villans have on the Coalition Covenant war?

#45 Jul 13th 2007, 6:42am
The Shadow Syndicate
I will do a ranking for the Kree,Skrull and the Shi'ar

Skrull

Tech. Adv.: 3

Cult. Unity: 2

Soc. Mak.: 2

Pop: 2

Mobilization: 3

Total Threat Level: 6.5

Kree

Tech. Adv.: 2.75

Cult. Unity: 2

Soc. Mak.: 2

Pop: 2

Mobilization: 3

Total Threat Level: 5.75

Shi'ar

Tech. Adv.: 4

Cult. Unity: 3

Soc. Mak.: 4

Pop: 4

Mobilization: 2.5 (They are a peace loving race

Total Threat Level: 6.25

#46 Jul 13th 2007, 9:38am
SpartanCommander
For super hero's effect of the war. Probably good in the short run but in the long run very very little effect at all. The hero's are not exactly the best equiped for intergalactic warfare they could at best defent their home world and probably a few of the surrounding systems but that's about it.

For Starscream's flagship It's really similar in design somewhat to the Nemisis. But the similarity is all that's similar to it. It's around the size of Autobot City. With around 5 times the fire power. It is also capable of transforming into a massive and destructive warrior named Strata. Strata is probably the latest Decepticon design made that utilizes the lates in Decepticon technology for warfare and nonewarfare purposes. The entire reason why he bost's supirior speed and fire power than Metroplex and Trypticon is because he was created with a rule that the builders should replace speed on construction with making the produce as good as possibly. Instead of a fairly rushed construction like Metroplex and Trypticon had Strata had a somewhat leisulry construction time. Starscream wanted a base of opperations that was superior to Galvatron's and Shockwave wanted the Flagship to have what the enemy forces City formers did not. Thus the greatest mind's banded together to design Strata and the best constructor's available began construction.

Because Strata's build team had enough time for a thuro job as well as quality or his build. His armor is actually better layed and connected together than Metroplex and Trypticon. He can take slightly more damage than Metroplex and Trypticon before he need's to worry about retreating however his armor is thinner so a powerful enough hit to the right part or him could paralize an arm or leg however it's difficult to get a weapon that powerful to bare on him generally.

Other ship's Starscream has is the standard Decpeticon cruiser. Powerful tough ship's noted for their fire power and their capability to travel long distances of relativly low amount's of energon.

The big Carrier's The technically lightly armed carriers but inside the ship's are filled with thousand's of Decepticon flyers just waiting to get out and destory something. Theri main armament's are 8 hard Long range Proton cannons, 20 short range pulse turret's, and 5 missle launchers.

Their is also the Destroyers...Heavily armed flying death ship's. They are faster than the carriers but slower than the cruisers these ship's back an amazing assortment of fire power. Almost no noncybertonian ship has seen one and lived to tell the tail. If they want to destory you then your dead if you your not in a ship with equal tech.

Exploration ship's...These ones are slightly strange they are more like mobile bases for extended missions behind enemy lines or to opperate in unknown territories. Very similar to a land base these ship's have everything you need to establish a firm hold on a planet.

The Supply and Cargo ship's. Cargo ship's are much bigger than supply ship's Cargo ship's are at least 3 miles wide. They carry all the important supplies and energon needed that that can't fit into any of the other cargo hold's of the other ship's. Supply ship's carry supplies to and fro to battle lines or bases. They are equiped with stealth systems, good speed and armor. They are also armed with light energy weapons.

Stealth ship's are used for espionoge or sabatoge. And if the situation present's itself a supprise attack. Their shapes and sizes vary but their effectiveness is deadly.

Then their are the smaller classes of ship's that can be either Decepticon or inanimate construct.

The only note worthy ship's in this class is the Decepticon science ship designed to study the unknown...and the Decepticon Picket ship it's function is somewhat like a support defence ship. It adds defenses to or defends things that can't defend themselves. Picket ship's are well armed and decently armored. They are also used as patrol ship's sometimes.

Also one other note the Fleet Starscream has compared to the Covenant fleet outnumber's the covenant's 5 to 1. This is one Covenant fleet and fairly small actually and the Decepticons will be expecting a much more tech advanced race because of the tech they seen on the ring so for this fight they will not hold back. (Most humiliating defeat for the Covenant ever!)

Also if you want a preview I have for a future chapter just ask. I sort of have a part of a chapter that will happen in the future I just need to connect it with the chapter I'm on.

#47 Jul 13th 2007, 4:28pm
The Shadow Syndicate
Well I was thinking the Super-Heroes and Villans could be the Special Forces of my story. Not a major army just hit and run squads to cripple Covenant and/or other factions supplies and strength.

My story might be shorter than bombsquads but it will also effect the reader on a personal level. For instance killing off Certain Characters or how they feel about the situations they are in.

Chapters will be about 2000 to 2500 words.

Well Starscreams Flagship sounds like a Mega-Devesator.

#48 Jul 13th 2007, 9:19pm
SpartanCommander
Well he does have one unique weekness when he's in vehicle mode his mental capasities are almost completly inactive. He's basically a inanimate starship when he's in that from.

This is actually for a reason since when he's in starship mode their are so many sub system's in the flagship that it would slow down Strata's mental functions when he's in that mode. However in robot mode he does not need to run anywhere near that many systems and thus his mind is much quick. So to avoid the dumbed down version they riged his mind to turn off when he's a starship and thus must rely on a crew to function properly.

#49 Jul 13th 2007, 9:29pm
The Shadow Syndicate
Makes sense.

Well the Marvel thing will have massive battles sure. But it also connects on an emotional level. I'm thinking of Writing it like Thug-4-Less's FFH story. You know the Covenant invade and they retaliate and defend.

Some bickering will break out amongst Dr. Doom and Nick Fury.

Dr. Doom builds a robotic army and S.H.I.E.L.D. leads the army.

The other three races go on the offensive and destroy many worlds in the process.

Can anyone say intersteller Helicarrier?

#50 Jul 13th 2007, 9:59pm


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