Crowleg: I love this name :) It's so unique! Crowleg is a gangly, long-legged tom with a skinny build. He is swift and agile and is an excellent fighter. He is a bit prickly but he is very intelligent and cunning and has a wicked sense of humor. Though he is gangly and skinny, he has a sly charm that draws others to him.
Ravenwing: Good. Swift tom with piercing eyes. He is not very talkative and is a bit of a loner. He doesn't like apprentices and especially not kits.
Leaffall: I'd change Leaf-fall to Leafbreeze :) She is a swift, outgoing she-cat with a slender build and a charming personality.
Rockfur: Strong, loyal tom with good fighting and hunting skills, he is kind and looked up to by the other cats.
Swiftbelly: No. Belly is such an awkward suffix! Go with Swiftwind! He is a swift tom with a long body. He is cunning and sly and is very flirty.
Windfur: Strong she-cat, she is loyal and brave and is a great fighter.6/20/2011 #211
Sootpaw: slender, smaller than average, swift tom, he is a bit jettery and jumpy and doesn't like when others sneek up on him.
Lionpaw: strong young warrior with a loyal heart and excellent fighting skills. He is kind and loyal though he doesn't say much.
Stormpaw: Strong, very swift tom with long legs and sharp senses. He isn't very outgoing but he is very honest.
Frostpaw: very mature and composed she-cat, she doesn't like fighting but she is a fair hunter. She is very loyal and is a quick learner, she is also very observant.
Brackenpaw: Kind, outgoing, happy tom. He is an optimist and always tries to see the good in everyone.6/20/2011 #212
Hazelnose: make her a golden brown tabby she-cat with green or amber eyes. She is an excellent tracker. She is very naive and innocent though she is very curious and kind.
Tawnyspots: If you want to keep the name, make her a golden spotted tabby she-cat with amber eyes. (Tawny is a shade of gold/light brown). She is a kind she-cat, a good hunter.
Darkstripe: Since he was a main character, I'd prefer you change his name... Maybe to Shadowstripe? Anyway, he is a kind tom, not outgoing but still kind to those around him.
Shrewface: Eh... I don't know why but I dislike this name... And I don't know if it's possible...I'd changer her description to a Burmese which is a brown cat with a darker brown face... that would mean you could keep the name :) And she's a cranky, prickly she-cat who is snappy towards apprentices and young warrior though she has a secret soft-spot for kits and young, earger appretnices.
Hawkfeather: give him bright amber eyes! :) He's a swift, strong warrior with a slim build and long claws. He is fairly even-tempered.
Foxkit (Foxpaw, Foxleap): outgoing, happy, bright-spiritted tom. He is very swift and has strong legs.
Icekit (Icepaw, Icepetal): Change her warrior name to Iceflower and you'll be good :) she is a kind, affectionate ske-cat with a good heart
Shadekit (Shadepaw, Shadepelt): a quiet tom with a calm personality. He doesn't really get worked up over anything.
Kestrelkit (Kestrelpaw, Kestrelwing): swift, agile she-cat with a kind personality and a strong mind. She has very strong opinions and is very outspoken.
Blackkit (Blackpaw, Blackclaw): muscular tom with long claws and a fierce temper, though he hardly ever loses it. He is normally calm and cool-headed though he is a fierce fighter.6/20/2011 . Edited 6/21/2011 #213
DONE! Woot! Go me :) And as for the blue eyes thing? Hmmm well I think that for a cat to have blue eyes, it has to have white on it... usually it has to have a lot of white markings but I guess white paws is enough *shrug*6/20/2011 #214
@Coldy: Congrats on getting them all done! *high-fives Coldy* :D That must have been a lot!, I don't know if I could rate that many... @.@
@Sunny: Nice profile pic~ Does it have to do with your Guardian story? :)
I have a whole Clan for you. We never let you rest, do we? xD
Leader: Morningstar. Graceful, pale pinkish-cream she-cat with white paws and amber eyes. Her sister is Rosefang, and she is descended ftom Dawnstar, an ancient ShadowClan leader. Unlike most ShadowClan leaders, this she-cat is kind and caring. She is sympathetic and is always aware of the feelings of others around her. But don't underestimate her, though, she would do anything for her Clan, even take territory from other Clans if it comes down to it.
Deputy: Darkstorm. Large, jet black tom with big paws and unusually sharp teeth, has dark orange-yellow eyes. This tom is usually solemn and the epitome of calm, he never loses his calm and cool attitude. He is intelligent and a very good planner. He is loyal and has a lot of experience since he has been Morningstar's deputy for many moons. Most cats look up to him and he has a soft spot for kits.
Medicine Cat: Frostleaf. Small, snow white she-cat with dark, vivid green eyes. Medicine cat. She has a kind personality, but won't hesitate to claw your ears if you irritate her or get in her way of her duties. She is also intelligent, but not overly wise.
Warriors (in no particular order):
Rosefang: Beautiful dark cream she-cat with a tint of pinkish-ginger in her fur. She has bright green eyes. Warrior, sister to Morningstar and descended from Dawnstar. She may be beautiful like a rose, but remember, all roses have their thorns! This she-cat has a prickly, snappy personality and is always looking for a fight. She is almost the exact opposite of her sister.
Tigerstripe: Light ginger tom with dark, distinctive tabby stripes and amber eyes. Slightly arrogant tom and one of the Clan's best warriors. He likes to brag to his Clanmates about his skills and accomplishments, but is always ready to lend an ear to a Clanmate and cheer them up.
Thistlepelt: Dark brown tom with a spiky pelt and yellow eyes. This tom tends to keep to himself and has a slight temper when angered, but he is very loyal to his Clan and helps the elders and queens out whever possible.
Hollyflower: Black she-cat with a few white patches and bright blue eyes. This she-cat has a tendency to stick her nose in other cats' business and is quite stubborn, but she is very motherly to the apprentices and kits.
Silverpool: Dark silver tabby she-cat with white ears and clear blue eyes. Very mysterious she-cat who keeps to herself and is calm and quiet. She is a gentle cat and doesn't judge.
Firestorm: Dark ginger tom with white backlegs, white paws on his front legs, chest, and underbelly. Also has a white nose and white rings on his tail, has dark amber eyes. Strong and cheerful, this tom has a uplifting, kind personality. He tends to be jumpy, though.
Gorseclaw: White tom with dark ginger patches, his fur is fluffy and usually messy. Has milky green eyes. This tom is a daydreamer with his head stuck up in the clouds. He loves sleeping and is quite lazy, but he is very loyal to the Clan. (I shall use Gorseclaw because I like it! D)
Tawnysplash: Dark golden tom with white splashes, has dark blue eyes. Very social and a suave flirt, this tom is the party-animal of ShadowClan. He loves attention and is quite dramatic, so he hates it when no one pays attention to him. Brother to Tigerstripe.
Littlebreeze: Undersized, dark gray she-cat with white dapples. Has blue eyes. This she-cat is very swift and follows her own rules. She can be rebellious and a prankster, but will always be loyal to her Clan. Is popular with the apprentices.
Rabbitpaw(leap): Snow white tom with pale red extremities and clear, light blue eyes. He has an elegant, flexible build and a wippy tail. This tom is very cheerful and up-beat, he never seems to lose that happy-go-lucky face. He easily gets excited and is very flitty, he is also very affectionate to his friends. Former kittypet, warrior apprentice.
(Needs name): Torbie tom with black, pale orange, chocolate, and cream spots along with barely visible tabby markings. He has long, fluffy fur and ginger tufts on his ears. Has green eyes. Is very weak and sick. This tom is unsocial, since cats tend to stay away from him because he's sick, so he can sometimes be shy with new cats. Because of the name-calling and sneers from some of his Clanmates, he is bitter and has an untrustful, snappy personality. Can be mean, but has a soft spot for Rabbitpaw. (Medicine cat apprentice, but will later be a warrior apprentice.)
Adderpaw(needs warrior name): Dark mottled brown tom with amber eyes. Has a mean personality and loves bullying other cats, especially (Needs name). Has a fiery temper and loves fighting, though he has a soft spot for the she-cat below.
(Needs name): Pale silver she-cat with white dapples, has green eyes. Has a gentle, kind personality and she loves playing with kits. She hangs out with Adderpaw, since she has a crush on him. Opposites attract, it seems.
Buzzardpaw(tail): Light ginger tom with a darker, plumed tail. Has yellow eyes. This tom is a loner and he keeps to himself, but he actually wants friends and can be too shy. He worries over his Clan and the few friends he has. Warrior apprentice, though he wants to be a medicine cat apprentice, but he can't because of (Needs name). In the future, he will get his wish and switch to being a medicine cat apprentice.
Spottedflower: Pretty tortoiseshell she-cat with pale green eyes. She is very motherly and constantly fusses over her only son, (Needs name.) She is kind, but can be too bossy and stubborn.
Sandcloud: Pale ginger she-cat with yellow eyes. She isn't as fussy as Spottedflower; she lets her kits do what they please as long as it doesn't endanger them. She isn't very nurturing like Spottedflower and Cloudfur, but she does love her kits. Mother to Buzzardpaw and Adderpaw.
Cloudfur: Pure white she-cat with blue eyes. Is deaf. This she-cat sees the whole Clan as her kits and is very loving and gentle. She cares for her friends and kits more than herself, so she needs to be reminded of her daily needs. Mother of (Needs name she-cat.)
Blackwing: Sleek jet black she-cat with light amber eyes. Grumpy and snappy, this she-cat isn't a cat you'd expect to be a queen. She has a temper and can be too overprotective of her kits.
Foxkit: Dark ginger she-kit with yellow eyes. Rambunctious and playful. Daughter of Sandcloud.
Rockkit: Dark gray tom with white paws and blue eyes. Calm and dependable. Son of Cloudfur.
Tinykit: Small black tom with green eyes. Rebellious and hates being fawned over. Son of Blackwing.
Whitekit: Snow white she-kit with green eyes. Cheerful and nice. Daughter of Cloudfur.
Patchkit: Black tom with white patches, blue eyes. Shy and kind. Son of Blackwing.
Scarface: Mottled brown tom with amber eyes, has a scar running down his face. This tom is the elder most apprentices hate taking care of! He is grumpy and, to him, the apprentices do nothing right.
Streamheart: Blue-gray she-cat with white tinging her muzzle from old age. Has green eyes. Patient and wise, this she-cat loves telling stories to the kits and apprentices. She is also kind and dislikes seeing cats hurt.
Loudstep: Dark gray tabby tom with large, clumsy paws. Has yellow eyes. This tom is the clumsiest cat in ShadowClan and always seems to make noise in some way when walking, like accidentally stepping on a twig or walking on dry leaves. He has a humorous, easy-going personality.6/21/2011 #215
@Fox: Anytime xD I looooooove the preffixes Morning and Evening :) I'll get started on these right now xD6/21/2011 #216
I currently have a character named MelodyPaw and I was wondering if anyone can suggest any warrior names for her? Thanks :)6/21/2011 #217
REMINDER TO EVERYONE: Blue eyes are normally only found in white or pointed cats OR cats with lots of white on them. Eye color is genetically related to coat color. Therefore, the coat color determines white color the eyes will be. PLease keep that in mind. And if you are basing your genetics off the book genetics then let me know and I'll keep that in mind as I rate. But if you want more realism (I'm going to automatically assume that you do unless you specifically state otherwise) then I will recomend that you change some things (unless everything is accurate) :) And also remember that I don't just spew facts that I come up with on the spot, I do research!
@Yifan0202: Melodypaw... no. Kits are named based on their appearance when they are born. And the clan cats probably wouldn't know what a melody is... I strongly suggest that you change her name to fit her appearance. If you give me a description of her looks and her abilities (strengths and weeknesses and her personality) then I'm sure I can come up with something for her :)6/21/2011 #218
@Fox: Your names xD
Morningstar: Warrior name?
Darkstorm: This is a good name for him :) Darkfrost would also work for his cool-headedness.
Frostleaf: -leaf is for very mature and wise cats.... I think a better suffix for her would be -pelt/fur. Its simple but Frostpelt still sounds good :)
Warriors (in no particular order):
Rosefang: I love this name! And it's a great name for her! I'm so glad you didn't go with the obvious Rosethorn :)
Tigerstripe: THANK YOU for not making him a brown tabby! This is a great name for this tom :)
Thistlepelt: Thistle's actually have white flowers so for this to work better I think you should give him white paws and white underbelly or chest, otherwise I like this name. It's simple but strong.
Hollyflower: Great name! I this it's sweet but also slightly spicey ;) But I highly doubt that it would be possible for her to have blue eyes... give her deep green eyes or frosty green eyes.
Silverpool: -pool is often thought of as a variation of -leaf. Therefore it's for mature, assured cats who have a deep loyalty for their clan or StarClan. Otherwise I think mysterious works for her :) But remember the blue eye rule. Silver tabbies often have pale green eyes.... I never understood why people think that frosty blue is better than green... I love pale green eyes. Especially on silver tabbies :)
Firestorm: -storm is for strong, confident, fierce warriors who are well respected by their clanmates... I think that Fireclaw would be good for his strength or even Fireleap for his strengths and jumpiness and cheerfullness. (Though I do know why you went with this name lol)
Gorseclaw: Go with Gorsepelt. And change his appearance to white with pale ginger patches because Gorse had yellow flowers... Otherwise I love the description of his personality :)
Tawnysplash: Great name! Works perfectly for him ;) though I'd give him bright amber or bright green eyes instead... Bright, vivid green would actually make him seem more bubbly in my opinion... dunno why xD
Littlebreeze: I love Little names xD Though I'm not sure if the coloring is possible... "dapples" means spots (as in a spotted tabby would be a dappled cat). I'd just make her dark gray with white patches. Otherwise it works :)
Rabbitpaw(leap): Hmmm, however did you come up with such a perfect name I wonder ;) Anyway, I love this name :)
(Needs name): Well, you know my thoughts on Torbie/Tortie males... But at least you made it somewhat accurate. I still would suggest not even using a torbie male... Anyway, his name could be Mosspaw/pelt.... Bramblefur? I think you should use Moss, Bramble or Bracken and use fur or pelt or claw.
Adderpaw(needs warrior name): Adderfang, Adderstrike would be good.
(Needs name): Hmmm... By white dapples do you mean white patches? If so then it's fine. Hmmm... I think Skypaw/flower, Skypaw/cloud... either of those, but I like Sky for her :)
Buzzardpaw(tail): Hmmm... I prefer dark brown tabbies for Buzzard or brown tabbies with white underbelly because Buzzards are usually dark brown...Maybe make him a brown tabby tom with a darker brown and black plummed tail and amber eyes and white underbelly? I think that would work better...
Queens- if they're kits are apprentices, then they wont be in the nursery anymore... unless they are pregnant again (which would suck)... Queens are pregnant she-cats or she-cats who are nursing kits.
Spottedflower: Good name! It works well for her :) Unless she's pregnant, she shouldn't be in the nursery anymore... Her son is an apprentice already so she should've moved back into the warriors den.
Sandcloud: -cloud is used for nurturing she-cats who are kind and loving... I think a better suffix for her would be pelt.
Cloudfur: Good! Simple but nice :) Though remember, not ALL blue-eyed white cats are deaf... But I like that you incorporated that :)
Blackwing: I think Blackfang might be better for her pricklyness...
Kits- I'm gonna have a hard time rating these... But I'll try...
Foxkit: good! Warrior name maybe Foxleap, Foxpelt.
Rockkit: Rockpelt would be good for him, though I don't know if it'd be possible for him to have blue eyes... mossy green would work well for him though.
Tinykit: Tinyfang would be good for him :) Though I'm not to fond of the preffix Tiny, especially when you can use Little. But I understand why you chose it.
Whitekit: THANK YOU for making awhite cat without blue eyes :) Whitecloud, Whiteflower, Whitebreeze(if she's fast) would work well for her.
Patchkit: Patchfur, Patchwhisker (if he's a good tracker).
Sorry if you didn't want warrior names for them...
Scarface: I'm going to assume that this was a rename... If that's the case then it works for him :) Not much else to say...
Streamheart: I think that a pale gray she-cat would better fit Stream. And as for heart, I don't think it fits her at all. -heart is for bravem fierce, intensly loyal cats who would do anything, even break the warrior code for their clan. I think that Streamfur/pelt would be better.
Loudstep: Eh...No. He wouldn't have been names Loudkit when he was born because all kits loud... I think that Grayfur/pelt would be better. Though I get why you chose this name for him, I still think that it's not very likely that a mother would name her kit Loudkit. And it wouldn't work as a rename because cats are only renamed when something changes and their old name no longer fits them. That's why kits are named for their appearance because it's something that is likely to remain constant throuhout their lives.6/21/2011 #219
Hallo Coldy! *high fives* I've decided to come on your forum! *cheers* *pumps fist into the air* I'm giving you some part of my Clan...sorry for the hastle.
Leader: Icestar(heart)~white she-cat, she is loyal to her Clan, would never dream of breaking the warrior code, was former kittypet, she worked REALLY hard to gain respect throughout the Clan
Deputy: Dappledstorm~dappled golden tabby she-cat, she is wise, powerful, and well-respected throughout the Clan. (good choice of deputy, Icestar xD)
Medicine Cat: Frostpool~white she-cat with beautiful sky blue eyes, she is deep with her connection with StarClan and she is very compassionate. This name is very connected with me, this is the first warrior name I ever made.
Morningbird~This may seem unique but I like unique names. She's a pale bracken-colored she-cat. She's kind and she's gentle
Tigerstrike~powerful, aggressive, dangerous dark brown tom with intense amber eyes
Swanfrost~(I really don't care if Swan- isn't canon, just rate the name please) white she-cat, she is outgoing and cool-headed
Thistlefang~snappy, gray tom with a white chest and white paws
Silverwing~silver tabby she-cat with pale green eyes, swift and agile
Feathersong~(this is my kitty) silver tabby she-cat with small, pudgy white paws and a white flash on her chest, she is charming, manipulative in a way, and is 'silver-tongued'
Sandstripe~pale ginger she-cat with darker ginger stripes
Maplesplash~energetic, playful light brown tabby she-cat with white splashes6/21/2011 #220
Icestar(heart): -Heart is for cats who would go to any lengths to protect their clan. Even if it means breaking the warrior code.
Dappledstorm: good name for her :)
Frostpool: It's a great name, perfect for her lol
Morningbird: as long as she's also swift then it'd be great :)
Tigerstrike: good, though I hate that dark brown is accociated with Tiger... Bit its a good name for him anyway.
Swanfrost: I like the name Swan too xD and it goes well for her :)
Thistlefang: Good! -fang is for prickly cats who are also strong warriors lol
Silverwing: good name. Wing always makes me thing o a swift, sleek cat.
Feathersong: great! xD
Sandstripe: very unique and good, I like it xD
Maplesplash: perfect name for her :)
You might wanna add some cats with pelt and fur in your clan, every clan needs those warriors lol6/21/2011 #221
I didn't get much sleep last night, so bare with me on the bad names I'll come up with it... XD
I can't really think of a name for Morningstar... Maybe Morningpetal or Morningcloud? :3
For the torbie male, I think I'll go with the prefix Moss. Do you think Mossclaw or Mossfang would be a good name?
On Loudstep, I just wanted to make a silly elder name. No reason other than that. xD
I have just fallen in love with the name Patchwhisker... :D
Thanks for rating my cats! :D I might post more Clans some other time this week, but I'm too tired to do it right now...6/21/2011 #222
Morningheart or Morningcloud would work well for her :)
and Mossfang would be perfect xD6/21/2011 #223
@Coldy, It's fine! I was at a friends house anyways and didn't get back until now, so that's all good! :D Thanks for the advice and I will make the changed ASAP
@Fox. Heck yes it does! I already have a prologue and a first chapter uploaded on Wattpad (Youtube for books :D)6/21/2011 #224
@Sunny: I understand :) I'm leaving tomorrow and wont be back until Friday, maybe even Saturday :)
NOTE: I will be gone Wednesday (tomorrow) until Friday or Saturday BUT I will get online tomorrow before I leave and Friday or Saturday when I get back :)6/21/2011 #225
@Coldy, Do you think that if I gave you a prefix, and a description, and a personality (not today, probably sometime in the next week) you could give me a good warrior name? :D6/21/2011 #226
@Coldy: Yay~ I like the name Mossfang, because I can't see him as a Mossfur or Mosspelt, because it makes me think of a she-cat. ^_^
@Sunny: I read it, it sounds really good so far. Keep up the good work. :D6/21/2011 #227
@Fox you read it?! ._. Lol
EDIT: I haven't gotten chapter 1 up yet. Haven't finished it . Thought I did .-.6/21/2011 . Edited 6/21/2011 #228
@Coldy: Oh god... Amber's really mad at you, Coldy. Run away. O.O6/21/2011 #229
@Sunny: I had to read it. I was curious lol. xD6/21/2011 #230
@Fox I'm going to work on finishing Chapter 1 and starting Chapter 2 (maybe finishing idk) tonight. But once my head ache goes away6/21/2011 #231
Sorry for the triple post. xD
@Sunny: This is the day I just discovered Wattpad. I had no idea what it was until five minutes ago. Hmm... Is Wattpad like Fanfiction, Sunny? I am curious~ :D6/21/2011 #232
@Fox. Wattpad is where you post Fanfictions, poems, stories, songs. Anything you wrote. You can have fans, people can vote for your book. It's pretty cool really. If you like to write/read I suggest you get an account. It's free. (:6/21/2011 #233
@Sunny: Of course!
@Fox: Well she always seems to be mad at me. *shrug*6/21/2011 #234
@Sunny: I shall sign up then, since I want to be a famous author one day. :)
@Coldy: Yeah, she got mad at me too when I gave my opinion on someone's names... She said I lost some respect from her. D:6/21/2011 #235
@Coldy THANK YOU! :D I need future warrior names (:
A small light brown tabby she-cat.
Minnow-(___) is a kindhearted cat. She is quick and agile, one of the best hunters in the clan. She's fast on the battlefield, and when it comes to protecting her clan, can be as furocious as a Starclan warrior. She loves kits, and wishes someday to have some of her own.
Can you get something for that? :D
EDIT: Ferocious** I hate spelling things wrong xD6/21/2011 . Edited 6/21/2011 #236
@Fox: *shrug* I don't know her so I really don't care if I lose her respect. It was an honest mistake and she didn't have to get so angry.
@Sunny: I LOVE THE PREFFIX MINNOW! My favorite character to RP with is my character Minnowsplash :) Though i prefer to use Minnow with gray cats (specifically light gray spotted tabbies) I suppose and light brown tabby could work. Minnowstream (to accent the prefix and highlight her speed) or Minnowbreeze (for her speed and gentleness).6/21/2011 #237
@Everyone: I have to go. I might write or sign up for Wattpad. Bye~ :)6/21/2011 #238
@Fox YAY! I shall have a wattpad buddy (:
@Coldy Minnows are a light brown color (I just looked at a picture xD) so that's why I made her I light brown tabby. Now to choose between Minnowstream and Minnowbreeze. Which one do you think Fox? :D6/21/2011 #239
I personally like Minnowstream better, it just sounds cool and it flows well. Aha! I'm so punny ;)6/21/2011 #240
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