If you want your name rated, please include appearances and personalities. It makes it much easier to rate the names. I'm afraid if there are no appearances am personalities I won't be able to rate the name.
When rating your warrior name I will be as honest as I can be so if I think it's rubbish, I shall tell you that because there's really no point in saying Drunkfoot is a great name when it's actually unrealistic and pretty stupid.
Things I will rate/help with
-Warrior names with personality and appearance included.
-Tribe names with personality and appearance included.
-Ancient cat names with personality and appearance included.
-Suggesting warrior names for apprentices with personality and appearance included.
Thing I won't rate/help with
-Warrior names with no personality and appearance listed.
-Tribe names with no personality and appearance listed.
-Ancient cat names with personality and appearance listed.
-Suggesting warrior names for apprentices with no personality and appearance listed.
I will rate Clans as long as you fill out this form about the Clan first:
Territory they live in:
Prey they catch:
Clan's special skill (like RiverClan can swim):
I'll try to rate your name(s) as fast as possible but as everyone has different time zones I may not be able to rate them when you post them.
At the moment, I am looking for one or two co-raters to speed up the rating progress.7/08/2012 . Edited 7/08/2012 #1
|Steve the Icecube
Could you rate my name and clan please? Tanglepath: Small, lithe she cat, black with a white tip on her right ear. Her fur is very curly. She is very timid and shy, and thinks very little of herself. She is, however, a natural hunter. ---------------------------------------------------- Clan: LeafClan---------Territory: Bowsey Woods (wood in England)---------Camp: A circle of trees in a clearing, they live in the trees, because they are hollowed out.----------Prey they catch: Mainly birds, a mouse every so often.-----------Special skill: Ability to climb really well and can leap high.7/08/2012 #2
Tanglepath: I understand why she was named Tanglekit but the name Tanglepath doesn't seem to work. It doesn't really have much to do with her appearance or personality. It would work better if you used Tanglefur or Tanglepelt.
LeafClan: The fact that they live in a wood (I live nearish to Bowsey Woods!) works with the Leaf- part of the Clan and the camp seems pretty good. I like the look of this Clan the only problem I have with it is it seems a lot like ThunderClan.7/08/2012 . Edited 7/08/2012 #3
|Huntress of Sacred Dreams
Sorry if these names don't really fit in with the usual :3 They are from a new 'Clan' I am creating for a story.
Fallenshadow: A very dark, almost black, tabby tom with dark amber eyes. He was once a member of SunClan but after he returned from a battle where he hid in a hawthorn bush because he could not fight he malicious leader gave him the name Shrewheart (he was Shrewpaw). His Clan mates teased him so much that it became unbearable for him to stay anymore. So he left. He changed his name to Fallenshadow and has had a very strong hatred to SunClan ever since. Fallenshadow has a very tough nature as he is now a merciless fighter. He has a very short temper and will kill a cat for no reason sometimes.
Risingwhisper: A light brown she-cat with white spots and white underbelly. Green eyes. She was once a rogue called Whisper who had fled from her 'home' with a group of rogues. She became a loner and had been travelling for many days without much food. It was in a patch of forest where she stumbled across Fallenshadow. The dark tom had scared her at first with his talk of killing off a Clan called SunClan. However his rare (very rare!) kind side shone through when he noticed that Whisper was bleeding from her shoulder. Whisper fell in love with the tom and joined him. She changed her name to Risingwhisper to fit in with him. She is kind hearted but has been trained by Fallenshadow to be a vicious killer.
Dancingwave: A blue silver tabby she-cat with light blue eyes. She is the daughter of Risingwhisper and Fallenshadow and has been brought up to hate SunClan. But despite her fathers warnings of how cowardly most of the other Clan's were, Risingwhisper used to hide in hollowed trees and watch the warriors. It was on a cold leaf bare morning when she first saw Shadeheart. He had been sent out by his leader to collect moss for a birthing queen when Risingwhisper fell out of the hollow tree she had been hiding in. To his surprise the strange she-cat seem interested in what Clan life was like and after many meetings he fell in love with the clumsy she-cat. He asked her to join his Clan but she denied saying it would anger her father. So he left his Clan for her and became a 'loner' called Shade. Risingwhipser seems like a fun loving she-cat and she is but her father has trained her to be a deadly assasin when she needs to.
Hiddenshade: A light black tom with darker stripes and amber eyes. He is the son of SeaClan's leader, Whitestar. After many moons of being a trusted warrior in line for deputy position he made a small slip up that shattered his life. During a battle with a rival Clan, he had a tiny apprentice in his claws when he saw her petrified face, as if our of instinct he let her go and Whitestar saw him. The leader turned her back on him and made her other son, Firestorm, deputy. The whole Clan began to shun him to suck up to Firestorm. But everything changed for Hiddenshade when he met Risingwhisper and left his Clan to join her group. He used to known as Shadeheart. Hiddenshade is a quiet cat who watches his enemies with frightening intensity, memorising their every moves, learning their strengths and weaknesses. Fallenshadow accepted him when he saw how quickly he could slit his enemies throats.
Thats it! :D
I also need a few more names like those to build up enough for a Clan :3 None of them will take on the suffix -star as Fallenshadow no longer believes in StarClan and counts himself as their leader.
No descriptions are needed but you can give some if you want!
Don't steal them as they are mine and are going to be in a fan fic soon.I will know if you have because no one else has thought of these names.7/08/2012 #4
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