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kayla101blue
Topic: A New Summer
okay

RULES:

1. once you pick someone, you're stuck with them unless you trade

2. no playing any one else's part please!

3. make " around what your charac. says, that way no one confuses the story with other non-story conversations

4.as the topic says, this is the summer after the cheaper by the dozen 2 movie so now everyone's older

i.e. sarah and eliott and jake-14

5. plz try to keep swearing down, although it is allowed

I'm Sarah Baker

we need bakers (especially jake) and mustaughs (especially eliott)

this is a story mostly about the jake,eliott,sarah age group, but we need other characters.

to start, we need at least a tom and kate

#1 Oct 29th 2006, 4:37pm
Donny304
I'll be Mike.
#2 Oct 30th 2006, 10:38am
kayla101blue
good. for starters I was thinking tom and kate should announce going to lake winetka and I need an eliott and jake for amin roles, especially eliott
#3 Oct 31st 2006, 6:02pm
kayla101blue
I'll start off then and peopel can add characters later.

"All right kids," Kate began in the living room. "We're going on a trip this summer."

"You mean we're not going to Lake Winetka?" Jake asked.

"Well," Tom said. "We are going to Lake Winetka!"

Everyone cheered.

'I get to see Elliot again!!' thought Sarah. 'Oh no! What if he has a crush on another girl? Or he has a girlfriend?'

Sarah didn't cheer

#4 Nov 07th 2006, 6:08pm
soccergirl00
I'll be Elliot, I guess.
#5 Nov 14th 2006, 2:17pm
kayla101blue
I'm just doing other people to start it off

Days passed as they all got packed and as Sarah worried. Finally they arrived to see the murtaughs waiting for them.

"Elliot!" Sarah said running out of the car.

#6 Nov 20th 2006, 3:58pm
soccergirl00
"Sarah, hi, I missed you. What's new?" Elliot said.
#7 Nov 26th 2006, 8:14am
kayla101blue
"I guess the same old boring school stuff. And my brothers being annoying. You?" Sarah asked.
#8 Nov 26th 2006, 2:49pm
soccergirl00
"Oh, well I have to find a skateboarding team. I can't find anyone. I thought maybe Jake would want to. So, on Saturday want to go to a movie?"
#9 Nov 26th 2006, 3:22pm
kayla101blue
Sarah smiled. "Yeah. So, Elliot, um... what do you want to do?"
#10 Nov 27th 2006, 2:01pm
soccergirl00
Elliot thought, "Meet me here at 7. See you." He handed her a noted and smiled.
#11 Nov 27th 2006, 5:25pm
kayla101blue
Sarah looked at the note. It read:

Your eyes are like pearls

you soul is so sweet

I melt around you

please be mine to keep

'that is so sweet,' Sarah thought.

She unpacked and at seven met Elliot. "Hi Elliot. I read your note."

#12 Dec 08th 2006, 12:20pm
soccergirl00
"Oh, yeah, so, umm, what do you want to do? I was thinking we'd go get a burger or something before the movie." Elliot said talking quite fast. In his mind he was thinking, "Why did I write that, if Kyle or NIgel or even Mike finds it, well bad."

They left hand in hand.

#13 Dec 08th 2006, 1:40pm
kayla101blue
They ate and then went to the movies. they watched Strabger than Fiction-without their parents.

(I'll try to get Mike in some parts, like maybe he finds the note or something. Also, if anyone wants to add something that happened during the movie, feel free to)

#14 Dec 09th 2006, 3:12pm
Rogue21493
Are Ocs allowed? Probably not, right? Well, I'll be Jake.
#15 Dec 13th 2006, 1:21pm
Rogue21493
"Hey, Elliot, Sarah. What'cha watching? A chick-flick?" *Laughs a little bit*
#16 Dec 13th 2006, 1:23pm
soccergirl00
"No, but I bet you were." Elliot answered.
#17 Dec 14th 2006, 8:17am
kayla101blue
yes there can be OC's. I just dont really see how unless the OC is staying on the lake too

Sarah looked at Jake. "Um...just wondering...could you you know...maybe just Leave!"

#18 Dec 14th 2006, 1:25pm
Rogue21493
"I wasn't watching a chick-flick! Guys, with girls do that. And I was leaving any way. Me and Mike are going to go skate over in the park. So, later!" *walks away*
#19 Dec 14th 2006, 5:29pm
soccergirl00
"Sarah just a sec. Hey Jake, I need a skateboard team, and would you do it? Please." Elliot asked.
#20 Dec 15th 2006, 4:54am
Rogue21493
"Sure, Elliot. Later." Jake replied before walking away.
#21 Dec 15th 2006, 9:25pm
kayla101blue
After the movie, the kids decided to go on the lake. "What first?" Sarah asked. "Trampoline? Water ski? Boating?"

P.S. check out my new roleplay, the twins!

#22 Dec 16th 2006, 3:00pm
soccergirl00
"We need my brother or dad to use the boat, so I guess trampoline."
#23 Dec 16th 2006, 3:45pm
kayla101blue
"Okay." They got on their bathing suits (Sarah still wouldnt wear a bikini) and headed to the trampoline, splashing each other while swimming to it.
#24 Dec 17th 2006, 10:20am
soccergirl00
On the trampoline Elliot looked at Sarah, "Have I ever told you how beautiful you are?" Elliot moved to kiss Sarah.
#25 Dec 17th 2006, 10:29am
kayla101blue
"You can tell me again," Sarah said, also leaning in to kiss
#26 Dec 17th 2006, 12:09pm
soccergirl00
Elliot laughed, "You are so, so beautiful."
#27 Dec 17th 2006, 12:25pm
kayla101blue
Then they kissed.

(someone can come in now, like they see them, or like an OC or anything I guess, since right now it's only Elliot and Sarah)

#28 Dec 17th 2006, 5:57pm
Rogue21493
"Ew! Dude thats my sister!" Jake's voice rang out over the lake.
#29 Dec 17th 2006, 6:01pm
soccergirl00
Elliot pulled back and swore, "Sarah, sorry but I think you should go. See you tomorrow by the boat at 10. I love you."
#30 Dec 17th 2006, 6:09pm
Rogue21493
"So, do you love Elliot too, Sarah?" Jake said teasing his sister.
#31 Dec 17th 2006, 6:24pm
kayla101blue
"Shut up, Jake." Sarah said. "At least someone likes me."
#32 Dec 17th 2006, 6:54pm
Rogue21493
"How do you know if anybody likes me?" Jake asked.
#33 Dec 17th 2006, 7:00pm
kayla101blue
"Well-" Sarah couldnt think of something to say. "I dont but I dont see anyone running after you." She smiled triumphently (I have NO IDEA how to spell that)
#34 Dec 17th 2006, 7:01pm
Rogue21493
"Well, that may be true right now, but..." Jake paused for a second. "There is a girl I like. And I think she likes me."
#35 Dec 17th 2006, 7:06pm
kayla101blue
"Then why are you screaming that across the lake?!" Sarah yelled.

She looked at Elliot. "See ya," she said. "Saturday night?"

#36 Dec 17th 2006, 7:07pm
Rogue21493
"I'm not screaming." Jake said sullenly.
#37 Dec 17th 2006, 7:29pm
soccergirl00
"Bye," Elliot yelled as he dove off of the trampoline and swam to his home, leaving Sarah alone.
#38 Dec 18th 2006, 12:53pm
Rogue21493
"SARAH! C'MON! ITS TIME FOR LUNCH!" Jake yelled to his sister.
#39 Dec 18th 2006, 12:59pm
soccergirl00
(Just a question, not in the story, but when are we at, like what day and time?
#40 Dec 18th 2006, 1:01pm
Rogue21493
I don't know the day, but I think its around lunch time.
#41 Dec 18th 2006, 1:14pm
kayla101blue
Yeah, first day too.

Elliot couldnt come after lunch so Sarah went on AIM all day.

NEXT DAY:

"Sarah, honey, can you watch Mike today?" Kate asked.

"Mom!"

"Please!"

"Fine."

#42 Dec 18th 2006, 1:16pm
Donny304
"Great you're watching me today." Mike whined.
#43 Dec 22nd 2006, 9:55am
kayla101blue
"Yeah, great." Sarah muttered. "So what do you wannt to do?"
#44 Dec 22nd 2006, 11:24am
Donny304
"I don't know. What do you want to do?" Mike then asked.
#45 Dec 22nd 2006, 11:28am
kayla101blue
"I would like to go jet-skiing with Elliot. But that probobly won't happen," Sarah said
#46 Dec 22nd 2006, 11:29am
Donny304
"Why not?" Mike then asked. Mike is trying to get Sarah out of the cabin so, she doesn't watch him because he thinks he doesn't need a babysitter anymore.
#47 Dec 22nd 2006, 11:34am
kayla101blue
"Oh, nevermind. Hey, maybe we can go on his trampoline. Where's Jake?" Sarah asked.
#48 Dec 22nd 2006, 11:49am
Donny304
"I haven't seen Jake all day." Mike said as he went to change into the boys room to his bathing suit.
#49 Dec 22nd 2006, 11:52am
soccergirl00
Elliot took out his cellphone and called Sarah, as if on cue.
#50 Dec 22nd 2006, 12:36pm


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