I've been wanting to make this story for a while but couldnt get good characters so plz join in at anytime but i want to start with at least 3 people. plz put a description of your character if you want to ji and use proper written language when typing your characters dialouge well make up the story as we go along but there are certain things that i will add

Character:

Name:Chizen(pronouncedd shizen)

Height6'2

Personality: friendly with mood swings that make him seem evil

Past: Unhappy(ill explain as we go along)

Rules: dont kill off any character without the creators consent

Is this a story you invented, or is it an RP based off of an already existing book/movie/show?

i invented it myself

would you like to join?

Name: Roxas (from kingdom hearts 2)

Height: 5' 7

Personality: quiet and calm, brave, protective.

Past: shattered

ok now we just need 1 more person before we start

(OK, cool)

Name: Gavin

Height: 5'10

Personality: Gavin is brave, loyal, and loves adventuring. You'll pretty much see as we go along.

Past: Adventerous

(Ok lets start)

* Chizen looks down the street seeing all the empty faces go by. He thinks there nothing but captured souls that need to be set free. He walks into a shop to pick up some things but the shop owner isn't there. He walks into the backroom calling out Byron? theres blood everywhere and Byron is lying on the ground barely alive. Chizen rushes Byron off to the nearest Haske (hospital we can make up certain words).*

(What sort of setting is this? Like, medieval, futeristic, etc.?)

( sort of a cross between Final Fantasy and Naruto Ex: villages are the normal thing instead of cities stuff like that)

( Freya you here?)

(Yeah sure I'll join.)

Name: Rose

Height: 5'6

Personality: Dark, Mysterious, Angry, Clever, Thrustless.

Past: Parents were killed in a fire and she's been living on her own since she was six. She had long marroon coloured hair thats curly and her eyes are very dark, almost black. She wears black clothes and a necklace left by her mother in the shape of a cross.

(what tme is this set in?)

(sort of like samurai time but without samurai and the settings are like a cross between final fantasy and naruto why dont we start with u being at the hospital then go from there)

(Ok.)

She sat still tears in her eyes. Why am I having to wait so long? She asked herself time and again. Finally a doctor exited the room which held the man she cared most for. He looked at her. "I'm sorry." He said quietly a glum look on his face. She closed her eyes and the tears leaked down her cheeks. "Can I see him?" She asked, "Can I see my brother?"

* Chizen slowly walked into the room in which Rose sat. HE saw Byron's doctor standing there. He rushed over and asked the doctor*. " Is he Alive, Is he Alive!!? Please Tell me He's Alive he was the closest thing i had to family." * The doctor looked Chizen in his eyes and saw small meanigful tears forming.* "I'm sorry but he's not (Rose starts to softly cry in the background) but this here is Rose his sister maybe you can comfort each other."* Chizen turns around.* " Hello, im Chizen I've known Byron for a few years know. He never said anything about having a sister or a family at all."

(i use asterics to show actions just to let u know)

Gavin limped in, blood streaming down his face.

"What seems to be the problem?" The woman at the desk asked him. Gavin looked at her in disbelief.

"Um. . . I'm bleeding to death?"

The woman sighed and shuffled some papers. "Fine. I'll see if someone can see you. Go sit over there in one of the metal chairs, and try not to bleed on the carpet," she said in a long-suffering tone.

* Chizen and Rose leave the room they are in. They begin to walk towards the lobby exit when the nurse stops them and tells them they both have to fill out some papers and that the police are coming to question them.*

Chizen sighs. " Do we really have to do paperwork can't you see where in the middle of grieving. This is the last thing on our minds."

" But the doctor said you need to sign the release papers on Byrons body before we can take it to the mourge."

"Fine we'll sign the papers", says Chizen, ut were not sticking around to be questioned by the police. We didnt have anything to do with the death. WHy would we?, we were close to him."

Rose hadnt spoke a word the whole time. She held herself tightly in her arms, her body slightly shivering. She had dry tear marks on her cheeks and her hair was falling out of her ponitail. "** I look a bloody mess." She said mainly to herself as she looked past the woman into the mirror behind.

" Rose, It will be ok", said Chizen, Byron would'nt want you to be sad like this. He had a good life and we both know that. If it makes you feel any better maybe you should stay with me for the night or as long as you need.", Chizen walks up behind Rose and rubs her arms.

Gavin looked at the obviously grieving two and said to them, "Hey. I'm sorry." His face was pale, and he shivered with cold due to the blood loss. A nurse arrived, and said, "Dr. Butler will see you, sir."

Gavin staggered to his feet, swayed, and the nurse rushed foreward to help him.

Rose smiled at him and pulled out her handkerchief. "Here," She said pacing it to him to help with the blood. She knew it wouldn't help much though but it was all she had.

"Thanks," he said, taking it and pressing it to the head wound. "I owe you one." He and the nurse then disappeared through the door.

***

"I was attacked. Mugged. Whatever," Gavin said in reply to the doctor's question, about half an hour later.

"Well," said Dr Butler, finishing bandaging his leg, "try to avoide dark alleys for a while. And don't move around too much for a while. You need to rest that leg."

When Gavin walked out of the Haske he immediatly went to the nearest place he could buy a handkercheif and picked out one exactly like the one the girl had given him.

Rose sat still. He is gone Rose! She said to herself. But he is not forgotten! And neither is his killer. I will avenge him! she had shed her last tears. Her mother, father and now younger brother were all dead. She was all alone now, she sat on the seat planning how to avenge her brother, her fists tightening.

*Chizen walked out of the shower. He stopped at the towel rack to get a towel. he wrapped it at around midsection and walked out int the living room to check on Rose.*

" It's not much Rose, but this is my inner sanctum if you want to call it that", Chizen said while chuckling. " So how are you?" * Rose did not reply.* " I understand you're upset Rose, but don't distance yourself fro the world,( theres a pause here) from me. I want to help and you have to openly grieve to accept the fact that you're brothers gone. And trust me i have special kills. And i know others that will help us find his killer. How about we set out to look for the killer in a few days?"

* Chizen smiled at Rose and walked out of the room to go put his clothes on."

Rose sat still rethinking over Chizen's words. "Thank you." She called through to him, "But I will find his killer, finding people and killing them is my job." She saw him walk into the room again, a frown on his face. "I am a private assassin trained to track down missing people and kill them making it look like an accident." She stood up. "If you wish to help me track his murderer down then you can. But I want the pleasure of killing him myself."

* Chizen 's eyebrows piqued upwards and he put on a surprised look. He would have never thought that Rose could have such a ruthless nature hiden away. Little did she know so did he...*

" Well, how do you think i pay the rent and buy food Rose? I'm an assassin too but of the more brutal style", Chizen said while smiling. " They can be as brutal as i want them to be. I don't have to make mine look like an accident... as long as the body is never found. Remember Strakia of the Herakami village? Remember how ruthless he was? And then all of a sudden he just dissapeared?" * Rose looks up at Chizen(sorry for using your character).* " Yes, that was me Rose, but i have one rule that i always stay true too." *Chizen stands up.*

" Never harm anyone who doesn't deserve it, never hurt a woman, never hurt a child, and never kill out of spite."

(Where's Gavin? and is Rose based on Rose from Full Metal Alchemist? Also i will have a hand draw picture (by my friend) of Chizen.)

"What are you saying?" She asked reaching his height. "That you wont allow me to kill my brothers murderer because of spite? I can easily argue that this person deserves it!" Her hand balled into fists as she glared at him half daring him to argue back. This, she didn't have time for!

(Well we did kind of leave him at the hospital. I'm sure its hard for him to continue the story on him own. I haven't watched Full Metal Alchemist so I dont think she is and I have drawn mine too but I'm still trying to figure out how to put it on the computer. Hmm ^.^)

Gavin wandered down the street, wondering idley if there was anywhere he was supposed to be. He had just come to the conclusion that there was not, when a voice started speakin in his head.

"Gavin. . ." the voice said, "Gavin. . ."

"Not you again," Gavin groaned. "Leave me alone."

"You have som-"

"Yeah, yeah, I have something that you want, but I am unfortunatly unaware of what it is."

The voice hissed, "You know what it is that we seek. . ."

"Yeah," Gavin snorted, ignoring the odd looks people were giving him. "I would if you told me."

"Gavin. . ."

Gavin sat down in front of what just happened to be Chizen's house and helf his head in his hands. "Go away," he mumbled.

* CHizen puts his hand on Rose's shoulder and gently lowers her back down onto the sofa.*

" No, Rose, thats not what I'm saying. Because i agree with you all the way. All I'm saying is i never take unnecessary revenge. But this,(pause here) is necessary. Your brother was the closest thing I had to family. Did you know that my mother was killed by some street thugs because she witnessed a robbery when i was 8? And then my father and five year old brother were killed when our house had a gas leak when i was 15?"

She nodded. "I'm sorry." She whispered quietly, "And yes, I did know. I found out all about you. Since I had met you I had someone search your background. I'm quite impressed that I found nothing about your second life. Obviously I did not find enough to have missed the fact that you also are an assassin. Your file tells all about your journey to become a plumber. That was a lie, but then, I'm on my way to becoming a full time kindergarden teacher."

" Kindergarden teacher, in what the art of friendly assassination?", Chizen chuckles and smiles at Rose.

"Well Rose I'm going to go downstairs and get some bread I only have a few slices left."

* Chizen walks downstairs and opens his door. He looks to the right, then left before stepping outside, He knew that there were always enemy assassins out to get him because he hd killed there leader or sabotaged there war. He sees Byron sitting on the bench in front of his apartment building says hi and then quickly walks away. He walks into a nearby shop.*

" Hello, Hector", says Chizen.

"How's it going Chizen?", replies Hector.

" Not to good Hector Byron was killed and me and his sister are going to find his killer and why he did it. But first I need some bread and to make a private phone call"

" I understand about the bread, but uh why the phone call? You make enough money off of your assassinations to pay your phone bill. And I never knew Byron had a sister."

" Me neither, 'till she showed up at the Haske (hospital). And I need to make the phone call here 'cus his sister, he name is Rose you know, is staying at my place for a few days."

" Ok Chizen no more need to be said. Just as long she doesn't end up like the last girl you fell in love with, Her name was Shai wasn't it? Well the phone's right there in the back."

" No need to worry Hector this time she's one of us. Even though your out of the Twilight life now. And shes not the only one I've met in the past 2 days or so. There was another one he was at the Haske when Rose and I where leaving. And the one at the hospital seems to be stronger than Hemaee before he died. He was bleeding from his head and felling hardly any pain."

* Chizen walks into the back room to make his phone call.*

(I'll start and end Chizens conversation in my next post. Also Hemaee is pronounced Hemay.)

Rose sat still. She glanced around the room spotting all five cameras. It's not safe for me here. She thought. He doesn't trust me. That's a shame. She stood up and walked over to the nearest window watching Chizen walk into a nearby shop. She glanced down at the second man below. Ah, Gavin, she thought. Glad to see you survived your previous mission, but why are you here? I haven't been told of any changes.

Gavin sensed that there was someone watching him from behind so he turned his head on the pretence that he was checking his watch and looked out of the corner of his eye. It was Rose. Gavin half smiled, and got off of the bench and stretched. He mumbled something like ". . . thirsty. . ." and went of down the street to the corner store.

**! She growled in her head. He is ruining everything! What do I do. The cameras are all on. Chizen will know something is not right. She left the window and sprinted down the stairs out the first door she came across bumping into Gavin. "Gavin! What are you doing here?!"

Ignore

(Ok I'm slightly confused. Di I bugger it up somewhere?)

(Wasn't she speaking to him when she said "Ah, Gavin" etc. a couple posts up? Or was she just thinking in her head? I thought you forgot to put quotation marks. . . should we just restart that section?)

(Sorry I thought I had made that clear. I'll edit that post of you want.)

(Also I was trying to make out that they work together but Chizen doesn't know. Thus the *I haven't been told of any changes* part. I was thinking that they could be working together and Byron was one of there best spies and was sent to spy on Chizen before Rose and Gavin got into the picture. Now that Byrons dead they are using Chizen to help find Byrons killer is. it could be part of their mission or something. My imagination is too big lol ^^ but what do you think?)

(Yeah, I figured out that they were working together. . . I thought that she was speaking to him when she said the *I haven't been told* etc. Was she just thinking in her head? If that's the case, I can edit my post so that he doesn't say anything to her. The other stuff sounds cool!)

(Ok thanks and yes she was thinking it. Ok you want to edit the last part then?)

(sorry I've been gone for a little while been real busy.)

" Hello, Myra?, asked Chizen.

" Yes, this is she. Who's asking?"

" It's me, Chizen"

" Oh no not you again. Last time you called me , you, and my brother were off on some crazy adventure... And he ended up...dead."

" Hema-", started Chizen.

" Don"t say his name", said Myra.

" I understand. Well your brother died not in vain but for the pride of our race. And that's one of the reasons I'm calling you. I've found two more of us. One is Byron's sister. Speaking of which Byron is dead."

" He is? Of all the people the leader of the Twilight Warriors. I guess that means you're in charge, seeing as how you were second in line. Now what's this about Byron having a sister?"

" Well it started two days ago when I walked into Byron's shop. There was a little blood on the counter. I thought he may have just cut himself and went into the back to patch it up. But when I called out his name there was no answer. So, I walked into the back. There was blood every where. Byron's throat had been slit. Obviously someone from the Deathknights had done it. No ordinary person could kill a Twilight Warrior. But he wasn't dead...yet. I got him to the Haske, but by that time they pronounced him dead. And that's when I met his sister Rose. She's staying with me now. But the second one I've discovered was at the Haske when Rose and I were leaving. He is strong, stonger then Hema- I mean your brother. But Rose and I are setting out in two days to find Byron's killer and I want your help. You have the best intuition and tracking skills of eny of the Twilight Warriors. One more thing Rose and the other have yet to discover their powers even though Rose is an assassin.

" Now Chizen just why would I want to help you?."

" Because I don't think your brother is really dead. I think the Deathknights created that image in our minds when we were in the Smilitek Tower. I think they've captured him. I think he can be saved. I'll also be gathering Lidia and Kycro to go with us."

" Fine, If you truly believe my brother's still alive I'll go. Just as long as Kycro isn't near me to often, or I'm not alone with him. You know even though his heart is golden... his Black Side still scares me seeing as how he's the only non-Deathnight Alchemist and is the Alchemist of Death. Sometimes I wish Alchemist's didn't exist then most of the Deathknights would disappear. But we would lose one of our strongest Allies."

"Ok Myra, I will. Meet me at my home at dawn in two days that's when we set out."

* Chizen then calls Lidia and Kycro and asks them to join. They whole-heartedly agree also hoping that Hemaee is still alive.*

( Guys we need peple to play the character of Myra, Lidia, and Kycro so please try to find some people to join us.)

(I have been banned from the this computer at home due to bad behaviour so sorry but I will only be able to go on FanFiction at school or a mates house. ~~ Also I was thinking last night about this Rp and realised that they wouldn't have cameras would they. `shakes head` I swear i'm not blonde.)

Rose walked over to Chizen's hall table. She moved her hand across the smooth top surface. She gave it a small but forceful tap to see if she could reveal any secret compartments but nothing happened. Hmm. She thought looking around the dark room.

{Who is Myra? What does she do? I'll take her.}

(Myra is Hemaee's younger sister. She has special tracking abilities and intuition. But besides that you can design her.)

Gavin whistled to himself as he walked down the street and into a food store. He got a bottle of water, but when he went to pay for it he saw that there was no one at the counter. "Hello?"

(Hello? *echos*)

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