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Eva Lovett
Topic: Help...

Ok i need people to help me decide on a story line, and need ppl to vote. Here are the topics:

1. 2 frnds from 8 yrs ago go there seperate ways; then meet again when their bosses hire them to kill each other.

2.A group of friends go walking in the woods, one of the boys get lost so he decides to sleep in the woods. When he wakes up he finds a girl watching ovr him. He realizes that she cant talk, she doesnt have a home, and she has no name. Leading him home and him teaching her to do everything she dreamed, they both fall in love with each other.

3. A gang war in 2008 in Harajuku, Japan and a civil war in 1765 in Kyoto(Tokyo), Japan break loose. When the 1765 girl goes foward in time in a bizzare way and ends up in the mddle of the gang war. The only way she can go back to 1765 is to win the gang war.

4. 4 college students are on spring break and go to a vacation house to relax. Just when they get comfortable they find out an entire family died in there, then they start seeing paranormal activities.

#1 Apr 16th, 3:45pm
UchihaHakura64

2 sounds the best. 1 is the second best.

#2 Apr 18th, 10:47pm
zzzazzzy

Well, in my opinion is no. 2

#3 Apr 21st, 11:15am
Twilight Scribe

Well... Let's see.

Number four has been done before, but there are so many ways you could make it original... As a fan of the paranormal, I say four sounds the best with number three coming in as a close second.

And, no offense, but don't do number two if you can help it. The magical, fantastic, kind, lost little girl who turns into the male lead's soulmate is just way to... Well, sappy. A little overdone too. Just my opinion though... Take it as you will.

#4 May 03rd, 6:37pm . Edited May 03rd, 6:38pm

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