Hey, can you Beta my fics, if you can, all of them. I have only four, but I'm so deperate that I'm asking my mom to review them. I'd love to have someone tell me what I need to improve on there's always room for improvement.

I can beta for you if you'd like. You don't have to accept me, but I'm here to help.

Hey, could you beta me too? I really need it and nobody else seems to want to do anything but say 'WOW, your story seems interesting (sp?), but confusing', thats because:

ITS NOT FINISHED.

(Clears throat and calms down)

My story is named 'A Simple ****ing Story', tell me if you would be willing to beta it or not, I'll unnderstand. My email address is '. :0

Please read my RP story and review(lol)

It is on my forum and link is on my profile(lol) OK ^^ ?

Here is a preview.

Topic: *Word Wars*!

~ In a fandom far removed from the rest...

Not a long time ago, but time and time again

Several forums who went their own way and always confering with ongoing drama.

Will soon join forces to defeat a rising evil that brings chaos and destruction along it's path.

The fate of fanfiction is soon to be changed.

As the forces of power battle in the epic battle of good verses medieval, to change the fate of the FF site.

Alderaan=IGlo*\IGloran\

Coruscant=Longest Forum Ever* \LongsForuEvercant\

Endor’s Moon=Discussion*\Discussiondor’s Moon}

Naboo=Petiton to Make Me Dictator of the World*\Petitoo\

Corellian=Chosen Ones*\Choselliones\

CloudCity=Gold Star*\Gold Star Cloud City\

Dathomir(planet Han Solo won)=Scarlet Maraudor's forum*\Scarmaudor\(Phoenix's forum)

Tatoon=Siete Espada Redux*\Siete Espadoon\

Mos Espa=Octavarious Petition\Octavomos Espetiona\

Jabba the Hut’s Palace=Fireplace\Firepalace by Doom Seethe\

Death Star=The Order of the Praetorians\Preatorianstar\

[Cast

George Lucas=Irindiglo-Fairy{Iringle-Farius}[self RP]

Han Solo=Hayasaku Aisu\Aisun Hayasakun\[else RP]

Luke Skywalker=Syrus Magistus{Syruke Skygistus}[else RP]\Kovu 01{Kovuke Sky01}[else RP]

Princess Leia Skywalker= Irindiglo-Fairy\Princess Iringleia Skyfairy\[self RP] =SMARTALIENQ\Smartaleia\[self RP]

Senator Amadala/Padme=Glimmerous\Seneator Glimmera/Glimeme\ [self RP]]

Jar Jar Binks= SMARTALIENQ\QAR QAR TINKS\[self RP]

R2D2=DovEva\Dov3Eva3\[self RP]

C3PO=Aqueen\Aqu3eno\[self RP]

Obi Won Kanobi=Syrus Magistus \Syrusi Magistusi\[else RP]

Yoda=SMARTALIENQ\SmartYodianQT\[self RP]

Qui Gon=Thranduil Oropherion Redux\Thrandui Orophon\[else RP]

Jedi= ShadowFox\Jedi ShadowFox\[else RP]

Jedi=Zokolov\Jedi Zokolov\[self RP]

Anakin Skywalker=Hayasku Aisu \Aisukin Skuwalker\[else RP]

Lando Calrissian=Archangel Nazzarene\Archo Nazerrian\[else RP]

Jabba the Hut=FR\Flama Risingut\[else RP]

Darth Vader=Praetorian of Fury(shadow)\Praetorith Furador\[else RP]

(Sith Lord)Darth Sideous=Shadow(aka Thelema Reborn)\Praetorian Deceitous(Shadith Lord)\[else RP]

Siths=Shadow\Shadiths\ [else RP]

Imperial Army=Shadow's socks(Novellas)\Impersock Army\[else RP]

Clone troopers=Shadow('s'){His clone' socks}\Clone Trollers\[else RP]

Roleplay set up

*These names are for the OCs used in the story. If anyone wants to change their name they can. If I'm not here ask one of the mods, they can edit my posts and the name-post. Anyone can recommends their original name is kept only. The for RP are those who are not RPing but in it as characters. The in RP are those who are RPing. Their RPing will be made into a story by their POV and added to the c2 for this.

Mods change names when they change(you can edit the names of every post, yourself)

*There can be mulitple users for each character. Because there are so many users & many users are not equally divided into Star War parts & it won't matter

*Users can be multip characters. Because once again the users-characters is not equally divided or in specific roles.

*Users RP as themselves. Yet they are playing the role of the characters they are.

*No God molding. That's impossible with what's going on anyways. Even for Shadow.(yes that, he's joining)

*The storyline is what is going on right now and before but with a parody of Star Wars. It can't be made up it has to follow the story on FF.net

*A little creativity can be used. Like lightsabers imagary for spam wars and stuff . Though it has to be realisitic. No dying on the internet!

*You can double-triple-quadriple post. This is the forum of lulz. Though don't skip ahead without everyone else's actions if they are required.

& Shadow:

Do not roleplay out of turn in the Roleplay! Relative to the RP posts only Shadow! I mean it Shadow! Do not Engage in Ra!]

[~Roleplay~]

In IGloPalace, Iringleia, was calmly asleep in her turret.

That is until a raid came early in the morning and the IGlo palace was raided. Siete Espadas Rebel Base heard Darthelma Vadereborn's plans through Imass's council.

The Iringleia's message was heard transferred by beam, in the Imass's council.

~ "Your plan won't work. You're going down, Shadowy!"~

Even though Shadith Mass tried to slander Iringleia by falsifying the message to include, "go raid Kaiser's forum instead. He is a troll much like you."

Yet not even Kaiser was fooled when Shadith Mass raided his friend's domain, thinking it to be his. Yet his friend was fooled until Iringleia cleared the truth.

The message was also received by Phoen Wrathfulo, in the Chosen Forum Cantina.

Phoen Wrathfulo planned a counter-raid on Thelema Ultima, to end Thelema Ultima's plans.

~*~

Not too soon afterwards as Iringleia locked down IGlo forum. Kovuk Sky01 appeared with news of Shadithelma Ultima's secret council forum. It was seen Shadithelema Ultima prepared to employ the Secret 9 to aid him in his conquer. Also Princess Iringleia was 2nd on the hit list of Shadithelma Ultima's attack list. Both for his hit list of forums as well as personal targets.

The Chosen Ones Cantina was 1st, IGlo was 2nd, Sieta Espada Rebel Base was 3rd, LongForuEvercant, Gold Star Cloud was 4th, Firepalace of Doom Seethe, the 5th, 6th, and 7th were still 'pending' until it was decided suddenly that DisccusionEndor's Moon would be the 7th target

Shadithemla Ultima claimed the reason why Octavomos Espetiona was 'confirmed' to be the 8th target was because of a message from Iringleia. From an interbeam Iringleia sent to Shadithelma Ultima. Shadithelma Ultima really added more to the beam message Irindiglea left in IGloran to MassofPho.

You won't get away with this, Shadith! You will be thrown down! Attack Archo Nazerrian. He is a troll like you are. Raid in the name of Ra.

Kovuke Sky01 noticed thehit list. "I have to go," he flew back to DiscussionEndor's Moon to prepare.

~*~

Late Kovuke returned with news of Shadithelema Ultima's other plan.

Personal target of primary attack:

Target 1=Phoen Wrathfulo Target 2=Iringleia Target 3=Illusion BeastAri Target 4=Nova Target 5=Flama the Risingut Target 6=Silver-Haired Angel

~*~

Iringleia noticed she and other would face other attacks other than on their forums. She expected another raid.

Saddasaddasad.

^Troll and impersonator for the cheap price of half, which is calculated from the amount of wit ratio'd to the average population.

The "l" after the "Ir" is posing like the "i".

Actually, I'd like that just find them on my profile, some aren't finished and thank you in advance

liek wat?

No, seriously, what?If you could be so kind as to rephrase that...^^''''

ok, so i'm just starting to write a Pride and Prejudice/Titanic fanfic....ya it sounds weird, but i'm horrible at editing. (I'll re-read for spelling 100 times and i'll still miss stuff.) If anybody could help me out...that would be super great. My first chapter is already posted, but it needs to be betaed. Its called Always an Absolution, so i can email whoever wants to beta it asap. Thanks!

Hi! I don't think I have been here for a month yet (which is a requirement for an official beta) but i would love to help you out with your stories :D I'm afraid I would not be able to write any stories with you, however, because I'm very selfish and possessive when i comes to my own stories. But i would love to help you with yours :D if you want to send me any stories please message me on this account, because i don't want to publish my email everywhere (junk mail is VERY annoying)

*grins*

Hi. I just sort of blundered onto this forum while trying to find out more about becoming an "official" beta reader.

Can someone tell me where to look for this information? I looked for a FAQ, but no luck.

Thanks,

Scarlet Garter

Hi. I just sort of blundered onto this forum while trying to find out more about becoming an "official" beta reader.

Can someone tell me where to look for this information? I looked for a FAQ, but no luck.

Thanks,

Scarlet Garter

I have no idea what more info you need, but I'd like to direct you to the Help Topic flagged under this one for questions such as this. I know of no place to go to for more info, but you can ask your questions in the Help Topic and everyone here would be more than happy to help you out as best you can.

And thank you for not creating a new topic and at least getting close to the proper one to ask this question in.

Hey Scarlet Garter, look in your account for details on becoming a beta reader.

On the menu in your account there should be a Beta Reader option, click on that. Then it will set out the requirements and you can fill out a Beta profile.

Hope that helped.

I'm in need of a beta for my various Death Note yaoi smut xD

Currently I have a Mello/Near oneshot. Anyone interested?

I beta :)

Hello! =) Can I stay and chat? If you are looking for a beta reader, I am super kind, can be harsh but says it in a nice way. I am very creative, spunky, outgoing, crazy, and super friendly at times. =D My name is Sasura by the way. I am taking beta reading requests 24/7.

-Sasura

Hi, Sasura could you be my beta reader please. I really need one to cheak my work and all that.

Hey there. I am a beta-reader for a large variety of fandoms, which are listed on my beta profile.

To put it simply, I would love to proofread your stories. :3

(EDIT: I wasn't really directing that at any one person. xD 'Your' as in 'anyone who wants me to.')

~Love in a Mist

Thank you very much :)

Hi Silver Star Shine.

I am Sasura, I can beta all of those stories, except for Fushigi Yuugi, Yugioh, FMA and Fruit Basket. So Inuyasha and Naruto are the ones I can beta. =)

-Sasura

Also if anyone else needs a beta-reader, I can take on many stories at the same time, I am skilled, and pretty good at beta-reading. I do the categories of:

Anime/Manga

Naruto

Bleach

Full Moon Wo Sagashite

Tokyo Mew Mew

Mermaid Melody Pichi Pichi Pitch

Inuyasha

I don't do any others. =P

I am uber sensitive, sweet and if your a sensitive author, I am a sensitive person. So I wont hurt your feeling when I beta-read.

-Sasura

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