Just checked out your story and so did my brother. ;) He really likes the Simpsons.

Speaking of which I have a new story I want some reviews on:

Minutes to Midnight

Minutes to Midnight

After review of Zim's data sent to the Tallest, they decide that Earth is actually a perfect planet to Invade. Zim is made a General but the probem is he's romanticly invoved with Dib and they house a wanted crimnal. Rating may change. some ZADR

My fandom is Yu Yu Hakusho And I've got a fic I would like some reveiws on.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4193135/1/Like_You

It's a oneshot songfic.

Summary: When Hiei kills the human that murdered his sister he returns to the one person left he still cares for. But when Spirit World orders his exucution, Botan will be the one left behind. Can she handle it? HxB Done to Evanscence's Like You ^^

hi guys: I'm relatively new to this site and this forum but I had to stop by and say I love the name of this thread. :) hahahahlmao "ask for reviews and not seem like a whore".....hahahahahaha too funny! heheh!

I'm not going to ask for reviews though, just going to comment on how much of a dork I am. i have written some pretty plotless dramiones that some lovely readers have been too too kind with (thanks you guys) but I just did the most god-awful thing and wrote a dawsons creek fan fic. and I'm still writing it, I can't stop. and it's bad. like, real read bad. hahahahah :)

wtf is wrong with me? i used to be cool. :( what happened???? hahahaha

anyway, love this site, glad to be a part of it! :)

cheers everyone!

I think your first mistake was coming to ff.net.....

Yeah, it could be that you've gotten less cool, or it could be that you jut found out how uncool you are. Either way, cool is a one-dimentional label that you shouldn't worry about too much, although if it's that bad, you shouldn't inflict it on us unless specifically asked. ;)

I'm cool cuz I like anime

I dont care if I'm cool. ;P

If you people want reviews go here: http://www.fanfiction.net/myforums/Adelaide_Madeline/1556325/

And tell people about it, it needs people to work :P

~Addie~

If you people want reviews go here: http://www.fanfiction.net/myforums/Adelaide_Madeline/1556325/

And tell people about it, it needs people to work :P

~Addie~

If you people want reviews go here:

By here meaning here.

it needs people to work :P

You don't say. But all things aside this seems on-topic....

@pirate:

I read your fic, it's clever! I like it. Pretty cute. :)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4015106/1/Long_Live_the_Car_Crash_Hearts

It's called Long Live the Car Crash Hearts.

It's a Drake and Josh slash fic. :] Reviews would be great.

Summary: Drake walks in on Josh, while Josh is with his boyfriend.

You've got 18 :/

Yeah..?

You should be happy to get that ^^

Some people on this site barely get 5 on some chapter fics and it's sad...

My thing listed here on this thread has 5 but it's a oneshot. That's pretty normal

R&R mine?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4214840/1/All_Myself_To_You

I'll be able to add Ch. 2 tonight.

That's where the story starts to pick up a little :)

MAKE A LINK

Me?

I did leave a link..

Lol, links are difficult, you can just copy/paste to the address bar.

Mine are in an unpopular fandom, one-shots and the most I got is 3 reviews. I hate you guys.:p (jk)

Well my fandom has it's days....although it is one of the bigger ones...

Guess wat? It has 666 pages now lololololz

(sorry BTW)

I have a new story poem I worte that I would like somebody to review. Hell I'll review a fic of the reviewer if someone will! Well these are the stories I really really want reviews on and will review the reviewer's fics if they do.

A Blessing or a Curse

How does it feel being the son of a great scientist? Basicly written about Dib's feelings as Professor Membrane's son and people's expectations because of that. Fandom: Invader Zim

Reflection Of My Life

Narcissa Malfoy's tale of regret on her pureblood bigotry and what Draco means to her. OneshotFandom: Harry Potter

Avenue ToonA parody of Avenue Q. Dib a recent college graduate looks for a purpose Itachi wants to fufill his dreams while his fiance Gaz just wants a client. Danny Fenton is the Superintendant of Avenue Toon. Written as the story to the songs. Rather high T on someFandom: Cartoon Xovers

Minutes to MidnightAfter review of Zim's data sent to the Tallest, they decide that Earth is actually a perfect planet to Invade. Zim is made a General but the probem is he's romanticly invoved with Dib and they house a wanted crimnal. Rating may change. some ZADRFandom: Invader Zim

I'll review anyone's fic if they review mine. I like doing that really:) I know I sound desprate but this is the topic to XD

If you have the time could you please review my Naruto story?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4195175/1/The_Village_Hidden_in_the_Sky

(I'm not sure how to make a link.)

Its got OCs in it but Naruto's there as well. I've also got multiple things occuring at once and I want to know which issues to deal with first. I also need advice on what characters to throw in and I need help with describing Sasuke's pre-Shippuden outfit.

I hope its not too much to ask.

Oh yeah, I see what you mean.

:]

Well, here's one that people haven't been reviewing much, it's really short, so you know, it shouldn't take long to read.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4111439/1/Sterile_from_the_Photon_Bruises

It's called 'Sterile from the Photon Bruises'. It's a Drake and Josh fic. The name will sort of make sense once you read it.

Thanks for the people that review it.

=D

If you have the time could you please review my Naruto story?

I've added it to my favorites. I'll read it soon, I swear.

c:

I just took a look at your Pokemon story Reptar (mind if I call you that?) Anyway it was the only fandom of yours I knew so I reviewed that one. I liked it though.

Could I get a review for this new story I just posted in the pokemon fandom?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4233025/1/

Hey All,

I'd like to introduce this interesting site that people can collaborate stories with image and text

a href="http://imagetail.com/main/ "Click here/a

It is created for NYU graduate thesis project.

This website called "Interactive Storyteller" is designed to create a more satisfying experience for user-generated, interactive storytelling.

Hope you all can enjoy it !

Evening all. I just want to ask if anyone would be able to review my Zelda fanfic entitled “The Men In White” Not much knowledge of the Zelda world is required to understand it though so no need to be worried. The reason I ask is because I am on thirty one and a half thousand words and so far no real pointers, criticism or praise. I have no idea if I am tearing down the wrong track or not, especially when you consider the fact this is my first story. Oh and in the first few chapters the opening words are duplicated. I apologise for that and have remedied the situation in later chapters so no need to pick up on that rather obvious flaw.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4228064/1/The_Men_In_White

ignoring spam

Hello everyone.

I would like reviews about the content of my stories.

Devil may cry fandom:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4086268/1/The_things_we_do

Naruto fandom:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4189997/1/Bitter_thoughts

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3795943/1/Shades_of_gray

Also, I would be willing to review any D.Gray-man, Naruto and Devil may cry story. If you want an honest opinion feel free to ask!

-Hello there! Yes, this is Kovu 01, I have two accounts now but I'll mainly be using Kovu 01. This one is Kovu o1(lol) -You may be wondering why I have 2 accounts, well the thing is, this account is mainly going to be used for Flaming peole who really deserve it. Like for example, ever heard of this kid, "Archangel Nazarene?" -Anyway, that's who I've been flaming lately and I may even consider creating a story all about AN and how big of an asshole that kid is. -But you will most likely not see any stories under this account and if you're going to PM me, please use my, "Kovu 01" account because I rarely check e-mails on this account. --Please review my story about Arachangel Nazarene and review my others b/c I want alot of reviews(lol). -Anyway, till then, bye for now. -ttyl -Kovu 01

http://www.fanfiction.net/topic/45113/6063719/1/#6065156

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4250826/1/Burning_Inside

Here is sumthin I want reveiws on

it's Yu Yu Hakusho oneshot

Summary: Onehsot He has never once cried or felt the need to. But when he saw all those tubes and wires in her he felt...like he might just...Hiei/OC R&R PLEASE

please please review these two short stories of mine.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4255313/1/Raymond_prsctices_thinking

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4260817/1/Hannah_Montana_dies_violently

No offence, but changing the names to something a bit more imaginative may get you more reviews.

Like Can Raymond Find His Brain?

I've um, got a Naruto fanfic that's lacking reviews: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4242246/1/Second_Best

And a Bleach one: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4263883/1/Dont_you_like_ice_cream

Aaaand a Bartimaeus Trilogy one: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4233499/1/The_Scar_on_his_Chin

If anyone can review them, I'd really appreciate it! Thank you! ^_^

Would you believe it, I have some fics about Harry Potter and The Beverly Hillbillies! I hardly ever get reviews and it's like Christmas when I do. I love to write fanfics and reviews are greatly appreciated. I'm trying to get my mom to review my fanfics that's how desperate I am so if you could review my fanfics that would be great, I have only four. To save yourself the hassel, you can just find them in my profile.

You seem to have a lot of anger in your fics. It really sounds like you are sceaming at the top of your lungs about things your fic is just a representation of. Try turing down the volume a bit if you want more reviews. Also, the narration seems very conversational, but that's not a big deal, but I didn't read much to really know anything.

I am in no way saying you have to do anything and I do not disagree with your position. There is a buried thread here about homophobia that I posted on quite a bit (for your side), trying to explain why homophobes are that way.

Also, the hillbillies are not a big fandom, and that x-over may not get much traffic period.

Stories in any Misc section don't get a lot of hits. I did like your idea for the crossover. It was really orginal. I read that one becasue it was the fandom I knew the best.

I posted a story on Harry Potter, "A Simple ****ing Story", a really need some steady ideas, my mind is every which way. :)

hey, check out "Wolf Quest." It's on my fiction press account. Here's the link to my profile page: http://www.fictionpress.com/~mahonechic89

I like it, but can't review 'cuz I don't have an account on that website.

Same here.

Please read my RP story and review(lol)

It is on my forum and link is on my profile(lol) OK ^^ ?

Here is a preview.

Topic: *Word Wars*!

~ In a fandom far removed from the rest...

Not a long time ago, but time and time again

Several forums who went their own way and always confering with ongoing drama.

Will soon join forces to defeat a rising evil that brings chaos and destruction along it's path.

The fate of fanfiction is soon to be changed.

As the forces of power battle in the epic battle of good verses medieval, to change the fate of the FF site.

Alderaan=IGlo*\IGloran\

Coruscant=Longest Forum Ever* \LongsForuEvercant\

Endor’s Moon=Discussion*\Discussiondor’s Moon}

Naboo=Petiton to Make Me Dictator of the World*\Petitoo\

Corellian=Chosen Ones*\Choselliones\

CloudCity=Gold Star*\Gold Star Cloud City\

Dathomir(planet Han Solo won)=Scarlet Maraudor's forum*\Scarmaudor\(Phoenix's forum)

Tatoon=Siete Espada Redux*\Siete Espadoon\

Mos Espa=Octavarious Petition\Octavomos Espetiona\

Jabba the Hut’s Palace=Fireplace\Firepalace by Doom Seethe\

Death Star=The Order of the Praetorians\Preatorianstar\

[Cast

George Lucas=Irindiglo-Fairy{Iringle-Farius}[self RP]

Han Solo=Hayasaku Aisu\Aisun Hayasakun\[else RP]

Luke Skywalker=Syrus Magistus{Syruke Skygistus}[else RP]\Kovu 01{Kovuke Sky01}[else RP]

Princess Leia Skywalker= Irindiglo-Fairy\Princess Iringleia Skyfairy\[self RP] =SMARTALIENQ\Smartaleia\[self RP]

Senator Amadala/Padme=Glimmerous\Seneator Glimmera/Glimeme\ [self RP]]

Jar Jar Binks= SMARTALIENQ\QAR QAR TINKS\[self RP]

R2D2=DovEva\Dov3Eva3\[self RP]

C3PO=Aqueen\Aqu3eno\[self RP]

Obi Won Kanobi=Syrus Magistus \Syrusi Magistusi\[else RP]

Yoda=SMARTALIENQ\SmartYodianQT\[self RP]

Qui Gon=Thranduil Oropherion Redux\Thrandui Orophon\[else RP]

Jedi= ShadowFox\Jedi ShadowFox\[else RP]

Jedi=Zokolov\Jedi Zokolov\[self RP]

Anakin Skywalker=Hayasku Aisu \Aisukin Skuwalker\[else RP]

Lando Calrissian=Archangel Nazzarene\Archo Nazerrian\[else RP]

Jabba the Hut=FR\Flama Risingut\[else RP]

Darth Vader=Praetorian of Fury(shadow)\Praetorith Furador\[else RP]

(Sith Lord)Darth Sideous=Shadow(aka Thelema Reborn)\Praetorian Deceitous(Shadith Lord)\[else RP]

Siths=Shadow\Shadiths\ [else RP]

Imperial Army=Shadow's socks(Novellas)\Impersock Army\[else RP]

Clone troopers=Shadow('s'){His clone' socks}\Clone Trollers\[else RP]

Roleplay set up

*These names are for the OCs used in the story. If anyone wants to change their name they can. If I'm not here ask one of the mods, they can edit my posts and the name-post. Anyone can recommends their original name is kept only. The for RP are those who are not RPing but in it as characters. The in RP are those who are RPing. Their RPing will be made into a story by their POV and added to the c2 for this.

Mods change names when they change(you can edit the names of every post, yourself)

*There can be mulitple users for each character. Because there are so many users & many users are not equally divided into Star War parts & it won't matter

*Users can be multip characters. Because once again the users-characters is not equally divided or in specific roles.

*Users RP as themselves. Yet they are playing the role of the characters they are.

*No God molding. That's impossible with what's going on anyways. Even for Shadow.(yes that, he's joining)

*The storyline is what is going on right now and before but with a parody of Star Wars. It can't be made up it has to follow the story on FF.net

*A little creativity can be used. Like lightsabers imagary for spam wars and stuff . Though it has to be realisitic. No dying on the internet!

*You can double-triple-quadriple post. This is the forum of lulz. Though don't skip ahead without everyone else's actions if they are required.

& Shadow:

Do not roleplay out of turn in the Roleplay! Relative to the RP posts only Shadow! I mean it Shadow! Do not Engage in Ra!]

[~Roleplay~]

In IGloPalace, Iringleia, was calmly asleep in her turret.

That is until a raid came early in the morning and the IGlo palace was raided. Siete Espadas Rebel Base heard Darthelma Vadereborn's plans through Imass's council.

The Iringleia's message was heard transferred by beam, in the Imass's council.

~ "Your plan won't work. You're going down, Shadowy!"~

Even though Shadith Mass tried to slander Iringleia by falsifying the message to include, "go raid Kaiser's forum instead. He is a troll much like you."

Yet not even Kaiser was fooled when Shadith Mass raided his friend's domain, thinking it to be his. Yet his friend was fooled until Iringleia cleared the truth.

The message was also received by Phoen Wrathfulo, in the Chosen Forum Cantina.

Phoen Wrathfulo planned a counter-raid on Thelema Ultima, to end Thelema Ultima's plans.

~*~

Not too soon afterwards as Iringleia locked down IGlo forum. Kovuk Sky01 appeared with news of Shadithelma Ultima's secret council forum. It was seen Shadithelema Ultima prepared to employ the Secret 9 to aid him in his conquer. Also Princess Iringleia was 2nd on the hit list of Shadithelma Ultima's attack list. Both for his hit list of forums as well as personal targets.

The Chosen Ones Cantina was 1st, IGlo was 2nd, Sieta Espada Rebel Base was 3rd, LongForuEvercant, Gold Star Cloud was 4th, Firepalace of Doom Seethe, the 5th, 6th, and 7th were still 'pending' until it was decided suddenly that DisccusionEndor's Moon would be the 7th target

Shadithemla Ultima claimed the reason why Octavomos Espetiona was 'confirmed' to be the 8th target was because of a message from Iringleia. From an interbeam Iringleia sent to Shadithelma Ultima. Shadithelma Ultima really added more to the beam message Irindiglea left in IGloran to MassofPho.

You won't get away with this, Shadith! You will be thrown down! Attack Archo Nazerrian. He is a troll like you are. Raid in the name of Ra.

Kovuke Sky01 noticed thehit list. "I have to go," he flew back to DiscussionEndor's Moon to prepare.

~*~

Late Kovuke returned with news of Shadithelema Ultima's other plan.

Personal target of primary attack:

Target 1=Phoen Wrathfulo Target 2=Iringleia Target 3=Illusion BeastAri Target 4=Nova Target 5=Flama the Risingut Target 6=Silver-Haired Angel

~*~

Iringleia noticed she and other would face other attacks other than on their forums. She expected another raid.

i guess. my story isn't that great though

.

Um, hey. I wrote a Half-Life 2 fic a while back that I'd very much like to be reviewed. Constructive criticism extremely appreciated. This is like, the first thing I've done that isn't a parody, poem of humorous, so.. yeah. It probably sucks.

Not to be a review whore or anything, but I'd like at least one person to pick it apart before I write Chapter Two, because at this point I'm not entirely sure I want to keep writing it, even though I have a super kickass ending in mind. /pimping

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4259789/1/Side_to_Side

Thaaaanks.

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=4278953

I got really excited about this idea for Sweeney Todd, and I feel like it's going pretty well, but I haven't gotten nearly enough feedback about my original characters and their place in the story. I don't know, I'd been hoping for some thoughts on their dialogue, mannerisms, general fitting into the story, setting... :)

It's really fun to write, and I get a lot of hits, but I'd really been wanting some insight.

hey :D new to this forum! i kinda need some reviews 4 my clique and harrypotter stories! and dont judge me by 'muggle transfer' thats my wrst story, i just had the idea cuz its a unique plot...plz review, and 4 those who r interested, cld someone join my forums?

New D/J slash fic!

=D

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4273015/1/Toppings_on_The_Sundae

It's all dialogue. I've always wanted to do one of those, and this idea kind of slammed itself onto the paper.

:P

So, it'd be great if someone could review that. You don't need to be familiar with the fandom to get the sweetness of it all.

:3

I wrote a story about Nick Jonas that I'd like to get reviews for. It's called 'Nick's Other Side'. Please check it out as I haven't gotten any reviews for it and I want to know what people think.

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