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Raiu the master of smash bros.

(yah 1000 posts boo-yah!!!)

Diablo skidded across the street with his horns he got up and touched them but they where scorching hot he took his hand back and laughed at corredors remark "Never" he chuckled as he launched darkness grenades at them

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The Reaper calmly added "im pretty sure Ozzy will win but only in a matter of time"

#1001 Jul 22nd, 8:27am
acosta perez jose ramiro

"Yikes!" Corredor used his speed to dodge the grenades. "Okay, I tried, guys; let's get out of here!"

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"I... used my vision powers to find out his electronic lock's combination." Paula explained.

"We originally got in there to find out about some tricky stuff Chakal had been doing to ground students without valid reasons; we actually got lucky and saved five guys from a month detention." Ramón continued. "And... well... when we did that, it was too easy, we had time, and... that rug on Chakal's office is very comfortable, so we... had some fun in there."

#1002 Jul 22nd, 8:36am
wakamolez

Lucas hissed and his claws turned black, his quills dissapeared, and his tail turned from a fish tail to a large black drill. he defaced the granades with the same dark tecnique Diablo used earlier. the grenades exploded harmlessly in the air.

#1003 Jul 22nd, 8:41am
Tseu Tsumi

Jango raised his guitar and shot another energy blast at Diablo.

"Back off Diablo!" Jango yelled as the blast made it's way towards him.

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Manny wouldn't help but laugh more.

"I'll never look at that carpet the same again!" he laughed, his face turning red.

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Nevaeh smiled as she continued to watch the battle.

"Tell me Reaper. What would you think if I told you I'm going to obtain the Miracle City Hospital in a hostile take over?" she asked, never taking her eyes away from the battle.

#1004 Jul 22nd, 10:57am
Raiu the master of smash bros.

EL Diablo redirected the blast with darkness then he shot his own blasts from his guitar and made them strong by fusing them with darkness

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The Reaper's eyes widen "thats sounds perfect" he laughed as he watched the battle

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Clare also broke out in laughter after she heard that

#1005 Jul 22nd, 12:24pm
wakamolez

Lucas Blocked the blasts with his tail nulling the darkness and dissapating the blasts. he was playing on defence in this fight for now it seemed.

#1006 Jul 22nd, 1:25pm
acosta perez jose ramiro

Corredor grabbed some candy bars and threw them in front of him to block some attacks; since he was doing it at super speed, the blocking was actually effective. He didn't want to attack and risk Diablo's rage but he wasn't eager to leave his companions either.

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The others started laughing as well, and soon Ramón and Paula laughed too.

"Okay, now we all participated once, are we continuing the game or doing something else?" Angela proposed.

#1007 Jul 22nd, 5:37pm
Tseu Tsumi

Jango quickly jumped up, trying to dodge, but was hit. His bottom half was scattered across the concrete, and he fell down hard. He looked over at Diablo with scared eyes. He needed time to regenerate his legs, and for now, he was a sitting duck.

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Nevaeh smiled evilly, her eyes shining with dark intent.

"Perfect," she whispered as she licked her lips.

#1008 Jul 22nd, 10:39pm
Raiu the master of smash bros.

Diablo grinned when he saw the sight of Jango on the ground,at this moment Diablo raised up his guitar and aimed for jango's head and played three power chords sending three blast coming straight for Jango

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The Reaper looked at Nevaeh "what are you so happy about,sure this is an excellent fight but there's something else isn't there?" he asked

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Clare looked around then said "Well i haven't gone yet" she said with a smile

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Roy was now on his sister's trail "I think she's somewhere around her but her trail goes every where" he mumbled to himself

Vector landed on the same building that Roy was on "Still can't find Clare?" he asked in a calm tone

"Yah,but there's one thing i don't get" Roy said confused by the trail and the reason

"What?" Vector asked

"After she was repaired her objectives and behavior changed its like she has a mind of her own" Roy mumbled

"Thats impossible" Vector laughed

Roy looked back with a serious face

Vector's laughter stopped "oh your serious"

#1009 Jul 23rd, 6:37am
wakamolez

In a flash Lucas blocked all three blasts adsorbing them into his body and a large pair of jet black wings ripped out of his back. He hissed in anger, his eyes turing blood red as he shot tword the villan. He then promply shattering diablo guitar with a swing of his tail. Lucas's entire being was engulfed in darkness and he looked like he'd just about lost his mind as he brutally attacked Diablo

(for the recourd Luc's got too many earrings/limiters off at this point and Diablo just set a bomb off. )

#1010 Jul 23rd, 7:17am
acosta perez jose ramiro

"Okay then... Ramón, is your turn, and Clare is the only one left." Paula pointed.

"Then... Clare, truth or dare?" Ramón asked her.

#1011 Jul 23rd, 9:29am
Tseu Tsumi

Jango watched wide eyed as Lucas attacked Diablo. His legs regenerated and he quickly got back up.

"Lucas! Stop it!" Jango called out as he started running towards his friend, hoping to get there in time before he did something he knew Lucas would regret.

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Nevaeh's eyes widened in shock at what she was seeing.

"I...I think that is what we sensed earlier. That boy and his powers," she said in awe.

#1012 Jul 23rd, 10:25am
Raiu the master of smash bros.

The Reaper was also shocked "Thats no boy" he said in disbelive

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"Dare" Clare said calmly

#1013 Jul 23rd, 11:19am
acosta perez jose ramiro

"Fine; a dare... mmm..." Ramón thought for a moment. "Okay, I dare you stand still and silent, with a blank expression, for 10 minutes, while the rest of us tries to make you laugh or move."

#1014 Jul 23rd, 8:44pm
Raiu the master of smash bros.

"easy" was all Clare said as she turned her nice funloving expression into an empty dull expression she was staring at all the kids as she was doing this

#1015 Jul 24th, 5:30am
acosta perez jose ramiro

"Okay, guys, let's try to make her lose!" Angela said to her companions.

Ramón and Paula started whistling at Clare's ears; when that failied, Carlos started dancing in front of her in quite a ridiculous and funny way; Angela pretended to punch her, stopping her fist just an inch before touching the nose; Lorenzo howled behind her.

"Come on, people, we need help." Lorenzo said to the others, knowing Frida was an expert in annoying people.

#1016 Jul 24th, 10:30am
Tseu Tsumi

Frida smiled and stood up.

"Here, let me try," she said as she walked in front of Clare. She took in a deep breath and started dancing while singing.

"Scootati scattati skootatiski, nothings going on! Scootati dattati scootatobi! A cat pooped on my lawn! A CAT POOPED ON MY LAWN! OW!" she yelled, falling to her knees at the end and watched for a reaction from Clare.

#1017 Jul 24th, 11:31am
Raiu the master of smash bros.

Clare still had the blank expression

#1018 Jul 24th, 2:29pm
acosta perez jose ramiro

"This girl is a statue." Angela thought out loud. "Let me try something."

Angela took a few feathers out of nowhere and gave them to her friends so they could tickle Clare's face, nose and neck.

#1019 Jul 24th, 3:30pm
Raiu the master of smash bros.

'this is a good try but since im an android i have no nerves so i feel nothing' Clare thought as she still sat blank in her statue like state

#1020 Jul 25th, 5:19am
acosta perez jose ramiro

"Let me try something." Paula transformed into Lechuza and used her vision on Clare; she found out she was an android but was discreet enough to keep silence.

"So, this is your secret. Don't worry; I'll wait for you to tell us." Paula thought before turning back to normal. "Okay, the sensitive point is... here!"

Paula pressed a very precise spot on Clare's body; many of her circuits and sensors' main systems were there, therefore a good touch could affect them and make Clare to jump or move.

#1021 Jul 25th, 8:53am
Raiu the master of smash bros.

"Hey" Clare said as she fell down "Agh Crap i lost!"

#1022 Jul 25th, 9:11am
Tseu Tsumi

Frida smiled and high fived Paula.

"Good job!" she said with a laugh.

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"Alright. What are we going to do now?" Manny asked.

#1023 Jul 25th, 11:07am . Edited Jul 25th, 12:05pm
wakamolez

(Hey, is anyone going to continue with the other scene? Cuz I'll continue it....)

#1024 Jul 25th, 7:58pm
acosta perez jose ramiro

(Sure, go ahead)

Corredor dashed behind Lucas and Jango.

"Guys, this is getting dangerous. If we keep fighting, soon we'll have White Pantera here. The guy is a fool but when it comes to superheroics he can kick our butts!" Corredor said, looking around in case WP or any other hero was coming.

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"Thanks." Paula replied before looking at Clare. "Sorry, Clare, but nobody said superpowers weren't allowed."

"Let's play something else." Angela said. "How about Twister?"

#1025 Jul 25th, 9:27pm
wakamolez

Lucas threw the soundly beaten Diablo into a wall before Jango grabbed his arm and jolted him out of his trance. His eyes went from blood red back to a deep green. "Huh? did I beat him?" he looked at Diablo. "I-is he dead...?"

#1026 Jul 26th, 11:42am
Tseu Tsumi

Jango looked over at Diablo.

"No, his chest is moving. He's breathing, which means he's alive. Let's get out of here. Corredor is right about White Pantera. Let's go!" Jango started running, making sure to keep a tight grip on Lucas' sleeve as he ran.

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Nevaeh watched with interest as the group made their escape.

"Diablo is in bad shape. Bring him here and I will heal him," She said to the Reaper.

#1027 Jul 26th, 12:28pm
acosta perez jose ramiro

Corredor grabbed his companions and ran away from the fight scene at his top speed. He only stopped when they were the other side of the city.

#1028 Jul 27th, 12:45am
Raiu the master of smash bros.

"Very well" the reaper said as he teleported to Diablo and took him to Neaveh

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Clare was puzzled "Whats twister?" she asked

#1029 Jul 27th, 6:32am . Edited Jul 27th, 6:33am
Tseu Tsumi

Jango let out a sigh of relief once they made it to the other side of town.

"Well, that was an interesting candy run," he said with a cheesy grin.

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Nevaeh waved her hand and a large stone table appeared. She set Diablo on it and quickly muttered a spell. A large glowing red rune appeared above Diablo and slowly started spinning.

"There. It will take some time for him to heal completely but he should regain consciousness in a few minutes," she said and went back to her throne.

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Manny smiled at Clare.

"Its a game where we spin a spinner and you have to put a body part on a colored dot. It's fun," he said.

#1030 Jul 27th, 8:10am
wakamolez

Lucas sighed. "Yeah... Oh! Wait!" He pulled the same big lollipop out oh his hoodie "Now can you tell me what this is please?"

#1031 Jul 27th, 8:16am
Tseu Tsumi

Jango couldn't help but laugh. Even after the battle they just had, he still wanted to know what a lollipop was.

"It's a lollipop. You take the wrapper off and lick it," Jango said with a big grin on his face.

#1032 Jul 27th, 8:26am
brooke bunny

then brookes mom came in and said "cake time" and everyone ran downstairs to eat cake and was shocked to see

a six layer cake (cherry,lemon,mint,strawberry,chocolate,vanilla) "omg" brooke said "mom,you made this?!"

"hey you said you couldnt decide if you wanted one of these flavors so i baked one of each"her mom said

"im in heaven!" linda said

#1033 Jul 27th, 8:35am
wakamolez

"Wrapper? you mean the plastic?" He licked the wrapper "no wonder it has no taste..." Lucas struggled with the thin plastic sheet for a good thirty secounds before giving up. "Jangoo open this pleease?" he begged.

#1034 Jul 27th, 8:36am
Light Riku

Al walked through the streets. He was walking like a drunk man.

"Almost there" He said.

He fainted.

#1035 Jul 27th, 9:51am
Tseu Tsumi

Manny couldn't stop the thin trail of drool from running down his chin.

"That is the biggest cake I've ever seen," he said as he rubbed his hands together.

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Frida looked at the cake with wide eyes.

"It's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen," she said.

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Jango rolled his eyes and took the lollipop from Lucas. He easily removed the plastic and handed the thing back to Lucas.

"There you go," he said.

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Nevaeh watched Al faint though her crystals and smiled.

"Shiori!" she called out. Shiori appeared before Nevaeh.

"Yes mistress?" she asked.

"Go fetch your son. Bring him here and take him up to one of the guest rooms," she told her. Shiori nodded and quickly vanished.

#1036 Jul 27th, 1:36pm
Raiu the master of smash bros.

Clare being and android didn't eat so she really didn't know what she was going to do with the cake

#1037 Jul 27th, 2:49pm
Light Riku

Someone behind Nevaeh chuckled.

"Fool" The voice said.

#1038 Jul 27th, 3:21pm
Tseu Tsumi

Nevaeh's eyes widened as she slowly turned around to see who was behind her.

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(I'll let you describe what she sees since I don't know if its the black smoke or something else. And I did see the page you told us about from xxxHolic. All I have to say is I think my character is a little screwed now.)

#1039 Jul 27th, 4:39pm
Light Riku

(Mind telling me what did you saw, please?, just to make sure I gave the correct page.What do you mean by "a little screwed"?)

As soon as Nevaeh turned she saw someone standing there pointing his sword at her.

(The man from her nightmare)

#1040 Jul 27th, 5:23pm
acosta perez jose ramiro

"You must get out more, Lucas. Anyone knowing you don't even know what's candy and how to eat it... well, it wouldn't blow your cover but it would make you a very well known weird guy." Corredor pointed.

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Paula, who knew Clare's secret, whispered at her.

"This is cake; it's a sweet-tasting food most humans like a lot. Think about food as the way we get our energy." Paula kept a low tone so nobody but Clare could hear her.

"This is a bakery masterpiece, Mrs." Carlos said to Brooke's mom, surprised as well at the huge cake.

#1041 Jul 27th, 5:42pm
Raiu the master of smash bros.

"Oh,kay but what am I going to do with it?" clare whispered back

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MEANWHILE

A small portal appeared in the park a large figure stepped out exausted and wounded the figure moved through the streets knocking over trash cans and tripping over fire hydreds he stubbled across a small ferral cat, the cat hissed at the figure and ran into the nearby sewer the hulking figure then walked past a destroyed candy shop he then fell do the ground and then blacked out

#1042 Jul 27th, 6:34pm . Edited Jul 27th, 6:37pm
Tseu Tsumi

(I saw a girl surrounded by the black smoke surrounding a woman as she was told she wasn't that "clean" of a person. I'm guessing that's what the smoke looks like. And I meant screwed by the description you gave in the Create a character page)

Nevaeh quickly jumped away from her throne. She held out her hand and her staff flew to her. She aimed it at the blue armored man, gritting her teeth.

"How the hell did you get here?" she asked.

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Shiori appeared beside Al. She knelt down and gently brushed his hair with her hand.

"It's okay. I'm here," she whispered before picking him up and vanished.

She reappeared in a small bedroom with a bed, side table, television, and a wardrobe up against the wall. She set her son down on the bed and gently tucked him in.

"Good night," she whispered to him and kissed him on the cheek.

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White Pantera arrived at the destroyed candy store but saw he was too late. He looked around when he came upon the unconscious Necrid. He gasped and ran over to the poor figure. He checked to make sure he was still breathing and sighed when he found he was.

"I can't take him to the hospital. He will raise too many questions. I will have to take him home," White Pantera said aloud and as gently as he could lifted the creature and started to make his way back home.

#1043 Jul 27th, 8:21pm . Edited Jul 27th, 9:00pm
acosta perez jose ramiro

"Well... when using my vision, I noticed you have some sort of stomach that can take energy from alternative power sources. You can actually chew and swallow it without damaging your mechanisms." Paula whispered back at the android while the other started getting a good slice of cake each, Carlos and Ramón letting their girls have the first bite.

#1044 Jul 27th, 8:37pm
Light Riku

(Okay.)

"I've been always here, demon." Arashi said. "You really thought you came out from the other world alone?"

He prepared to attack.

"Think again. TSUNAMI STRIKE"

(The other world is the nightmare)

(*To Tseu Tsumi*:Mind if you do the rest since he's your character....and let me be honest: The Nightmare scene was great! But don't kill him, I want to say something.)

#1045 Jul 27th, 9:11pm . Edited Jul 27th, 9:13pm
Raiu the master of smash bros.

Clare whispered back "thanks i forgot about that" she then took a slice and chewed and swallowed the cake.

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When Necrid awoke a few minutes later he discovered he was on a couch he got up and looked around it was a very nice house it brought back memories in his life but those all seemed blurry now

#1046 Jul 28th, 5:04am . Edited Jul 28th, 5:05am
acosta perez jose ramiro

Paula smiled at Clare before joining Ramón; soon, she and her boyfriend were feeding cake to each other. Angela and Carlos were almost the same, her licking and kissing his cheek and lips whenever cake left a spot on them.

#1047 Jul 28th, 5:16am
wakamolez

Lucas licked his loilipop and shot Corredor a small glare. "If anyone was watching that fight-and I'm sure someone, somewhere, WAS-I'm screwed anyhow. And hey, don't pin me for not knowing anything I'm only-" Lucas caught himself and stoped just in time. he took a deep breath ignored the looks of confution and continued "I... was raised by monks in the middle-east. I can't help if alot of this stuff is new to me ok?"

(Jango doesn't know about this fact on lucas)

(And Geese! You guys whent crazy wile I was snoozeing! awsome scenes though thanks to the folks in my scene for not running off without me)

#1048 Jul 28th, 5:46am
Tseu Tsumi

Jango raised an eyebrow but quickly lowered it and smiled.

"Alright then. We're going to have to show you a bunch of other stuff too then. Like soda and pizza," he said.

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A large line of blue energy shot forth at Nevaeh when the sword hit the ground. Nevaeh quickly slammed her staff down and raised a barrier around her. The strike hit the barrier full force and divided around Nevaeh. The attack ended quickly but the floor had been scorched by the attack.

'Damn it. I can't fight him here. My lair is too crowded and if he hit one of the pods my plans would be set back weeks. I need to get him out of here,' she thought. She vanished in a flash of purple light and reappeared behind the Blue Falcon. She grabbed his shoulder and in another flash of light they were both gone.

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Manny and Frida sat next to each other as they both ate the cake. They ate their favorite flavors first then moved onto the remaining ones.

"This is good cake," Frida said.

"You could say that again," said Manny.

"This is good cake," Frida said again.

#1049 Jul 28th, 11:07am
wakamolez

Lucas looked utterly baffled. "The what now? Soda..?"

#1050 Jul 28th, 1:34pm


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