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Topic: Vampire Abraham
Who should begin
#1 Nov 21st 2007, 8:15am
Dana Kathrine Scully
Granny and I switched characters. I'm Roddy, she's abraham. You start Queen. UR Rita, after all, LOL
#2 Nov 21st 2007, 3:07pm
Toxic Black Rose
Rita wakes up one Friday morning in the summer. She lives with her dad in a idillic cottage every summer. She checks her email to see a party invitation. Her good friend, Daisy was engaged and the theme was Masqurade. The invite said, "Single? Get a blind date with another guest!"

"Eh dad! Daisy's haveing a party. Can I go?"

oorp

Ok I need somebody to cover Ritas dad.

#3 Nov 21st 2007, 7:34pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
oorp

I'll do it! Daisy is always getting people on blind dates, huh? She's like the matchmaker!

rp

"Depends. What time and who's Daisy? What's it for?"

oorp

My dad is ALWAYS like this. Are Rita's parents, divorced or something? You said she lived w/ her dad.

#4 Nov 21st 2007, 8:01pm
Ash Li Wu
oorp

Ei! I'm here! Oh wait, when will Abraham enter the story?

#5 Nov 21st 2007, 8:04pm
Toxic Black Rose
"You know Daisy." said Rita. "She's my best friend. It's tomorrow at the Tipton. the theme is masqurade."

oorp

No her parents are not divorced. She and her dad stay at that cottage to see if they can find anything interesting. And Granny, Abrham does not comeout for a while so just sit back nd enjoy the show. When Roddy takes Rita to his room and she falls asleep, thats when she wakes up in Abrahams mansion in a coffin.

#6 Nov 21st 2007, 8:11pm
Ash Li Wu
Woooo! scaaary!!! Okay! Just let me practice my evil laugh! Nyaahahahahh!!!! No wait! That's Granny's evil laugh...LOL
#7 Nov 21st 2007, 8:30pm
Toxic Black Rose
Wheres Bails
#8 Nov 21st 2007, 8:31pm
Ash Li Wu
Huh? I thought she was online....
#9 Nov 21st 2007, 8:34pm
Toxic Black Rose
Oh Bails! Were waiting for you Bails! Were gonna wait all night Bails! You better sit down and start typing Bails!
#10 Nov 21st 2007, 8:35pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
Bails bails everywhere! Start the roleplay, M! (can I call you that?)
#11 Nov 21st 2007, 9:37pm
Toxic Black Rose
Yeah sure. And it's not my turn. It's yours.
#12 Nov 22nd 2007, 7:54am
Dana Kathrine Scully
oorp

Oooh. Okie!

rp

"When'll you be home? I'm going to be heading to Socketset's later. I want you to go with me. And if it's masquerade, what do you plan on wearing?"

oorp

serious game of 20 questions, lol

#13 Nov 22nd 2007, 6:04pm
Toxic Black Rose
"I dont know... I'll make a dress I suppose? And I think it basically never ends." she sighed. "I wont make it to Socketset's I suppose." After a small argument, her dad agreed that she could go. She was a responsible eighteen year old mature woman. She called Daisy.

"Are you comeing?"

"Yeah. I argued with dad but it was worth it. I'm calling you about the blind date thing."

"Ok, who are you and what did you do to Rita Malone?"

Rita cracked up.

"I'm serious. I want a date. Hook me up with the most handsome guy there is"

"You got it."

She wrote Rita's name on a list and matched her.

"Hmm, Rita and John... no. Rita and Roddy... Roddy and Rita... that just might work. His name is Roddy St. James. He had brown hair and brown eyes and he'll be wearing a tuxedo and a classic black mask."

"Wow, that really narrows it down."

"I'll tell him to meet you at the stairway. K? What'll you wear?"

"I have no idea. But I'll stitch something out."

oorp

Let me handle what she wears.

#14 Nov 22nd 2007, 6:51pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
oorp

okies!

#15 Nov 22nd 2007, 8:00pm
Toxic Black Rose
Rita arrived at the Tipton and checked into a room. The room next door was where her blind date was. They didnt know, but they were standing across from eachother as they got ready, only the wall was seperating them. Rita curled her hair. Her dress was white with a romantic shoulder bareing sleeve where the sleeves were down to her upper arms. There was a gold ribbon around her waist and string leaves sewed on. Her mask was white and her gold metallic flats nearly brightned her. She was on her way.

oorp

Your turn!

#16 Nov 22nd 2007, 8:46pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
oorp

OMG! That'd be weird, wouldn't it? Here I go...

rp

Roddy St. James combed his hair and straightened his tux. He wanted to look perfect for Rita, or whatever her name was. He couldn't remember. He cleared his throat and put on his black mask, then walked out into the hallway. He had no idea that the girl in front of him was his blind date.

oorp

EEK! Here comes their first meeting! I was gonna have them run into each other, but nope. Decided against it. LOL! Your turn! LOL!

btw, I'm sugarhappy right now. LOL

#17 Nov 22nd 2007, 8:53pm
Toxic Black Rose
Rita waited by the bottom of the stairway, looking at her watch. A girl with red curls wouldnt be hard to find. Neon lights were flashing everywhere and professional dancers were on the stage while a girl sang. There were video screens everywhere and a fourtune teller, and curtains of small rooms for privacy. In attition, skydancers. Roddy was comeing right down the stairs.
#18 Nov 22nd 2007, 8:57pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
oorp

Ooh. What does she think??!

rp

Roddy saw a girl at the bottom of the stairs. she had red ringlets and he couldn't help but think, "What a freaking lucky match!" He got to the bottom and approached her.

oorp

Your turn again! LOL! EEK!

Still Sugarhappy, LOL!

#19 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:01pm
Toxic Black Rose
oorp

Hey, your the one who plays Roddy.

rp

Rita leaned on the golden railway as some masked stranger came to her. He was almost too scard to talk to her.

"Well, well, well... you must be Roddy St. James." she said.

#20 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:04pm . Edited Nov 22nd 2007, 9:08pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
oorp

I know, but I couldn't think of anything for him to say.

rp

Roddy cleared his throat nervously. "Um, yeah. You must be...hold on a second...Rita?" He was VERY nervous now. Would she accept him even though he couldn't remember her name?

oorp

Your turn again!

#21 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:13pm
Toxic Black Rose
Rita smirked.

"Shes good." said Rita. "So I heard your the best man. Excited?"

#22 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:15pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
oorp

haha

rp

"Sorta. Geez, this mask gets hot..." Roddy said, pulling the mask from his face.

oorp

He pulls it away and how about Rita goes all, "Geez, he's like, really...hot!" or something along thise lines. Okie?

#23 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:18pm
Toxic Black Rose
"Hey, theres no need to be scared. Let's dance and maybe have a drink, then see the fourtune teller."
#24 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:20pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
"Alright." Roddy followed Rita to the bar, where he bought them each a Blue ram(should they drink that or something else?). Then, a spotlight dance came on and the spotlight shone on them, and Daisy ran up to them and ushered them to the dance floor. Roddy's face flushed with embarrassment. He took Rita's hand and placed a hand on her hip, and the two looked marvelour together.

oorp

I HAD to do something like that. That okay with you?

#25 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:26pm
Toxic Black Rose
oorp

Its fine. Let's try to get to the part where Abraham takes Rita without rushing. Is Granny here?

rp

"Whats the matter St, James? Never danced with a woman before?"

She realized that she was falling in love with him. They went outside onto the balcony and talked.

"How come you never liked dateing?" he asked.

"I dont know." said Rita. "Maybe it's because I dont know if the guy is right for me... but I had a really great time with you."

"Me too."

The drink Rita had began to make her dizzy. She just found out she liked Roddy but she was beginning to feel sick.

#26 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:33pm
Ash Li Wu
I"M HERE!!!
#27 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:42pm
Toxic Black Rose
BAILS! DONT LEAVE ME HERE!
#28 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:44pm
Ash Li Wu
rp

From the trees, a shadow hides behind them. He saw the most beautiful girl in the balcony. "Vell, vat do we have here?" he said, he looked at her from top to bottom "Aah, perfect"

oorp

Uh question, what's Abraham gonna do with Rita?

#29 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:45pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
I'm stil here, don't worry. What WILL Abraham, the stupid, barainless, freak he is-oh, sorry, what will he do? btw, granny, LOVE the accent, LOL "Vell, Vat do we have here?" LOL! Queen?
#30 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:47pm
Toxic Black Rose
When Roddy carries Rita to his room and sets her in his bed to sleep, she'll wake up in Abraham's castle. Right now is where Rita gets weak. Go Bails. Be romantic! And Abrahams gonna carry her to his castle.
#31 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:50pm . Edited Nov 22nd 2007, 9:51pm
Ash Li Wu
oorp

LOL, I alwayz vanted to do a vampires voice!!! Queen please answer!

#32 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:51pm
Toxic Black Rose
I'm lovin it!
#33 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:51pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
oorp

Okie! I'm good at that! LOL

rp

"Oh," Rita moaned. She put a hand to her head, her eyes zoning out. She heard Roddy, but in a faraway voice. "You should lie down," Roddy told her. Rita tried to walk, but stumbled. After a few more tries at walking, Rita couldn't do anything but fall. Roddy finally just hooked his arm under her legs at the knees, and leaned her head against his chest to help her breathe. She still hadn't removed her mask. Roddy made it up the stairs carrying the girl he was ever-so-quickly falling in love with to his room. She was obviously too dizzy to find her key card, so he just took her to his room. After opening the door, he walked inside and set Rita on the king-sized, pillow top bed. He carefully removed her mask, and felt mor for her when he saw her whole face. She was absolutely drop dead gorgeous. Roddy pulled a blanket over her and did the manly thing;slept on the couch until she woke up. He couldn't help but think, "She's the one!"

oorp

Romantic enough? I hope so. This was off of sugarhappiness! -bounces off subsection walls- Whee!!! Somebody shut me up!

#34 Nov 22nd 2007, 9:58pm
Toxic Black Rose
Super romantic. I might just print that out. Ok Abraham.
#35 Nov 22nd 2007, 10:00pm
Ash Li Wu
oorp

Okay! Show time!!!

rp

While both of them are sleeping, the shadow went through the window of the room and formed it's true self, a vampire. He found the girl lying on the bed, he went closer to her and noticed she wasn't wearing a mask "Ah, you are most certainly more beautiful in your sleep, but it vill be more beautiful sleeping in my coffin" He covered her with his cape, and wrapped both of them, then they disappeared like thin air.

oorp

Nyahahaahah!!! I'm sooo eevil!!!

#36 Nov 22nd 2007, 10:05pm
Toxic Black Rose
That was preety good.

Rita awoke an hour later. At first she didnt notice she was somewhere else. She felt something scraping against her arm. A gloved handheld her chin and the other one stroked her long hair. She heard a creepy voice mentioning something about marriage.

#37 Nov 22nd 2007, 10:10pm . Edited Nov 22nd 2007, 10:13pm
Ash Li Wu
oorp

Uh...okay no pressure! Let's see waht I can do

rp

"Vy hello there my pretty" he whispered to her ear "I see your awake, too bad, you vere beautiful in your sleep" he stroked her hair again and evily smiled "I hope your comfortable, becauz you'll stay here in a very long time"

#38 Nov 22nd 2007, 10:17pm
Toxic Black Rose
Rita sat up.

"Who are you and where am I?"

#39 Nov 22nd 2007, 10:19pm
Ash Li Wu
"You can call me Abraham, for now, and may I know the name of this beautiful lady that I'm looking at right now?" he stared at her eyes
#40 Nov 22nd 2007, 10:25pm
Toxic Black Rose
"What is this, some hidden camera show?" she snapped. She got up and headed for the door. "I have to get up really early tomorrow and you are wasteing my time!"
#41 Nov 22nd 2007, 10:27pm
Ash Li Wu
Rita opened the door, but she saw Abraham standing in front of her. She was confused, the last second he was over there, then the next second he was standing in front of her. "Oh don't vorry, you von't vaste your time here" He then hypotized her with his eyes "You vill sleep, now!"

oorp

Oh snap! I gotta go now! I have class to attend to...

#42 Nov 22nd 2007, 10:34pm
Toxic Black Rose
Rita slapped him and ran off. She had no idea where she was going but she had to tell Roddy. He could of been worried. She made it back to the Tipton.

oorp

Ok, makesure you reply soon.

#43 Nov 22nd 2007, 10:36pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
oorp

I'm BAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!

rp

Rita knocked on Roddy's door. He looked to see who it was and threw the door open as fast as he could. "Rita!" he exclaimed. "What happened? You didn't tell me you were leaving or anything, and I was worried since this is a big city and-" he cut himself off and took a deep breath. "So what happened?"

oorp

I ain't sugarhappy no more. Sucky. I know, very bad grammar. But I don't give a hoot! Your turn, M!

#44 Nov 23rd 2007, 10:25am
Toxic Black Rose
"I dont know, some bloke brought me to this toy castle and said something about marriage. I think he was a vampire because of his accent."

It looked like Roddy didnt believe her. And he didnt.

#45 Nov 23rd 2007, 12:08pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
oorp

Good reaction for Roddy. And I wouldn't believe Rita if she said she had a run in with a vampire either, LOL

rp

"Rita? I-is something wrong? Maybe you're still fizzy from last night. Sit down." Roddy said, mo re unbelief in his voice.

#46 Nov 23rd 2007, 12:34pm
Toxic Black Rose
"I'm not jokeing!" she snapped. She was in her casual clothes and her hair was straight. "Would I joke about something lke this? He took me in my sleep! I'm fine Rod really, but this guy was bothering me."
#47 Nov 23rd 2007, 1:16pm
Dana Kathrine Scully
"Alright, alright, I'll make sure he doesn't take you again, alright?" he said. The way she was acting about this made him belive the slightest little bit that mabe she WAS taken by some vampire.
#48 Nov 23rd 2007, 1:37pm
Toxic Black Rose
"And how exactly are you going to do that? My dad expected me home hours ago and I need to leave." she said.
#49 Nov 23rd 2007, 4:04pm
Ash Li Wu
Roddy couldn't say anything after what Rita just said, even if it's true that a vampire just kidnapped Rita, her father won't believe her story. But at that same day, there was a storm up top. The currents in the sewer waters are too fast that none could use a boat to go anywhere, it's impossible that Rita goes home at that kind of weather. "Great timing!" said Rita, "I can tell my dad I won't be going home for a while". She dialed the phone and told her dad that she should stay overnight at her friend's place, her dad agreed. "It's been a long night, we should sleep" said Roddy. Then both of them were fast asleep.

oorp

Okay! That was long. LOL

#50 Nov 23rd 2007, 9:10pm


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