Noooooo!!! *sobs*

It's a Romance/Tragedy story, right? Why???!!!!

Maybe I'm gonna cry at this story like the last time I watched Romeo and Juliet! LOL!

I'll save you Mr. Jones!!!

Roddy:"Ri, why'd you write a death story, with me being the victim?"

Rita:"I dunno. I was bored and you had just gotten done saying how boring life must be for me." laughs

Roddy:"I'll never understand her..."

LOL! sorry. I like writing long replies.LOL

Shocky: Since Roddy's gonna die, can I shocky him one last time?

Roddy: I am not gonna die!

Granny: Can I marry you Mr. Jones?

Roddy: Rita, help!!!!

You see, I like making long replies, too.

Shockey:"Aww, Rita!"

Roddy:"yes Rita, take it and give it to the slugs! Please!"

Rita:"Go put it away Shockey. Now."

Shockey:"Rats."

LOL! teeheehee

Okay, it's a FA fic, obviously.

Rita is in a bad mood because her mother got sick on that day. She's worried about her mother, but Mrs. Malone told her to not to worry and go have fun with Roddy. Rita did what her mother said and sailed the Jammy with Roddy. Roddy tries to cheer her up by singing. Rita was a little happy(and annoyed, lol), she thanked Roddy though. Then Roddy asks Rita to sing.

So, this is just the summary. What do you think?

And in return I'll give you the sketch that you asked me.

I figure out the dress thing, and now all I have to do is to put it on paper.

Please write me a song that Rita would sing. Don't worry about Roddy's, I found a perfect song for him. LOL!

I let my friend read it, she said it's perfect for children books (But not really for kids, lol)

She said it's great, she also said it will be better if I continue it.

LOL! It's so embarassing!

Honestly, is my story childish?

Don't worry, I got over the writer's block, now I'm just too lazy...

Darn schoolwork!!! I only write the story on my free time and my free time is 2 hours, but then, I'm a slow writer!!! Waaaah!!!

http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o130/sammydodo/Ritasemolook.jpg

Forgive me if it looks crappy. Blame the scanner!!! >_<

Oh, I decided not to make the story for Valentines day, that's like 3 months away! Instead, I might post it around this month or next month. Same with chapter 8 (I think), and I did some slight changes to make it more interesting. And of course I'll give credit to the song to you.

It looked a bit fuzzy, bit it looked good. I forgot to mention, sorry, It's a first date dress. I forgot to mention that, huh?

I think I'll update the chapter soon

But with school work on the way, It's slows me down. Grrr....

lol

Right now, I'm making chapter 10. I wonder if Rita will forgive Roddy....Maybe yes, maybe no....Only I know!

I don't know. I need to find time to log into my emil and log out without being caught.

Wait, you're grounded. AGAIN?!

Duchess is evil. Pink is evil. It should be outlawed everywhere.

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