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Twiglegofthehomunculi
Topic: Valley of the Dragons
A valley surrounded from hills keeps the valley safe from prying eyes. A placid lake sits in the middle of the valley with a river running through a little gap in the valley towards the ocean. The hills are dotted with caves and every now and then you hear the rustle of dragon wings.
#1 Jan 30th, 12:58pm
Valanikos Dark
I sat on a precipice, leaning against the smooth rock as I dozed in my Mage cloak. The other dragons usually gave me a wide berth, but that was all right. I enjoyed the solitude. This realm was a nice place, full of enchantment. I was glad that I'd decided to take a small vacation here...
#2 Jan 31st, 4:14pm . Edited Jan 31st, 4:15pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Spiderlegs crawled among the caves. She was incredibly bored, and needed something to do. She stared at the sky, and saw a shape on a rock. He seemed to be a person, and to poor Spiderlegs, he looked HUGE. She decided to call to him. "Hey! Hello? Who are you?"
#3 Jan 31st, 4:24pm . Edited Jan 31st, 4:24pm
Valanikos Dark
The boy opened his eyes, looking around sleepily. "Wh-what? Who's there?"
#4 Jan 31st, 4:29pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Spiderlegs banged herself on her head. "He can't see me, I'm a couple of inches tall!" Muttering to herself, she climbed up to the rock, then poked the boy. Hard.
#5 Jan 31st, 4:31pm . Edited Feb 03rd, 4:12pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Dark, I gotta go.
#6 Jan 31st, 4:34pm
Valanikos Dark
All right, then.

The mage yelped. "What... oh, hi."

#7 Jan 31st, 4:35pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Okay, you've read Dragon Rider right? Well then you probably noticed that my person is named like Twigleg. I was having a character-name-making block.

"Good, we're finally getting somewhere," Spiderlegs said. "I asked you your name.

#8 Feb 01st, 11:40am
Valanikos Dark
I have it, actually.

The boy smiled. "Just call me Dark. Who would you be?"

#9 Feb 01st, 12:36pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Me to. It ROCKS!

"I'm called Spiderlegs," Spiderlegs replied. "Though I haven't been here that long, I've never seen a person here."

#10 Feb 01st, 12:45pm
Valanikos Dark
Have you read The Thief Lord, perchance?

He smiled. "Well, I'm not technically a person. I'm part dragon, so they let me stay here."

#11 Feb 01st, 12:50pm . Edited Feb 01st, 12:50pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
"Oh..." Spiderlegs said. "Well, I'm just visiting, the other homunculi at the alchemy lab where I live were so annoying that I had to leave. I've been meaning to explore the world anyway. This is just my first stop."

Yes! I own it.

#12 Feb 01st, 12:51pm . Edited Feb 01st, 12:55pm
Valanikos Dark
He nodded. "Ah. Well, it's nice meeting you. I hope you have a safe trip."
#13 Feb 01st, 12:55pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
"Okay," Spiderlegs replied. She climbed up a little higher and settled on a rock, watching the sky. It was so peaceful here.

Yay! I am multitasking! I am writing on the forum and writing a story for fanfic! Also, dosen't it seem kinda...uninteresting here because we are the only people here? Well, I know someone else will probably join, but not til tonight, because the person made their account last night and they can't talk in forums yet.

#14 Feb 01st, 12:59pm
Valanikos Dark
Yeah, it took me three days for me to start uploading my story chapters when I joined. And now, would you believe it, I'm almost finished with my fic! I've been doing triple-overtime for the past week, so that may be a factor...

And I'll try to drum up some business for this forum as soon as the ones I'm on start up again.

The boy grinned, leaning back and staring up into the sky, savoring the peace and quiet.

#15 Feb 01st, 1:02pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Yay, more people! More people means more fun!

Spiderlegs watched lazily as a dragon left its cave and went to the lake. It had a drink, then went back to the cave. Spiderlegs heard it snore. It was loud. Very loud. On the other side of the valley, a rock tumbled down the slope. Feeling glad that the snoring was on the other side of the valley, Spiderlegs fell asleep.

#16 Feb 01st, 1:07pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Hi I just advertised on another forum. Hope it works...
#17 Feb 01st, 1:24pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Dum, de dum, de doo... *twiddles thumbs* *yawns* *checks watch* *remembers that I don't have a watch* bored...
#18 Feb 01st, 7:12pm
Valanikos Dark
Sorry, had to go somewhere. Get that person yet?
#19 Feb 01st, 7:15pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
You mean the person who had to wait til today? Not yet. There is one other dude, but I don't remember the username. He did something in the questions.
#20 Feb 01st, 7:22pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Woops, gotta go. Gotta go to bed. Sorry, will be on tomarrow.
#21 Feb 01st, 7:25pm
WarSlaynHalo
Apollo sat on a rock watching the dragons with his familiar,End.

"Gotta find something to do I'm so bored" Apollo whined, End nudged him "Dont be such a brat...you might as well see if a dragon will play with you that is if it doesnt rip you to sreds" End laughed

#22 Feb 02nd, 4:10pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Sorry about the wait, I was at a soccer game.

Spiderlegs was startled awake by a whiny voice. Grumbling to herself, she glanced around and saw a boy.

"Not another one," she muttered. "I thought that only us magic creatures knew about this place. If more people come here, we should just set up a tourist attraction. A 'Pet the Dragon' place and some 'Dragon Rides'."

Still muttering to herself, she wandered over to the boy. "No need to repeat a past experiance. I know well enough that he won't see me, so I'll go to him."

#23 Feb 02nd, 4:22pm
WarSlaynHalo
Apollo noticed a presence around him and looked around but found nothing so he ignored it and started to carve things on the rock "I think I should've stayed home, nothing much to do here...and Laharls probably having to do alot of paper work for the dark funds" he laughed
#24 Feb 02nd, 4:28pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Spiderlegs climbed over the last rock and saw the boy carving on another rock.

"If I were you, I would stop carving that rock," she said. "The dragons won't be pleased."

#25 Feb 02nd, 4:32pm
WarSlaynHalo
Apollo heard a small sound and stopped "I hate when I tell myself to do things, it creeps me out but if the dragons are gonna get angery I'd rather not do anything" He sighed rubbing his head and stood up and yawned "I should find somewhere to crash.." he muttered
#26 Feb 02nd, 4:36pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Spiderlegs began to get angry. "I REALLY hate it people don't notice me..." she muttered. She climbed down towards the boy and crept up to his ear. "I SAID THAT YOU NINCOMPOOP!!! she yelled in his ear.
#27 Feb 02nd, 4:40pm
WarSlaynHalo
"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" He yelled rolling around on the rocks, after finding everything was okay he took a moment to look down and saw Spiderlegs "Ohh so you're the one who was talking...and yelling" He scrathed his head

"Who are you?" he spoke to the little creature

#28 Feb 02nd, 4:45pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
"The name's Spiderlegs," Spiderlegs said. "And I'm a homunculus, which probably explains why you didn't see me. I poked the last person who didn't see me VERY hard. So, who are you? And what is that thing with you?"
#29 Feb 02nd, 4:49pm
WarSlaynHalo
"Name's Apollo and Uhh...I can see you fine so no poking..please?" He sighed

he looked back at End "This my familiar the wolf,End" End waged his tail and nodded "hello"

#30 Feb 02nd, 4:59pm
Valanikos Dark
Suddenly, the mage leapt down from above, shaking his cloak. "Well, well. Another visitor?"

Hey, War, what's up? Sorry I couldn't review your story, but as I had already reviewed your first draft, FF won't let me do it again.

#31 Feb 02nd, 6:03pm
WarSlaynHalo
I'm gonna delete it and start fresh i just gotta finish up the thrip chapter,I shouldve done that anyway tho

Apollo looked around "This is werid,I never thoguht I'd meet many people here" he muttered looking down at End who wagged his tail

#32 Feb 02nd, 7:34pm
WarSlaynHalo
And now I've post my new story ^^
#33 Feb 02nd, 8:13pm . Edited Feb 02nd, 8:13pm
Lupinian Star
Linama was walking with Alina on her back when she saw Appllo and Dark.Alina,being bolder,stood up and said"Why are you humans here!?Get out!"Linama blew some smoke out of her nostroils."I'm sure they have a good reason."Alina mutter loudly"Good reason or not they shouldnt be here!"
#34 Feb 02nd, 8:21pm
WarSlaynHalo
"Whoa whoa...I'm a demon for one...sorry to be here I dont seemed very welcomed today This dragon place sure isnt what it said in the booklet..." Apollo smiled "oh but I do have a good reason...I was really bored"

End watched silently and walked over to Apollo's side

#35 Feb 02nd, 8:31pm
Lupinian Star
Alina shook her head"Still.."she looked at Dark"And you!?"Linama bowed her head in hello to Apollo"I'm Linama and my Brownie friend is Alina,who are you?"
#36 Feb 02nd, 9:06pm
WarSlaynHalo
"Demon Prince Apollo kricevscoy and My familiar End" Apollo bowed back "I'm sorry to have come on grounds I should have not, my little brother told me it was fine"
#37 Feb 02nd, 9:23pm
Lupinian Star
Linama asked"And may I ask,prince Apollo,"here Alina plainly stiffled a laugh"who your borther is?"
#38 Feb 02nd, 10:48pm
WarSlaynHalo
"Laharl Krichevscoy, Overlord of the netherworld...normally I wouldn't listen to him but I thought about the dragons from the Netherworld and came to see if the ones here are anything like ours plus he forced the dark Assembly to make me go" Apollo smiled looking at Alina

"Though we've only seen one dragon so far...we can tell the netherworld dragons are more firece due to the terms of survival there...but I was hoping we could stick around for more observations" End concluded "Dude you sound like a Machscientist you need to stop that" Apollo said blankly

#39 Feb 03rd, 6:56am
Lupinian Star
Alina blinked at the talking wolf.Linama smiled"Yes,of course."Alina jumped in"no,he cant!"Linama turned her head to the Brownie"Calm down Alina,he wont cause any harm"Alina muttered"Fine,but what about the other guy?"Linama didnt pay any attention to her question and then told Apollo"But we Dragons dont eat meat,we drink moonlight."
#40 Feb 03rd, 9:44am
WarSlaynHalo
Apollo reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a notepad and wrote it down "Yes that explains it" He smiled then looked down at End "you got that?" The small wolf nodded "if you're were ever attack how would you defend yourselves?"
#41 Feb 03rd, 9:50am
Lupinian Star
At this Alina growled and said"I wont let you answer that Linama!"Linama looked at her"Why?"Alina huffed"If they know how you would defend yourself if they ever do attack you,or any other dragon for that matter,they'd be able to use it against you!"She jumped off Linama's back and walked over to Apollo.She poked him in the ribs"Listen here you!I suggest you dont ask anymore questions!"Linama chuckled"Dont worry about her,her Brownie traits are coming out,she's usally nicer then this."Alina just let out a huff of breath.
#42 Feb 03rd, 12:03pm
WarSlaynHalo
"I wasn't planning anything that I give you my word..but if you dont belive me then thats that I guess"Apollo held his hands in defense and then rubbed the area he had been poked at "

It's good that she nicer, i gonna think the Brownies here were worse than the netherworld Brownies...no offense meant" he smiled

#43 Feb 03rd, 12:49pm
Twiglegofthehomunculi
Sorry about the wait, I was out.

Spiderlegs glanced at the brownie and dragon, who didn't seem to see her. She felt her temper rising, and she called to them. "Yo, Furface and Dragon Breath!"

#44 Feb 03rd, 1:04pm
Lupinian Star
Alina scowled"Well offense taken!"she jumped back onto Linama's back.Linama just shook her head.
#45 Feb 03rd, 1:04pm
Lupinian Star
Linama loked down at the little Homunculus.She tilted her head and asked"Sorry,little one,may I ask,what ae you?You look like a human but your way to small..."Alina looked at Spiderlegs and stuck out her tounge."What do you want,little titch?"She spat at spiderlegs(Lol,stole that from Sorrel!)Alina looked at the brownie"Calm down,Alina."She turned back to Spiderlegs"And may I also ask your name?"
#46 Feb 04th, 3:03pm
Valanikos Dark
Dark leaned against the rock, watching the chatter. "More of them... how nice."
#47 Feb 04th, 3:23pm
Lupinian Star
Alina jumped down and looked at Dark"And what about you,big titch!?!"Alina shook her head and looked at Dark"I'm sorry,she's cranky."
#48 Feb 04th, 3:37pm
Valanikos Dark
The boy grinned, showing fangs. "Me? Nothing, really. I'm just watching."
#49 Feb 04th, 3:43pm
WarSlaynHalo
"Who are you?" End asked trotting up to the mage,Apollo looked over to eagar to find out as well
#50 Feb 04th, 6:09pm


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