Okay this was supposed to be posted yesterday, but there's a reason, why it's a day late. I just purchased a hosting company for my website and I'm setting it up and due to launch on March 7 (or March 13). All I'm doing now is just working out the few kinks, but I'm deciding if I should launch it now or wait until the next chapter to Dokugumo-Ureeru Tsurugi is posted.

But here's the new chapter, I just introduced Koku, the blind runaway shinobi and now I'm introducing the antagonist of the story as well as letting Hiroshi get involved into the mix. This is a pretty good chapter, very descriptive and all. But the good fun starts next chapter. So read on people, read on. And as always, please R&R.

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Reviewer's Comments to Entrapment: Ryokai's Diary: Chapter 4

Unforgiven Gamer

2006-02-14

ch 5, reply ah yes a character that can be a double agent of the enemy and the enemy of my enemy... heh

Interesting chapter of what happened when two Runaway meet up and with so much history to tell between them I wonder did he had other motive for the girl he helped.

Oh well update soon

Wolf

hmmm, Koku is an interesting person to where a lot more on his and Kasumi's past is going to be revealed. And this time I can't give away spoilers like I did below, but rest assured it will be worth the wait.

Thanks for checking out the story and please keep reading.

Unforgiven Gamer

2006-02-14

ch 4, reply Heh this sounds interesting indeed with Ayane playing the biggest part of all.

Probably Kasumi is inside having a snug sleep!

Anyway the interesting fact of the character that seem to notice everything that is out of hte ordinary makes me think of the Anime version of Samurai Deeper Kyo which has a interesting ending as I recall...

anyway on with the next chapter

Wolf

Yes sir, I love Samurai Deeper Kyo while most didn't. I understand to why some people didn't like it...I mean my only gripe was some of the action sequences, all the guy did was light up his sword and kill the bad guy most of the time, but I fell in love with storyline. That's what intrigued me the most. The bad guy trapped inside the good guy's body, doesn't get any better than that. :)

Nitro

2006-02-04

ch 5, anon. Nice. I really like this story. Can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder if Ryu's gonna make an appearance in this story?

I guess I can give this spoiler away...hehehe. Unforutnately, Ryu Hayabusa will not be making an appearance in this story. I'm primarily putting all of my focus and energy into the three characters, Ayane, Kasumi, and Ryokai. I already have Ryu the main character in 2 of my stories and (hate to give this spoiler away) he will play a significant role in "Amnesia". I think I used him enough. Even though Ayane makes a small appearance in each story, I don't have her as a main character in either. So that's what I'm going to put my focus at. And just wait until you see my non-ninja DOA story. I came up with a very interesting storyline.

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