(okay.)

Ciera sighed "gotcha i'll give ryou a call," she muttered heading for the phone and calling.

Jason ran home, angry he couldn't say what he wanted, angry he couldn't bear to stay there, angry at himself for not being good enough... He fell asleep in a few seconds after finally making it home.

Meanwhile: One of Ryuk's men, carrying a duel disk and a special deck, arrived outside Ciera's house. Wearing an all-white get-up from head to toe, he waited silently.

Ciera slammed down the phone angrily "Da** him!" Ciera fumed angrily before running outside. "I can't beleive he hung up on me!" Ciera continued to rant to no one in particular.

"Greetings, Ms Ciera. I believe I have business with you." The man said suddenly, standing right behind her and towering threateningly. (By the way, why don't our Ocs have last names?)

(um mine would be peguses because peguses adopted her, but i never bothered with that lox)

"W who are you?" she stuttered.

"I am an agent of Chaos, Daughter of the Creator, and you are to come with me. If you choose to resist..." He said menacingly, revealing a larger-than-normal duel disk, "You will have to duel me."

"You're on!" She said unleashing her duel disk.

"Indeed..." The man answered as he opened his own.

(By the by, he will be using one custom card, which will become a staple of the villains I make, if that's alright with you.)

(sure thing)

"I'll go first," Ciera said drawing her cards. "I'll play a card in defense mode and your move!"

"You'll have to do better than that, Ciera. You can't last forever against Chaos that way. I summon Jinzo Returner to the field in Attack mode." He said, playing the small, creepy android.

(attack points)

"my turn?"

(600)

"Not even close. Jinzo Returner can attack you directly, ignoring your monster altogether." The man said as he ordered his monster to do just that. "Then, I'll play Hand Destruction, so we each must choose 2 cards to discard to the grave, and then draw two more." The man said, discarding Jinzo and Dark World Lightning and drawing twice more, before laying a facedown and ending his turn.

(He'll be making a move after the attack, I just am waiting on any chains you may want to do.)

"awww man, that's it!" Ciera said discarding two cards. "I summon diabound in attack mode and lay this card face down, now Diabound attack!"

(Hello? I wanted to continue my turn... As in, lay a card facedown afterword, play something... And why doesn't Diabound now have an ATK?)

(sorry i'm used to people speaking their whole turn, besides i didn't have a card face down anyway, oh and he does, somewhere between 15 to1800 we'll go with sixteen)

(But...If I spoke my whole turn, how could you respond to any of it? Like, if I attacked but you used a Kuriboh to avoid taking damage, how would I know? Can I please edit my turn if you're not going to respond to it?)

(sure)

(It is done.)

(done, i attacked your monster)

"Hold, I have a trap you'd be wise to be wary of: Silver Dollar. This card negates your attack as my monster has less than 1000 life points." The man answered, as Diabound's attack was halted.

"then it's yours," ciera mumbled.

"As it should be. My draw." The man said. His face grinned wickedly in an instant, as he called forth a monster from his hand, "Spell Canceller! To the field!" He called, sacrificing Jinzo Returner to do it.

(Chain?)

"uh uh uh, not so fast, trap hole, bye bye to your monster!" (er that is what chain is called right?)

(Huh? Chain Energy is a Continous Spell and can be used only on your turn, plus it wouldn't destroy my monster anyway. Chains are when you react to one card or action with another card, like "chaining" Seven Tools of the Bandit to a Trap card. You should look it up if you don't know it.)

(ooooh sorry i got chain and another card confused let me just edit that.)

As the trap card prepared to take down Spell Canceller, the man laughed. "Not on your life! Since my Jinzo Returner was sent to the Grave, I can now bring back from the grave, Jinzo! And due to his effect, all of your traps are negated." He almost cackled as Jinzo stood next to Spell Canceller.

"Ugh f*** you!" she said angrily. (just hurry up and beat her then)

(Well, she'll have a chance to beat him soon enough, but we wouldn't have a plot if she didn't lose to the unexpected new card.)

The man simply laughed as Spell Canceller and Jinzo attacked as one, striking at Diabound for a combined attack of (2400 + 1800 =) 4200, which if Diabound was destroyed would leave Ciera with 2000 life points.

(then bring it out, it's boring dueling when you know you're gonna lose)

(Alright.) "Alright, I end my turn. Sadly, since Jinzo was brought to the field by Jinzo Returner, it's now ended with my turn." The man said as his creature screamed and vanished.

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