heres the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2570854/1/Ashay

Hiya I will check it out, But I hate stories that are really sad like that :-(

If I cry I blame you! xx

Well I read the Ashay prologue and it was actually very detailed and descriptive, I was a slight bit confised at first but my guess is the main person is Vegeta and he is perhaps witnessing Goku and Chichi distraught about the death of somebody.

I did love the doctor is insane, that was such a good read! It was thoroughly enjoyable, poor Vegeta is sick :'(

It reminded me a little of my fanfic love or lust, in that one vegeta is at home sick, and Bulma is out on a date with a lying cheating Yamcha.

I want to thankyou because apart from being just a really really good read it was also a very good inspiration for me.

I advise you all to check it out!

Oh and do make sure you update it soon!!!!!!!! :'(

This is a nice topic. I will look at some posted stories here too. I always review ;)

I'd like some reviews on two small poems I've written obout Bulma reflecting on her relationship with Vegeta. Both poems have slightly different themese in it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4501397/1/Will_you_hold_me_forever_like_this

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4513515/1/My_Privilege

To Bimbosarahsurfchick: I'm going to read your story about the home sick Vegeta and a Lying cheating Yamcha. I like Yamcha bashing! :D

Thank you for taking the time to read them! I have read your stories many times and have envied your writing ability for years!!! Insane wasn't my favorite but I'll try and update that one first if you really wan't me to....I'm hitting a brick wall in both my stories but I will try to hurry! Have you read my Snippets yet? They might be updated more redilly than my bigger stories...check them out if you haven't already...they might help tide you over till the next update!

Its a free for all!

Please read, comment.. rate all that jazz. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3820616/1/What_msbriefs_ponders_late_at_night http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4214096/1/A_Day_in_the_Life

I'm gonna read some of your fanfictions and I was wondering if some of you would want to read the first chapter of my first story. 3 Hehe, I'm always hoping for many reviews and I got... three? Woohoo http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4548383/1/Nothing_But_A_Dream

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