285b. It happened. Get over it. No, you cannot reject the reality where it happened and substitute your own.

285c. There is no 285b.

285d. Tell that to Shiki Tohno. Unnless of course, you wish to cease to exist.

Aside: I know it's a futile battle but I'll never understand the hatred some fans have for that particular non existent anime.

Its mostly due to disappointment actually of the execution of the Tsukihime anime.

The animators tried to make suitable for kids but never taking into account that Tsukihime is aimed at a more mature audience by default. Also they tried to be unique compare to the to VN. Normally uniqueness and originality are rewarded but unfortunately their execution was bad. They tried too hard and accomplished very little and never even managed to grab the main theme of Tsukihime.

While it sucks, I accept the fact that the anime Shingetsutan Tsukihime exists. That doesn't mean I can't make jokes using the meme, though.

let's consider it a learin curve, given how every other Type-moon-Anime after that turned out, I say they learned their lesson good.

Also a bit about Souhiro Emiya, who had yet to get his appearance, Enjoy

Intro: Souhiro Emiya

"Fufufu, he is coming! He is coming today!"

"It's been a while, almost six months since the last time… I call dibs on his hair! He gets a beehive!"

"Eh? No fair Karin! I wanted to make him braids."

"If you go all out from the start he won't let his guard down, we have to wait until he takes a nap… And I say afro!"

"So we could serve him his favorite tea, with a little extra for good sleep?"

"Won't work on him and messing with food makes Miya-kaa-san angry."

*collective shudder*

"Let's not risk THAT."

"Agreed."

*collective nodding*

Gilgamesh, King of Heroes, Demigod, Heroic Spirit and Nanny of the Emiya-household listened silently as Fuko, Karin and Keiko, three daughters of said Emiya-household, were having a strategy-session. Planning for a rare event, one that only occurs every few months. This event is also the only opportunity for a certain type of pranks, namely the 'messing with a guy's long hair'. It was the visiting time of Souhiro Aozaki-Emiya, Son of Shiro Emiya and Touko Aozaki, official heir to the Aozaki-Family and owner of long red hair, which happens to be very easy styled and makes Souhiro looks soooo cute. No way his sisters let such a potential untapped.

Due the Aozaki-clan's influence and need for an heir, Souhiro has to spend most of his time with them, studying the clan's History, Magic and developing his own skills. Shiro wasn't too happy with his, insisting of regular visits to the Emiya-Residence. The arrangement caused some uneasiness on both sides, the Aozaki worried about their heir's growth, the Emiya's worried about their son's happiness, but it all worries turned out to be unnecessary. Souhiro mastered magic theories and basics in record time without becoming arrogant. And his further growth and unique origin silenced all opposition.

Sounds perfect? Well… there is more to the boy. He is the epitome of relaxed, the first impression he gives everybody is "LAZY!" his hair is long enough to mistake him for a girl, at least until his body finishes puberty and becomes more masculine. He is also sporting 'half-asleep' as his default expression, switching to a goofy smile when talked to.

Then again, Gil-nanny muses, he is an Emiya.

Because when you really know him you learn that Souhiro is more laidback than lazy and brilliant in his work and preparations. And when angered you realize one more thing about, he is Touko Aozaki's son. He doesn't smash his enemies into paste, he takes them apart, catalogs every detail and makes sure they never dare to come again. Not that his sister know this, he never could get seriously angry at them. Shiro's son, period.

Among those of the Emiya-Offspring, Gilgamesh had an especially good compatibility with Souhiro. The boy addressed him with friendly respect, cleaned after himself and he even got these black stains out of his Noble Phantasms, Gil never managed to clean the impurities left behind by Angra Mainyu and the 4th War's Berserker.

So the King of Heroes considered it his divine duty to protect his ally from the machinations of those three witches… now he only has to figure out how.

Finally, someone deigns give me a sensible explanation. That would make sense. Any anime involving the fsn verse will get watched with a microscope. The anime Shirou ** off a lot of people.

@ nanayamode and shadowzerover5

Hey fellas, back on Sunday I posted a bunch of snippets and scene-ideas (some partially written, some not) for Devil Wings 8 in post number 2906 (near the top of page 59).

Unfortunately, a big debate was already going on, attention was elsewhere, and in the end, I don't see any comments on the quality of the ideas and (partially written) characterizations in the #8 preview.

Honestly, I want opinions. Stuff like: how did I handle Tsukiumi's dialogue with Nanoha in the phone scene at the top? Is she sufficiently formal while still being kind to a nice young girl? Is the language I used for her part too wordy, or are they better ways to say what I want her to say, while getting closer to her real self? Is my characterization of her just hoo-drum passable, and if so, how could I make it more memorable?

On Anime Night at EC: should I keep Fate as being the one to recognize the joke being played on Shinta and Nanoha (and by extension, herself) by Karin and Reiko. Or should I have it be Arf who does it, while Fate and Nanoha both remain clueless? In case you aren't familiar with the memes that point this joke out already, Nanoha's barrier jacket coloration bares a striking resemblance to that of the RX-78-2 Gundam mobile suit from the original Mobile Suit Gundam anime, while Fate's barrier jacket matches the color scheme preferred by Char Aznable on his mecha (also a Mobile Suit Gundam character).

And finally, Fate herself being blonde is modeled on the "blonde arch-rival" archtype established by Char, and Nanoha's and Fate's initial rivalry-turned-alliance is even a reflection of RX-78 pilot Amuro Ray's relationship and interactions with him!

The actual joke being played is that Shinta loves mecha anime... Mobile Suit Gundam has always been his favorite... And he was watching it looooooooong before he met Nanoha. Once again, the Nasu-verse conspires to screw with an Emiya! :D

Lastly, I want to know what you guys' thoughts are on how I handled Shinta, Gekkou, and the granola bar. Was it mildly funny but also touching as I tried to make it? Or did the humor fall flat, or negate too much of Gekkou's little act of kindness. Is Gekkou coming off as a complete-jerk-**-in-the-making, or am I achieving the jerkass-with-a-heart-of-gold feel I was going for?

Gekkou sounded fine though you might give him a few more scenes like that to emphasize the gold part.

@Trooper1023

The preview was fine. Gekkou is pretty solid imho.

@neogoki

Thank you for the insight on Souhiro. Can we expect a continuation?

An Ivone OMAKE from me. I altered her age a bit. While she still 14 when she first comes home I made her about two years older than before. So she is about 1 year younger than Reiko instead of 3

BREAKBREAKBREAK

Ivone took a deep breath as she stood in front of large front doors. This was it she had to make a good impression. She had heard from her mother about the exploits her father and her siblings had. One is said to be able to fight Dead Apostle Ancestors and can command the power of the Blue! Nodding to herself as she tried to calm her nerves, she had a lot of catching up to do with her father. After all Shirou Emiya is this generation Hero and as his daughter she has to live up to his legacy.

"Alright," clutching her glove covered hand tightly. She raised her hand and rang the bell.

What she got in reply was a loud crash followed by a series of screams and yells. Ivone gulped as she imagined the horrors behind those doors. Was there a Phantasmal Beast behind there? Were they under attack? Was it a test? Is she failing?

Millions of thoughts rushed Ivone's mind as her eyes degenerated into swirls. So when the door finally opened, her first reaction was to shout out.

"I will save you Father!!," eyes shut tight and fist raise and ready. She punched as hard as she can her target letting out a resounding "OOOF!"

Now Ivone's body is unnaturally strong therefore even her unreinforced punches feel like steel boxing gloves. As much as Shirou can attest when he took the blow to the gut. Ivone's eyes widened when she saw who she had struck. She immediately set into panic as she tried to catch her father that was knocked down by her fist and apologize. Her rush she tripped on the door frame accidentally pulling Shirou towards her.

Their heads collided in a resounding crack and left both father and daughter passed out on the floor.

"Well, for one thing. She is definitely your daughter Shirou," sighed Rin as the rest of the family stared in shock, awe and amusement. The pairs only reply was soft gurgles as parent and child had identical expressions along with big steaming bumps on their foreheads

Karin and Fuuko suddenly started giggling pointing to Ivone's cute Irish look, even passed out.

Chiyo and Saber shook their heads as they carried the both of them to the infirmary.

Reiko sighed as Eiko patted her on the back while giggling softly. She looked at her still older counter, both of them looking like identical twins with differing hairstyles. Reiko shrugged before throwing the chest padding and helmet behind her without a care. It was not her fault for Shirou not listening to her while in the hurry to meet with 10 year estranged daughter.

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Comments?

*snicker, snort* BWAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH!!! Oh my sides!! That was good! Ivone's quite the klutz, huh?

Frackin' hilarious, shadow! Ivone-chan is TOTALLY as headstrong as both Shirou AND Bazette!

... I see two affirmations of my portrayal of Gekkou, but no thoughts on the other questions I asked. What's that? Come on, guys, give me a clue here! T_T

For Tsukiumi characterization I think you managed to hit the nail on the head with it, making her a bit nicer as compared to her "current" persona. Tsukiumi struck me more as someone with a holier than though attitude like Gil, which is why I am a firm believer that these two should NEVER be together.

Reiko, Eiko or Keiko? But yeah I think you should keep Fate or better yet Yuuno be the only one who recognizes something wrong. Oh and have Fate wear a cute red sweater and thick frame glasses that look like a mask XD

I'm thinking Reiko (the younger), because she's the from the current timeline rather than the GrimDark alt future...

Oh, Fate is going to have such cosplay worries, with Uzume around... so is Signum, for that matter, with Hayate.

Scene: Fate and Signum on cosplay woes!

Fate: *looking at Signum's re-styled hair and revealing costume as Lamina Loveless* ...

Signum: *looking at the painted wood "armor" and much more elaborate and technical looking scythe of Fate's anthropomorphic personification of the Gundam Deathscythe* ...

In the background, Hayate and Uzume are alternating between cackling with shared glee, and glaring at each other's attempts to out-do the other's work...

@shadowzerover5

I can already tell life is going to be much more interesting with the clan's 'Irish Klutz' finally home. Good job.

@Trooper1023

Hm....I see. The only problem with Reiko playing a prank on someone is that she doesn't really play pranks on people. She can have a mean streak when slighted, true and can be hardheaded and stubborn but Reiko is sweet well meaning little girl. She doesn't try cause trouble but despite her well meaning intentions she starts trouble.

Can't say the same for Eiko though.

Shampoo stared at the girl in front of her, then returned her gaze to the small slip of paper she held in her hand. "New-Girl more brave than Shampoo think."

She cracked the knuckles in her other hand and grinned at her ferally. "We fight now?"

"This weekend, at the Furinkan School's athletics field," Koyuki clarified.

"Why not now?"

"Because a challenge like this requires there be impartial observers present," Koyuki said as she glanced around the restaurant. Cologne and Mousse met her stares unflinchingly, although Mousse was glaring back at the potted plant to her right. She turned back to Shampoo, "I also understand it is also considered by the local martial artists to be the place for an honor duel."

"Too true," Shampoo grumbled. She brandished the Letter of Challenge and grinned, "Saturday, then."

The Emiya nodded and turned back towards the front entrance.

"One thing, Girl," the Matriarch grumbled from behind the counter. "I will void any outcome in your favor if it turns out the field has been booby-trapped ahead of time."

Koyuki paused as she reached the door. "A logical assumption," she admitted. "I would be dishonest if I did not admit I had to keep several of my siblings from offering to do so. However, rest assured I will accept a victory won in that manner just about as well as you would."

Shampoo sniffed noncommittally.

ooo

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Emiya Clan – Nerima 18

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"I still think this is a bad idea, 'Yuki," Karin said as she watched her sister moving through a kata. Koyuki's movements were precise and her stances were as flawless as ever, but her transitions were still far from fluid. The redhead sighed, "You still can't do forms correctly." She looked around for someone to support her argument, but since training for the day had already passed, most of the other children had returned to the house, while Ranma and Akane had already headed back for their own home.

Koyuki didn't deviate from the sequence, "Would you like to spar, Sister?"

Karin blanched. "That's fine, I'll pass for now," she said quickly. While she had raised her general level of fitness, she had coasted through most of the training and was easily the worst student in the family. She was still quicker than Akane had been when she had first arrived, but pretty much everybody – even Reiko – could pin her in under a minute. She watched Koyuki for a few more minutes, then perked up as she felt a familiar magical signature approaching.

Keiko walked up with a bundle of cloth held in her arms, "Good, you're still out here." She quickly sidestepped to avoid a tackle-glomp from Karin and presented it to Koyuki. "Here, try these on."

"Keiko's a meanie..." mumbled the hacker.

Koyuki took the first pair of items off the stack and looked at them in confusion. "Gloves?"

Keiko nodded as the snow girl inspected the rest of the equipment she'd brought over. "Gloves, elbow pads, vest, and stockings." She unfolded the vest and channeled a bit of prana through the garment to reveal glowing runes inscribed into the fabric along the shoulders, front, and back sections. "I had Mom help me with making it useable with just a generic prana flow. You get better results if you know what the runes actually mean, but this should be good enough."

"Good enough for what?"

Keiko hefted the vest, "These ones are just basic reinforcement. Run some magic through them and you've got stopping power that's the equivalent of kevlar armor. The elbow pads have runes which should enhance your speed and slightly reinforce the joints so you don't wear them out. The gloves and stockings have the same, but also mixed in with the reinforcement runes so they also act as armor, or a knuckle-duster."

Koyuki unfolded the stockings to press them against her legs and check the size. "Do they really have to go up this high?"

"Yes," the daughter of Rin stated forcefully. "And you should wear a skirt while using them, too."

Koyuki shot an annoyed look at Keiko, who merely grinned.

ooo

A quick change of clothing later, Koyuki was back outside. A variation on her normal outdoor wear, she still had her light colored t-shirt and shorts, but had replaced her usual tank-top for Keiko's vest. Her shorts, Keiko noted happily, were not so long as to cover the stockings, giving her a reasonable zettai ryouiki. The new garments, all in various dark-colored shades, contrasted against her clothing and pale skin.

Sakuya, who had rejoined her siblings while Koyuki had been changing, gave her sister a thumbs up, "Looks good."

Koyuki tugged on the vest, looking down at the garment. "Did you have Uzume-kaasan make these?"

"Yup," Keiko nodded. "She still has your measurements from earlier. C'mon, power up! I wanna see how you do!"

Koyuki gave her a sidelong glance as she settled into an opening stance, "You seem more excited than is normal..."

Keiko rubbed her head sheepishly. "To be honest, I'm using you as a test subject. I plan to make my own 'battle costume' of sorts eventually, I just wanted to see how it'd work ahead of time."

"I see." Not wasting anymore time, Koyuki closed her eyes to concentrate. Keiko and Karin both felt it as she flared out her aura in a quick burst, then let it fade as she figured out what level of magic was required to empower the runes on her 'battle costume'. After a few minutes, her energy levels stopped fluctuating and she opened up her eyes again. "I think I have it," she noted. She held her stance for another moment, then snapped out an arm in a straight punch, faster than they'd ever seen her move before.

The motion also threw her body after her arm, and she sailed through the air before landing ** her face and stomach. Her sisters shot to their feet as soon as her own had left the ground and were beside her in a flash.

"Whoa! What happened?" Keiko asked.

"I think it worked," Karin said as she crouched down.

"A little too well, maybe," Sakuya snarked. "Koyuki, are you alright?"

There was a muffled noise from the girl, then she picked up her head dizzily. "I think a face mask might not be a bad idea..." She pressed her arms down to lever herself back up into a sitting position, but only succeeded in throwing herself back into the air.

Keiko caught her before she could get too far and helped her get back to her feet. "Yeaah, I didn't think to put a 'power selection' option. It should only multiply the force it is given, though. Like if you use a weak force, it's a weaker boosted effect."

"I thought you said it would only enhance my speed," Koyuki complained.

"C'mon, 'Yuki," Karin chided her. "Mass times acceleration. Physics 101. You're accelerating waaay too fast now."

Koyuki was silent for a few moments, then nodded. "I see, let me try again." The other three nodded and stepped away, but took care to take positions equidistant from her in case she sent herself tumbling again. Koyuki slowly, precisely reset her stance, then frowned as she adjusted her footing slightly. She carefully threw another punch, which flashed through the air and stopped at full extension just as suddenly, but she maintained her balance this time. Without any further comments, she moved through her kata, her movements as precise as ever. This time, her sisters almost couldn't see her movements as she shifted from stance to stance, slowly circling around an imaginary point. She finished the sequence and stood still for a moment, then lifted her head.

Karin arched an eyebrow. "You know, I think this is the first time you thinking everything through has actually worked out for you. If any of us had tried that normally, we probably would have thrown ourselves off balance in the first stance."

"It makes me wonder what Ranma-sensei would think about it," Sakuya said thoughtfully. "You're still hesitating in your motions, but you're moving so fast now I wonder if it even matters."

"I have an idea," Keiko said as she rubbed her chin.

ooo

"Oh, I haven't tried this in a while," Sakuya commented.

A few minutes later the four of them were standing at the entrance to Blockhead's Alley, the nickname that had been slapped onto Ranma's swinging-block obstacle... thingy.

Keiko put her hands on her hips as she watched the swinging boards. "I think my best was about three-quarters of the way, but that's because I ended up hurting my arms from blocking too much." She looked over at Karin, "How far have you gotten?"

"It's too hard, I finish too quickly," Karin said sheepishly.

"That's what she said."

"Shut it, Yin."

"You were asking for it..."

Keiko slapped Sakuya upside the head, then turned back to Koyuki. The other girl was staring at the swinging blocks with her usual intent expression, so Keiko blocked her view with a hand. "Nuh-uh, you're not allowed to try to memorize the pattern. You've got to go through it just based on your reflexes like the rest of us." She tilted her head questioningly. "Do you still have the enhancements up?"

Koyuki nodded, "I have not yet turned them off."

"Really?" Keiko raised an eyebrow, "So the mana drain isn't too bad?"

"It is noticeable, but I am trying to get accustomed to it so I have decided to leave it on for now," Koyuki explained. She turned back towards the entrance,

"When do you want me to start?"

"Right now," Keiko said as she gave her a shove.

The three sisters winced as the fourth stumbled into the danger zone with wide eyes. Thrown off balance, she nevertheless managed to twist her body out of the way of the first series of blocks, then there was a flurry of movement and the next set bounced away from her safely. As she stepped into the next set, however, she overcompensated after another dodge and threw herself into a random direction. She slammed bodily into the next block and rebounded to the floor, rolling off to the side and out of the way in a practiced maneuver.

"I think that was the farthest you've ever been," Karin said with a grin. "And you did it in record time."

Koyuki stared daggers at Keiko, but marched back to the beginning without comment. Taking a proper stance this time, she waded back in.

ooo

Later that night, Koyuki dragged herself back to her bedroom. A warm bath had helped with most of the aches and pains caused by the sudden strain on her body, though she was certain a good night's sleep would rid her of the rest. She idly scrubbed at her hair as she closed the door, then froze as she turned around and noticed the other occupant in the room. "Mother?"

Sitting on Karin's bed, Akitsu patted the space beside her in invitation. "Koyuki."

The snow girl tossed her towel in the general direction of the laundry hamper, then silently made her way to her mother. Sitting down, she leaned into Akitsu's side, who responded by wrapping an arm around her shoulders. The two sat like that in silence for several minutes, simply taking comfort from their close proximity. Finally, Akitsu reached over with her other arm to engulf Koyuki in a brief hug, then stood up and walked for the doorway. Koyuki watched her leave then resumed her preparations for the night, neither of them having said a single word since their initial greeting.

They didn't have to.

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http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5624/koyuki.jpg

somewhat uninspiring 'costume', but it's uh... a prototype?

brownie-points to anyone who can guess the martial arts discipline i yoinked that stance from

inb4 post flurry

It's Ba Qua Zhan!

@Trooper1023

1) tsukiumi doesn't have very many lines there, so it's hard to get a definite read. it seems fine so far though

2) i would have somebody other than nanoha or fate (anybody really) catch the joke. i do agree that reiko is not actively prankster, though it is very easy for her to do something innocently, or at eiko's prompting.

3) gekkou using too big of words. once or twice, but after that he'd probably be digging into a dictionary, because getting a word wrong is a bit more embarrassing than using too childish a word

as gekkou's creator, i can say i didn't really have a personality planned out, so whatever is fine. he is bratty, and precocious, but that's a result of him being spoiled big time as a toddler. i have nothing for his older incarnations. the only thing i had in my head was "like tsukiumi, but not nearly as tsundere".

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@shadowzerover5

irish klutz.... oh dear 2 minutes in the door and the poor girl has a nickname...

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@trooper

wow that was fast O_o;

@ throwaawy on martial arts and Koyuki

*snerk* As if I'd fail to recognize the martial art that is not only featured prominently in Mahou Sensei Negima AND Battle Angel Alita: Last Order, but is also practiced in real life by my very self! :P

@ throwaawy on my DW8 preview

1) thanks

2a) well, the only potentially-clueless options are Shinta, Nanoha, Yuuno, Fate, and Arf. Everyone in the family, if they don't get it, will be happily told by another sibling who does get it, while trying to keep from actually giving it away to the named five.

problem is, i really, really want Nanoha to be totally clueless, while Shinta DOES eventually get it, and is teased mercillessly about it. That leaves Yuuno, Fate, and Arf. Somebody else said they'd rather see Fate get it... Why not Fate? And who do you recommend instead?

2b) Guess I should change it to Eiko who makes the anime night selection suggestion, then.

3) "Gekkou using too big of words"? what? do you mean my characterization of him uses too many big words and shouldn't? or did i get that backward?

Anyway, I had this thought that Gekkou feels like he should shape up to be as much a jerkass-with-a-heart-of-gold as his mother is a type-A Tsundere. Why? 'cause at his age, trying to model his behavior after his mother will likely result him being a standoff-ish at the wrong moments than at the right ones, due to lack of experience and grasp of context/subtext. When he forgets to immitate Tsuki-kaa-chan, or is too upset or agitated to do so, he's going to act like the honorable and decent kid his parents raised him as.

*shrugs* or something. lol

@koyuki

also airbending in avatar.

i dont practice anything myself and all i know is from wikiwalking; so given that i wanted her to be someone who focused more on agility and dodging, is that a good choice for her?

@gekkou and big words

that he tries to use them and messes it up. 'deliberate' and 'plespian'

and yes i know i started that too with 'graciously'...

@ Koyuki's MA style

It's an excellent choice for her, since the core of the style is circular motion, the 8 Steps (also a circle), and the redirection of oncoming force.

@shadowzerover5: thanks

Here is the next round with souhiro, still not much but I try. Also if I get something with the other kids wrong please tell me

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The visiting agreement concerning Souhiro set a rough 5-1 week cycle, spending six weeks at the Aozaki-clan's land and then two at the Emiya-Mansion. In case of irregularities, say things like Christmas or Birthdays the schedule can be altered. Today the five weeks were up, Mother and Son returned to the nest. After a couple of years this has become routine for most if the family, making it a simple but gentle welcome. The others…

"You're here! You're here! How was the trip? Are you hungry? You grew again!"

"We're fine Musubi-kaa-san. It was a nice trip. No, I am not hungry. Really?"

…welcomed them enthusiastic.

"Musubi-chan, please don't crack his rips again." Touko enjoys the warm welcome, but reminds the Bear-Sekirei of past mistakes, just in case.

"Don't worry, I reinforced my ribs." Sporting his usual sleepy smile returns the hug.

The cozy welcome enters the next Level with a "Sou-chan!" coming from three girls, trying so hard to look innocent that it screams 'Suspicious!', the looks they give Souhiro's hair, now even longer that last time, has 'Predator' written all over. Touko suppresses a laugh, they are way too cute 'stalking' their 'prey' like this. That Souhiro doesn't show any sign of noting the suspicious behavior makes it even better.

"Riko-chan, Fuuko-chan, Keiko-chan, good too see you again."

Standing a bit away from the others Gilgamesh sees his primary plan fail, now it's too late to warn Souhiro without alarming the girls. Not that he is afraid of them, he is THE King of Heroes after all, and there is nothing that could scare him. He just doesn't want to hurt their feelings, honest! His stealthy approach has nothing to do with Riko being called 'Gil's Bane' for a good reason or Keiko's secret collection of oversized guns or Fuuko's knowledge of Hurt-Fu and Kick-**-Do. All he needs is a plan B, how difficult can it be to come up with one?

286. Despite how it's pronounced and how more appropriate it would be, it's Raising Heart, not Raging Heart.

286a. It's not Razing Heart either.

286b. Nor is it Raising Hurt.

287. Raising Heart is not controlling Nanoha nor is it corrupting her mind.

288. Plan B is not automatically twice as much firepower as Plan A, Keiko.

289. If it's normally found attached to a vehicle, Keiko can't have it.

290. If there's a word in its name between "gatling" and "gun," Keiko can't have it.

291. Despite how Nanoha makes it seem, blowing it up will not solve all problems.

291a. Despite how Negi makes it seem, kissing someone will not solve all problems.

292. Shirou, Shiki, and Negi can't all be within 10 meters of each other.

293. Can't put a bounty on Kyubei. There's not enough money to pay everyone who kills him. Most people would kill him for free anyway.

294. As there is nothing aesthetically wrong with them, can't call the chairs at the Tohno mansion eyesores.

294a. Hisui is not an eyesore either.

295. Any item or ability that causes size enhancement can't be used on Shirou, Miya, or Takeshi. Hannyas and Ashuras are bad enough at normal size.

296. Can't ask Ryouga to show a guest to the exit, bathroom, etc.

297. There is no such thing as Mystic Eyes of Meth Perception.

297a. There is no such thing as Mystic Eyes of Depth Perception.

298. And combining Noritos, Pactio Artifacts, and other enhancements is punishable on ten times the destruction value out of the monthly allowance.

299. Keiko is forbidden to touch her Pactio Artifact again. And to Pactio again to have it back. Just NO!

300. On a second thought Kamo is forbidden to make Pactio cards for Anyone at the Emiya mansion, unless stated otherwise by Shirou himself.

301. Keiko can't have access to mass destruction devices.

301-A. Neither can Karin.

301-B. Nor any of the kids.

301-C. Exceptions made for Raising Heart, Bardiche, Chachamaru's Card.

301-D. Mass destruction without weapons is also punishable under the rule 298.

@ Nanaya's 286

Aw sh--t... Sorry friend, but in Devil Wings, it really is named "Raging Heart". Considering what I have planned, the fan-name is much more appropriate. XD

@Trooper1023

There's enough of the Spell My Name With an S trope being used already that it shouldn't really matter which name is used. It's not like these rules are 100% canon anyway.

Random thing I'd just like to note, why is that even at this point there's no one from ZnT that's in the harem? I mean, while this is In flight based, I think it's safe to assume that normally wouldn't stop anyone here from adding people anyway.

Don't know, but i probably the only one who thinks the clan is big enough at the moment.

Because the HoS Cast already have their own harems thanks to the incident with the Mystic Washer Mk ** that materialized both that Shiro and his Arturia a few months after his funeral in HoS.

tough if you want to add other ZnT alterverse you can do it.

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