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since: 03-17-06, id: 1009770, Profile Updated: 05-09-12
country: UK
Author has written 12 stories for Yu-Gi-Oh, Harry Potter, Misc. Books, and Beyblade.

My Fanfictions

Multi-chaptered fics won't be fully uploaded.

PM me if you want to read them.

Some people have already contacted me to ask for the link.

Writers feel free to copy and paste the following to your profile if you think Flamers are pathetic.

Note to all Flamers:

Your review should be about the CONTENT of the story, not the WRITER. You think you're so great, clicking on "review" and then insulting the writer, but honestly, all that shows is that you are a sad, pathetic, little nobody, with no life. You probably don't even have any real friends, and you certainly have no moral compass. Chances are, you have no talent of your own, and you're jealous of other people, so you have to try knock them down, just to feel better about yourself.

Well that makes you a bully, and that just proves that YOU are the one with the problem.

And BTW, clicking on "Review" means that the story will have a higher number in the Reviews count, which will only help to promote the story to other FFN users. How dumb ARE you? How many people, on average, do you think really give a crap about the content of reviews?

They look at the story name, summary and NUMBER of Reviews. NOT what pathetic little insults you have thrown out. Which means you're wasting your time.

So just GROW UP. If you don't like something, the MATURE thing to do is click "back", and go elsewhere.

Better yet, go find out what your own problem is, and deal with that. I suggest counselling because you CLEARLY have no idea how to help yourself if you have to resort to taking it out on other people.

Things on FFN that annoy me:

FFN removes some punctuation marks.

FFN takes out the double spacing before a new sentence.

FFN messes up the formatting.

FFN makes editing complicated.

FFN doesn't let you add pictures to your stories.

FFN doesn't let you put in links.

FFN doesn't have a prologue chapter option, turning them into chapter 1 when they're not, and leading to chapter one being called chapter two.

FFN doesn't let you add colour (I like colours).

FFN has too many pathetic little dickweeds who have to flame people to make themselves feel bigger.

Pet Peeves

People using the word "then" when they mean "than". It's "more than" not "more then".

People writing things like "we should of" instead of "we should have".

People writing things like "a apple" instead on "an apple". You put "an" not "a" when the following word starts with a vowel.

People writing things like "they is" instead of "they are".

People calling Kaiba "Kiba". That. Is. NOT. His. Name. Those are 2 completely different names. It may be only one letter, but NO. They are NOT similar. "Kiba" means "fang". "Kaiba" means "baby dragon". COMPLETELY DIFFERENT.

People calling Rei (from beyblade) Rai. Rai is LEE in the American dub. They are two completely different people. Why can't people understand that?!

People who have two different characters speaking in the same paragraph.

Paragraphs that are all chunked together instead of being spaced out. They're hard to read. And if they're hard to read, I'm not going to bother.

Really bad punctuation, spelling and grammar. I will not read things that haven't been proof read to remove such flaws. Doesn't matter how good your plot is. If you can't proof read (please note there is no shortage of Beta Readers here) then I'm not touching it.

Post-Pandemic

This is a co-written story. Authors are: chidori-blossom237, D17-pharaohfox, Sparkle-Willow, Velgamidragon, and myself. Please make sure that any reviews to this fic are for all writers, because I WILL be uploading them on the Group's Review Database. Also, it's not fair of you to them no credit for their part.

Thank you.

NO UPDATES BECAUSE I LOST THE WORK WHEN MY LAPTOP DIED AND IT'S TOO MUCH WORK TO RECOVER.

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1. Madhouse » reviews
The White Tiger X team and the Blitzkrieg Boys have been invited to Tyson's for a while and all hell breaks loose. TWO-SHOT
Beyblade - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,330 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-25-12 - Published: 2-21-12 - Ray/Rei K. & Kai H. - Complete
2. Hair reviews
No pairings, just some random stuff that crossed my mind and amused me, so I decided to share. Tyson's got a few comments to make about Tala and Ray's hair, only, they're really not in the mood for his antics. ONESHOT
Beyblade - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 659 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-26-12 - Tala & Tyson G./Takao K. - Complete
3. The MP3 Player reviews
A short oneshot that I thought would be funny. No pairings, and rated for swearing. I don't wanna get into any trouble for it.
Beyblade - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 475 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-14-11 - Kai H. & Ray/Rei K. - Complete
4. Hollow » reviews
The building had been uninhabited for over ten years, and held a tragic history. People went in, but they didn't always come out. And those who do come out aren't the same anymore. Knowing this, Atemu must still enter, to search for his missing brother.
Yu-Gi-Oh - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,900 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 10-31-11 - Published: 9-17-11 - Yami Yūgi
5. PostPandemic » reviews
With the Ceremonial Battle interrupted, the Tablet destroyed and Items lost, Atemu is trapped on Earth. As if that wasn't bad enough, a flu pandemic sweeps across the lands, killing billions. The survivors face new threats of different kinds.
Yu-Gi-Oh - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 5 - Words: 18,607 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 10-25-11 - Published: 10-30-10 - Yami Yūgi
6. Prince of Egypt King of Games reviews
As the prince of Egypt, Atemu has many enemies, outside and inside the palace. Can he and his friends stop the enemies from overthrowing his father and taking the throne?
Yu-Gi-Oh - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,989 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-10-11 - Atem - Complete
7. The Prince & The Thief reviews
YGO retelling of The Fox and the Hound featuring Atemu and Bakura.
Crossover - Misc. Books & Yu-Gi-Oh - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,185 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-3-11 - Complete
8. Harry Potter & the Egyptian Phoenix reviews
Yami, Yugi, Kaiba, Jonouchi, Honda, Bakura, Marik and Anzu go to Hogwart's School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Named by "Name Suggester" having originally been called "All The Good Titles Were Taken"
Crossover - Harry Potter & Yu-Gi-Oh - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,513 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-3-11 - Yami Yūgi - Complete
9. My Roommate Is Insane! reviews
Yami goes to college, but quickly regrets it when he meets his roommate.
Yu-Gi-Oh - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,346 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-3-11 - Yami Yūgi
10. Kuráyami reviews
Yami is badly injured protecting Yugi. Kuráyami means darkness as in darkness in a room.
Yu-Gi-Oh - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,063 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-3-11 - Yami Yūgi - Complete
11. Coffee Shop Meeting reviews
Ghost Story. Seto Kaiba gets a shock in a coffee shop. No pairings. Oneshot
Yu-Gi-Oh - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 798 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-3-11 - Seto K. & Atem - Complete
12. Bad, Bad Black Sheep reviews
Yami and Yugi are twins separated at birth. Foul-mouthed, arrogant and with an attitude problem, Yami's back and Yugi's life will never be the same again. No Yaoi or Shonen-ai.
Yu-Gi-Oh - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,774 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-3-11 - Yūgi M. & Yami Yūgi - Complete
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