暗殺された天使
ANNOUNCEMENTS : I AM KINDA ALIVE AGAIN.
I'm LOOKING FOR some criticism please.
ALL I WANT IS GASPARD ULLIEL. :D Go get him for me? Pretty please?
If you don't know the difference between a flame and constructive criticism, you might want to reconsider posting on this site. If you can't accept criticism, you should probably just show your story to your mother and nobody else. Nobody is perfect, and you're bound to make mistakes as you write. You should expect criticism and be grateful for it. It helps you grow and improve as a writer. I realize that this is just a fanfiction site, but grammar is still important. So the next time you have someone correcting you, you might want to thank them instead of requesting that they stop.
(I AM aware that Assassined is NOT a word, but assassinated just doesn't sound as cool)
Random Quote(s)
"Hearts are built to be strong but then why is it so easy for you to break mine? As if it was as fragile and delicate as a shard of broken glass."
YOU may call me Michelle or Asan-chan
I am 16 years old
I am a Junior
I was BORN on July 9 1992 I am the year of the Monkey
Which is the best day in the world! Isuzuforever agrees with me! Me and Isuzuforever are the coolest bestest losers ever! Don't steal our title! Or I'll bite!
(note: Me and Isuzuforever have the same birthday)
I am Chinese and Vietnamese, but I live in the US
I LOVE YUKIRU & Edward x Bella
I enjoy DRAWING and WRITING (Fanfics) READING (manga + Twilight/New Moon/Eclipse) watching anime, and GRAMMAR
I DON'T LIKE Bugs, Artificial cherry, Sea creatures, and Jacob Black x Bella Swan
My favorite couples:
Yuki x Tohru (Yukiru) (My favoritest pairing ever)
Kisa x Hiro
Rin x Haru
~Fruits Basket~
Ito x Makoto
~W Juliet~
Sano x Mizuki
~Hana Kimi~
Toya x Aya
~Ceres: Celestial Legend / Ayashi No Ceres~
Zero x Yuuki
~Vampire Knight~
Edward x Bella and all the other pairings in the Twilight series besides the Jacob x Bella parts.
~My favorite books are The Princess Bride, The Sisiterhood of the traveling pants, and My Sister's Keeper + Twilight/New Moon/Eclipse + The Pact + The Host
My favorite songs are Whatever it Takes by Lifehouse, Vindicated by Dashboard Confessional+ The Scientist by Coldplay
Anime/Manga I like:
Fruits Basket
Hana-Kimi
Kare Kano
DN Angel
Tsubasa
Galaxy Angel
W Juliet
From Far Away
Princess Ai
CardCaptor Sakura
Full Metal Panic / Full Metal Panic the second raid / Full Metal Panic Fumoffu
Chobits
Wish
Crescent Moon
Othello
The Wallflower
Mars
Hot Gimmick
Dramacon
Prince of Tennis
Yu Yu Hakusho
School Rumble
Ashiteruzu Baby
Backstage Prince
Ouran High School Host Club
Beauty is the Beast
Crimson Hero
Ceres: Celestial Legend / Ayashi No Ceres
XxX Holic
Vampire Knight
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"Before you decide to criticize someone walk a mile in their shoes, then when you criticize them you are a mile away and you have their shoes" -Sisterhood of the traveling pants
"To the world, you may be one person, but to one person, you may be the world."
"If I wore a tie that wouldn't change who I am. If I had no piercings that wouldn't mean I'm nice. If I had black hair that wouldn't stop me from kicking your butt!" -Haru (Fruits Basket)
"I will simply deny you the crown and... live forever." King Francis ("Ever After")
I would list my favorite Twilight/New Moon/Eclipse quotes... But there are too many.
STORIES PLANNED TO BE WRITTEN: SUMMARIES
-Girl in the white dress-
Kiro Companion to Forget Me Not. Kisa is being forced into an arranged marriage. She decides to run away from the palace disguised as a commoner. What happens when she runs into an old friend and falls in love?
-A new Life-
HaRi Rin was rejected and kicked out of the palace when she was a baby. Now she returns, new conflicts appear. She falls in love with a prince. Will she be rejected again or will love last?(trilogy!)
-Experiment Sohma-
Akito was using the Sohma family for an experiment. Now when they escape they find themselves lost and confused. Who will help them and who will betray them? Yukiru
-Needing You-
Tohru moved out of the Sohma's a couple of years ago . Now Tohru and Yuki meet again in college bringing back old memories and feelings but Tohru is engaged already. Yukiru
-Protect me-
When Hiro trys to confess to Kisa he gets embarrassed and begins to distance himself from her again. As they drift apart a new guy gains an interest in Kisa. Will Hiro gain his courage or will he lose Kisa forever?
-Zodiac Curse-
It's been 4 years since Tohru moved out now she's a popular model and Yuki, Kyo, Haru and Momiji are in a famous band, Zodiac Curse. What will happen when they run into each other again?
-Whispers Of Royality-
AU Ito is a tom boyish princess, Makoto is a prince that doesn't want to rule the kingdom. So he makes a bet with his dad that he can pull off being a maid in Ito's palace for 2yrs. If he makes it then he can become an actor! (WJ in medevil times)
-Confessions of Love
Yuki and Kyo both love Tohru but when she can't choose between them the two boys move on... Will they regret moving on with their other love interests when another Sohma decides to confess his Love to Tohru? Yukiru, Kyoru, Kyogura, Yukchi and Momiji x Tohru
-Our Secret Relationship
They've confessed their love for each other. But how will the other Sohmas react? Can the Yuki fan club handle this? Their prince finally chose his princess and it's not one of them.
ZOMG! There are more! I just don't wanna list them D=
MINI-GRAMMAR LESSON (I wrote this myself, seeing as I'm a grammar freak)
Where to place commas: You only place a comma before a conjunction (For, and, nor, but, or, yet, so...) when the clause before and after the conjunction are complete sentences (Translation: If the part before the conjunction or the part after can't stand alone, don't put a comma there. Both parts have to be able to stand alone as separate sentences for a comma to be needed. Also, in a list of 3 or more items you need commas separating them.)
Extra note: Computers cannot edit your grammar for you. Microsoft Word doesn't know a thing about grammar. Don't trust it. You have to edit yourself =D
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