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since: 06-12-06, id: 1065847, Profile Updated: 06-28-09
country: United States
Author has written 17 stories for CSI, Misc. Tv Shows, Stargate: Atlantis, Eureka, Chuck, and Criminal Minds.

Name: Loren Elizabeth

Location: Florida

Fave Shows: Right now? Criminal Minds. I go through obsessions, you know. I think my first one was ER, then CSI, then SGA, now The Mentalist and Chuck. Of course, I have miniature obsessions like Heroes, Numb3rs, Jericho, and Scrubs, and finally, there's just the really good (and usually funny ones) I just enjoy watching. Ehem. NCIS, Everybody Loves Raymond, How I Met Your Mother, and the Big Bang Theory. There's probably loads more, but that's all I can think of.

Fave Characters: To name a few: Dr. Spencer Reid (Criminal Minds), Patrick Jane (Mentalist), Chuck (Chuck), Sheppard (SGA), Greg (CSI), Carter (ER), Tony (NCIS), Jake (Jericho)...

Little about me: Well, I'm currently 17 years old and again, I live in Florida. And yes, I do have a life. But, because I go to a college prep school, most of it is spent at home, doing homework. Seriously though, everyone knows that if you go to this school and are in the IB program, you give up your social life... And let me tell you, they weren't lying! So, I've become one hell of a multitasker, and the tv and the internet (always in short increments between school subjects and turning pages) have giving me some sense of fun amongst the mountins of homework...

Hmm... that's most of my life right there, right now. To get to the interest stuff, I'd have to go BH (before highschool). Middle school was actually a lot of fun because I went to an arts magnet school where I studied theatre. I adore theatre and acting. In fact, if I had a life, that's what I would be doing with it! But when I can, I do get involved with our school's drama program and community theater. It's really a lot of fun.

I have no idea what I'm going to do when I get older, just kind of going with the flow right now. I really only came to this school because the number of scholarships given out is unreasonably high, and I REALLY want a scholarship... so haha it seemed like a good match. And I got in, so I went..

Other than that, I love my family, my friends, I love my dog, Jodie (Toy Poodle), music (love music and God.) That's really about it; me in a nut shell.

My Writing: Well, seeing as how I wrote my first stories at the age of like, 13 or 14(?), some are pretty bad. Heck, all of them might be really bad, but I know they are improving as I go. I'm learning the ropes from experience and from tons of talented writers I've come to know right here on ff.net and other places on the internet. Most of them lately from the SGA fandom (which is the best I've ever been a part of). So, I love all of them.

I'm a whumper, plain and simple. All of my stories have some quantity of whump. It's funny, when I first started writing, all my stories would focus on whump. Whump for whump's sake, really. But, as I've grown and matured, I've turned more so towards character insights and development.. Not all of my latest ones, of course, but in many cases I think. I think I've come to appreciate these characters a little more. This is mostly centered around John Sheppard of SGA, but it did start with my very few Jericho fics. I like it better this way, though. So, it works. :)

Favorites: I'll forget so many, but off the top of my head: Stealth Dragon, Titan5, Kristen999 (Okay, I definitely need to add the others, but these three are the only ones I remember right now...)

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1. White Lies » reviews
When Reid is taken hostage in a bank by a group the team has been profiling, he must work to keep the hostages safe by making sacrifices of his own and creating a bond with his captor. Team and Reid fic. No pairing, no other warnings. Just some whump
Criminal Minds - Rated: K - English - General/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 11 - Words: 25,632 - Reviews: 151 - Updated: 8-4-09 - Published: 6-28-09 - S. Reid & A. Hotchner/Hotch - Complete
2. Enjoy the Silence reviews
*Spoilers for Amplification* - A tag or something like that . Basically, it's the team love I missed for a fallen colleague and friend. Focuses more on the team's concern for Reid and maybe later a bit more inside into his recovery. One shot...?
Criminal Minds - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,095 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 5-29-09
3. Chuck vs The Hospital » reviews
After a mission goes terribly wrong, Sarah is faced with her biggest fear ever since she became Chuck's handler. No pairing, Chuck whump.
Chuck - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,102 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 12-21-08 - Published: 11-30-08 - Sarah W. & Chuck B.
4. In Between » reviews
Sheppard's having a bit of an out-of-body experience. Now if he could only find his way out of it. COMPLETE
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Friendship - Chapters: 10 - Words: 28,665 - Reviews: 99 - Updated: 9-26-08 - Published: 8-4-08 - John S. & Rodney M. - Complete
5. Weakness reviews
Tag to "Games People Play." Picks up where the episode leaves off. Basically, it's about how much Zoe and her father went through and all the things that needed to be said.
Eureka - Rated: K - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,581 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-1-08 - Complete
6. In the Arms of Angels » reviews
Tag to Miller's Crossing, then some. - When Sheppard travels down to earth for a few days and finds Jeannie waiting for him, they end up in a sticky situation. No pairings, Spoilers for Miller's Crossing. More details inside. COMPLETE
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 6 - Words: 24,286 - Reviews: 126 - Updated: 3-27-08 - Published: 2-1-08 - John S. - Complete
7. Liar, Liar » reviews
COMPLETE Rodney returns to Atlantis after a long trip only to find more trouble back home. Guess who? Set before Sunday because this is fanfic and I can do that. Shep Whump in an interesting way...
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 8 - Words: 25,484 - Reviews: 93 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 11-9-07 - John S. & Rodney M. - Complete
8. Every Beautiful Day » reviews
Yet another tag to Doppelganger. Just because I would love some extra Shepwhump in addition to the lovely episode we got. Obvious spoilers for Doppelganger. Rating for mild swearing. COMPLETE
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,495 - Reviews: 42 - Updated: 11-24-07 - Published: 10-25-07 - Complete
9. Coming Around » reviews
Tag to Common Ground. Sheppard is back and alive, though not completely well. And the worst part is, he's having to get through it mostly by himself. New SGA writer and starting off with something safe.
Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 14,667 - Reviews: 53 - Updated: 9-26-07 - Published: 9-7-07 - John S. - Complete
10. Our Darkest Hour » reviews
It's coming. The team becomes involved in a new case that seems to be building up to something horrific. But can they figure out what it is before it's too late?
CSI - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 7 - Words: 18,502 - Reviews: 54 - Updated: 8-9-07 - Published: 6-21-07 - Nick S. & Greg S.
11. Snowbound » reviews
How friendship and sacrafice keeps Sara and Greg alive in the snow.
CSI - Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 11 - Words: 44,579 - Reviews: 103 - Updated: 6-16-07 - Published: 1-15-07 - Greg S. & Sara S.
12. A Reason to Live reviews
[Jericho] Jake has a lot on his mind after his talk with Robert Hawkins is having problems dealing with it all.
Misc. Tv Shows - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,229 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-16-07 - Complete
13. As Changing as the Sun reviews
[Jericho] Jake, along with his mother reflect on the hardships of life after the bombs. A nice little fic about mother and son
Misc. Tv Shows - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,721 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-6-07 - Complete
14. Heart of Winter 2 reviews
[Jericho] What I thought happened from the point where the truck is taken off Jake, on. So.. all the stuff you didn't see happen, and then I hope to continue on to Stanley and then others, but I might need some reviews for that :
Misc. Tv Shows - Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,040 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-16-07
15. Powerless » reviews
Another darn kidnapping story. Greg centered.. read and review if ya can. K so, its done now. Thanks to everyone who has stayed with it and didn't send ciberknives at me for taking so long to update.
CSI - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 45,227 - Reviews: 152 - Updated: 2-23-07 - Published: 11-28-06 - Greg S. - Complete
16. Getting Out » reviews
Its been done before, just trying out my writing style. Pretty much, Sara and Greg are in a dangerous situation and one or both will be getting hurt I'm sure. I plan to have a more unique story out soon, but this is just an idea of how I write.
CSI - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 9 - Words: 12,985 - Reviews: 36 - Updated: 10-9-06 - Published: 9-15-06 - Greg S. & Sara S.
17. Don't Always Assume » reviews
Everyone is tired, especially Greg. He is finally getting to go home, but never makes it there. The team assumes the worst. But are they right? Only a little angst and there will be some humor here and there. COMPLETE! COMMENT PLLLEASE!
CSI - Rated: K - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,897 - Reviews: 43 - Updated: 7-18-06 - Published: 6-27-06 - Greg S. - Complete
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