Alright, so, here we go.
Name: Vee
Age: Older than I look. (That really comes in handy sometimes...)
Location: East Coast
Eyes: One brown, one green, which is weird since my mom has brown eyes and my dad has green eyes...
Hair color: Dark brown
Highlights?: Yes
Personality: Sorta a cross between mostly silent and out going at times...it'll take too long to explain...
Favorite books: Maximum Ride 1, 2, & 3, Twilight 1, 2, & 3, Harry Potter Series
Current Stories:
Dying for Love (Max is horribly injured and wants to tell Fang her true feelings before something terrible happens. Two-shot/Complete): Not too happy with this one, but it was my first. It would have been better off as a two-shot...Read it if you like.
Dead or Alive (Max. The word hurt so much to think, much less to say, or even write. But it was still there even though she wasnt (Sequel to Dying for Love/Complete)): Don't waste your time. Not pleased at all with this one. I can't stand it being up here anymore, but I can't bring myself to delete months of hard work.
What You Want (Max is back from the dead! Ari is dead and life is good. But the flock has desicions to make that could change their lives forever - good or bad(Sequel to Dead or Alive/Complete)): Re: Above
Because of You (Max writes and plays a song on how Jeb betrayed them and how she wishes she could give the flcok what they want.(One-shot/songfic/complete)): One of my better works. A little sketchy, but definately semi-dark. I sorta like it. Read it if you want.
MR3:Destiny (The test has been issued, and the flock has to pay the price. Losing Max. After her memory is wiped, will the flock ever find her? If they do, will they ever get her memory back?(In progress)): My first book. Wow. I hate it right now though. It could have been so much better, but I screwed it up in the early days. Read it anyway. Its decent. I can't say its content is though... -ducks under piano, then has sudden flashback of Dead or Alive-
She Didnt Even Have To Say It ('I am so sorry Max.' Dr. Martinez said. She didnt even have to say the rest. I already knew the truth.(Three shot/Complete)): I have got to say, that this is my best, beyond best, work that I have ever done. I am very proud of it and plan to take it a bit further in the days following Destiny's completion. READ THIS ONE!!
Rest in Peace, My Maximum Ride (This is an alternate ending to MR3: Destiny. What would have happened if Max hadn't woken up from her coma? Continues after Chapter 7. (Alternate Ending to Destiny/One-shot/Complete)): Meh. Definately depressing. I can promise you that much.
New Year's Revolutions (Set 5 years after SOF. Its New Years Eve, and everyone's got a resolution...including Fang.(Oneshot/FaxNudgy/Complete)): I like this one. Not half bad, if I may say so myself.
Favorite Pairings:
Maximum Ride -- FangMax
Harry Potter -- HarryHermione
Twilight -- EdwardBella
Alright, lately, fanfiction has just been getting worse and worse. I know I'm going to contradict myself here, but if I could change Destiny without screwing over the plotline, I would.
Point 1: omg, u, y, waste/waist. Grammar is important. Without grammar, human civilization would not have progressed as far as it has now. Unfortunately, we are starting to regress. No. Chatspeak. IT. IS. EVIL. So stop.
Point 2: Run-on sentences that turn into paragraphs that turn into chapters that turn into stories that turn into total crap are not cool so stop doing it. See what I did there? Run on. So stop that too.
Point 3: Fang will not return to Lissa and Max will not return to Sam. Jesus, it was one part of the book and now that they SAW THEIR WINGS, I doubt the flock will be going anywhere near West Virginia for a LONG time.
Point 4: Max and Fang will not blurt out, "I love you." If you haven't realized by now, Fang is very unemotional, and Max doesn't 'do that'. It's gotta be subtle. Especially continuations on book three. Its going to be awkward. Their relationhip is on the rocks still . They're just happy to be a flock again. They have to MAKE-UP first before they MAKE-OUT. Cough.
Point 5: Lately, there have been alot of 'Max getting asked to dances and wearing frilly pink dresses and high heels and dancing the night away' stories. I. HATE. THEM. Seriously. Max doesn't even wear make-up, or even skirts for that matter. Where in the WORLD do you get her going to a dance. Unrealistic.
Point 6: I suddenly forgot my point six. It was a good one too. Oh! Fiction. Fan. I am a fan of a fiction book. It was already previously written with all characters and ideas. So don't insert your own OC and make him/her a major character. If you want, get a fiction press account. I hate it when people make their own OC and suddenly become a love interest of Iggy or Max or Fang. They're suddenly MAJOR characters and practically run the entire story. No. Don't do this anymore. I am a fan of Maximum Ride, which is why I come to FANFICTION to read stories of people with similar stories. I'm tired of people's own stories. T-I-R-E-D. If its an AU, that's okay. But I'm tired of major, and I mean MAJOR OCs. I would kill off all of them if I could. And I may just write a parody on them. Just because I hate them so much.
Point 7: Stay. In. Character. (I'm really starting to like. these. things. It emphasizes my point.) I can't tell you how many stories I stop reading right in the middle because Fang slaps Max or something. THAT WON'T HAPPEN. Yeah, he shoved her BACK, but that's not a SLAP. Jeez. Its not all that hard just to stay in the same vicinity of 'quietness'. I know I'm not stop on -- no one is -- but for the love of God, Fang will not go around hugging trees and Max won't go and kick Angel. Get it right. Unless it's a parody. Which I've been getting sick of. Too many.
Point 8: I hate it when people say, "That was the longest speech any of us had ever heard Fang utter." JP has said it twice now, once in a relatively stupid area, since he said about 10 words, when the previous chapter he had delivered a paragraph-lenth speech. Don't even type those words anymore. I can't stand them. If I read them one more time, I will flame your fanfiction to Hell.
Point 9: I know I did this in mine, but Hillary is right. The dictionary thing is so not happening. I even dared to read the dictionary just to prove her wrong because I felt she was flaming my story, but I finally put down my Webster's and admitted defeat. She's right, and I can't help that. It's just SO BORING. You try reading the dictionary. I got to E before my eyes fell out.
Point 10: A hotel will never have 'only three rooms left' in their building. Never. It just doesn't happen. Again, if I could change Destiny without screwing over the plotline, I would. But, unfortunately, I can't. So I have to deal and admit my defeat. But hotels don't only have three rooms left. Come on. Go to a local hotel and ask them how many times they've been booked. I'm willing to bet its a lowly 2, if even.
Point 11: I know most of my points sound similar to Hillary's, but I'm writing about what annoys me. I just happen to sorta steal some. Heh. "I suck at summaries" really pisses me off. I won't read it if you do that. I won't. I refuse to.
Point 12: If you can help it, put up a hiatus or say you're discontinuing a story in the summary. I can't tell you how many times I start reading a story and then it just...ends. No conclusion, but it just stops, and there hasnt been an update in a year or something. If it has a lot of chapters, I figure the author would want to come back and finish their hard work (I'm apparently wrong. I'm I the only one who would kill myself if I didn't finish Destiny?).
PS. -- Please stop asking me to read your stories. If I like them, I'll read and review them. But I'm tired of reading crap-worthy stories and then getting yelled at because I gave you a bad review. Accept critisism. It's your best friend. Critisism will become something you'll love, because, -- shock! -- it'll get you more reviewers. I know I go for stories that have a high amount of reviews.
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