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Tory Carmichael
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since: 07-27-06, id: 1101234, Profile edited: 03-22-08
country: Australia
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Author has written 10 stories for Beyblade.

Real name: Shari Gillies
DOB: 15 December 1990, I'm 17
Email: gangsta_ch1ck@hotmail.com
Gothic/Emo/Punk

I am a writer and always have been, since as early as I can remember. Before I put the pen to paper, I'd spin stories of grandeaur that would cause people to think I was loose in the head. I put into words the most horrible nightmares imaginable. The most spine chilling thoughts. The most blood curdling fantasies. And it all comes from my sick little head. Writing isn't a hobby to me, it is my life, my reason for living. I strive to write books that will make you scared to sleep at night, for the fear of every little knock, creek and crack you may hear. You may not know what goes bump in the night but after reading some of my original stories, ideas will come spinning into your mind one by one until you are cowering beneath the covers of your bed sheets.

However, the stories that I write on this site is not my best, even though it had been at the time. Since I first started writing on here, everything from my writing, to my sick and morbidly twisted ideas has become sinsterly better. Also, not all of my stories are completely terror-inflicting, they also possess some threads of dark comedy, angst and passionate romance.

My OC's!
Shana(Shot Gun)(Bad Omens)
Max's girlfriend, long brown hair, blue eyes, 5'3" tall, thin. She has a bubbly personality and is like Max. In Bad Omens, Omen uses her to ensure that no one alerts the police that he is alive. If anyone went to the police, Omen promised to torture and kill Shana.

Kevin Baxter(Amity and Discord)
Hilary's ex-boyfriend, tall, strong, bad guy, violent, possessive, controlling, he and another person are after Kai, red-orange hair, manipulative, dark brown eyes.

Omen "Stevens" (Killer Camp)(Bad Omens)
Killed Kenny. Evil teenaged murderer, has a body built like Kai's except he's an inch taller, black hair which glints red in the sunlight, red eyes and he is tall. Enjoys torturing and killing other people as a hobby. Has no conscience and doesn't care about any one, not even himself. He's cocky, has dark eyelids(like an emo... a hot emo), he is powerful, has a sadistic/morbid/sinister humour, good fighter, excellent hunter and trap-setter, skillful with knives, top rank killer. He is somewhat erractic and unpredictable, you can never anticipate what he's thinking. He laughs in the face of danger and is reckless, he has no fear of death. He and Kai met in Juvenile Hall after Kai was busted for car jacking and joy riding and Omen was charged with the murder of a SWAT officer. Omen and Kai got into a fight and Kai lost all of his memories of Omen and the month he spent in Juvenile Hall.
In Bad Omens, he comes back but has amnesia from his previous fight with Kai. Has targeted all of Kai's friends and is torturing them one by one. He is being controlled by Boris and Voltaire and is punished if he doesn't do as commanded. He plans to kill Boris and Voltaire then finish off Kai. He unintentionally falls in love with Kyata Taiko.

Kiana Hiwatari(Vampyric Blood Lust)
Kai's twin sister. She has midnight blue hair with a few slate hightlights, indigo eyes, she usually wears a black singlet, jeans and a short sleeved black jacket. Her boyfriend is Tala Valkov. She and Kai lived with their adopted mother Helen until her drunk boyfriend Craige came home and made a move on Kiana whilst Helen was asleep, hit her and got into a huge fight with Kai. Kiana is a nice person, usually bubbly and high spirited. Not a very good fighter like her brother and is much smaller than him(5'3").

Hinata Kageruku(Sweet Revenge)
She is one of the people at Balkov Abbey with Kai and Tala. She has dark brown hair and soft lilac eyes. 5'4" tall. When her, Kai, Tala and Hinata's older brother Ryan try to escape, Hinata is captured and Kai and Tala are forced to leave her behind. Hinata (because she was only eight years old at the time) reguarded this as a betrail and was taken back to the abbey where she was tortured and tormented for the next eight years of her life. She became hollow and the hatred and feelings of betrail she feels for Tala and Kai continued to grow. When Boris orders her to kill them, she welcomes the opportunity for pay back, to make them suffer like she did.

Ryan Kageruku(Sweet Revenge)
Ryan is Hinata's older brother by two years. He is 18 years old and has been at Balkov Abbey since he was 3. He has black hair thats cut short but longer fringe. He has ice-blue eyes. 6'2" tall. When he, Hinata, Kai and Tala tried to escape, he created a distraction so that Kai and Tala could get his sister out of the abbey, knowing full well he would be recaptured. He is not as hollow as Hinata but also has a burning hatred for Kai and Tala. He was also sent to kill them with his sister.

Trixie Mathers(Bad Omens)
Trixie is one of Hilary's best friends and is one of the prettiest girls at their school. She is a dark-skinned girl with a lot of street attitude and shares a mutual hatred with Kai. She considers him an ass-hole and Kai considers her a more vain and bitchy version of Tyson. She is thin, tall, has long black hair which is usually braided and has honey coloured eyes. She is a street dancer(as in Urban Hip Hop) and doesn't take shit from anyone. Unfortunatly, she hangs out with Hilary who is always around Kai, so in Omen's mind, they are friends. So she too is targeted in Omen's murderous game for revenge against Kai.

Zane Dawson(Bad Omens)
Zane is a bad boy punk with short, spiked black hair and red tips with stormy grey eyes. He is tall and strong and is Omen's best friend. He soon becomes aware of Omen's dark past and strangely enough doesn't care that his best friend is a murderer. His father is a rapist and his mother considers him a mistake and hates him. Zane spends little to no time at home because when he is there, he is bashed by his father and even though he fights back and wins half the fights, he never comes out unscathed and even if he has broken a bone, his parents don't care and don't bother taking him to the hospital/doctors clinic. Like Omen he isn't prejudice... he hates everyone equally, and he doesn't really care what happens to him(he doesnt care if he dies-he has no will to live but wants to for the sake of it). He becomes a great help to Omen in his mission which is bad news for Kai, Hilary and the others.

Kyata Taiko(Bad Omens)
Small emo girl. Long black hair, hazel eyes, 5"1. Normally quiet but has a wild side. Loves Omen. Doesn't pick un-necessary fights and doesn't antagonise/tease. She has powder white skin and is pretty. Is the only person who can see the softer side to Omen, even though it is tiny(Hitler had more of a heart..) Friends with Omen and Zane and is targeted by Boris who thinks she's extremely attractive for a 16 year old. She is unaware that Omen is a mass murderer.

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1. A New Game » reviews
Kai felt his back touch the wall as he stared at the murderer before him. A deadly grin ran across his face and his red eyes glittered as blood dripped from his black hair. "I told you Kai. There are no second chances in this game," GRAPHIC TORTURE KaiHil
Beyblade - Fiction Rated: M - English - Suspense/Horror - Chapters: 2 - Words: 10,518 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 9-20-08 - Published: 7-13-08
2. Bad Omens » reviews
Omen killed Kenny and wont stop til he's finished off the rest of Kai's friends. Now that Boris is with Omen it will be near impossible to beat him. can Kai save his friends lives or will Omen kill them like he promised? violence, death, language KH TalOc
Complete - Beyblade - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Drama - Chapters: 29 - Words: 111,091 - Reviews: 351 - Updated: 6-19-08 - Published: 12-15-06
3. The Labyrinth » reviews
They tear through the twisting labyrinth, unable to escape and constantly being hunted. Escape? Heh heh, only if they can survive. They're my prey now, and they'll die in pools of blood. - Don't read if like happy endings. KaixHil TyxHil-friendship 2shot
Complete - Beyblade - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 12,136 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 4-25-08 - Published: 4-25-08
4. In the Dead of the Night » reviews
Welcome to perfection. Welcome to the life of a vampire my son,' she whispered. Kai suddenly felt an intense pain puncture the side of his neck and his world misted over in a misty cloud of death. Now that Kai is turned... no one will survive. KaiHil
Beyblade - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 7 - Words: 21,719 - Reviews: 70 - Updated: 4-9-08 - Published: 9-9-06
5. Amity and Discord » reviews
Hilary's boyfriend Kevin has proven himself to be dangerous, with no intention of letting Hilary out of his grasp. Kai is detirmined to protect her so Kevin can't hurt her again, but will Kevin prove too much for Kai to handle?
Beyblade - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 17,444 - Reviews: 107 - Updated: 10-16-07 - Published: 8-15-06
6. Shot Gun » reviews
Hilary suddenly brought her clenched up and punched him hard in the cheek above his triangular cobalt tattoos. Kai didn’t even flinch.Do it again if it makes you feel better, he said quietly... what else would you do if your parents were just murdered?
Beyblade - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 13 - Words: 20,904 - Reviews: 113 - Updated: 7-8-07 - Published: 7-31-06
7. Undead Enemies » reviews
Kai and Tala left for Russia to discover why their parents were murdered. Four months later the GRev team find out that the two boys were kidnapped the moment they landed in Russia. The GRev fly over to save their friends from the torture they're sufferin
Beyblade - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 28,929 - Reviews: 101 - Updated: 7-8-07 - Published: 8-6-06
8. Idiot reviews
When Hilary storms off at night after another fight with Tyson, she finds herself in a dangerous situation with worse people. Will anyone help her after she called Tyson a pig headed ape and called Kai an ass hole? KaiHil ONESHOT.
Complete - Beyblade - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,312 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 12-24-06 - Published: 12-24-06
9. Killer camp » reviews
Kenny let out a small terrified whimper and closed his eyes tightly. Omen laughed and kneeled in front of Kenny, smirking. 'Don't worry Kenny! I'm not going to kill you yet! But don't worry, I wont let you suffer too long.' [Rated for Death and violence]
Complete - Beyblade - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror - Chapters: 20 - Words: 43,121 - Reviews: 213 - Updated: 12-14-06 - Published: 8-22-06
10. Sweet Revenge » reviews
Why cant they remember her? Why can't Kai and Tala remember the girl? Why cant they remember the girl that ment so much to them in the abbey? What did they do to make her want to kill them? TalOc KaiHil
Beyblade - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,972 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 11-12-06 - Published: 11-7-06
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